strange experience.
It's not a bad game but it's ages from being good.
What i didn't liked:
- from the get go Dev introduces a TON of characters. It will mean either that most of them won't be getting any content for years or content will be equally spread so the main story will be progressing slowly, but i bet both. Seriously, don't bity more than you (obviously) can swallow, stick to 3-6 characters.
-Writing is bad. Visuals will keep this game on the surface but dialog and encounters will drag it down. You really should consider to find a redactor.
And as others mentioned - SHOW, DON'T TELL.
- Clichés. They look so cheap and mediocre, why don't you try to be a bit creative? Again we have naive little sister and mean big sister, again mc have a horse dick, again every woman you meet want to have sex with you with zero effort from the player, again we play as an 20 y.o. incel edgelord in a body of 40 y.o. jock, etc. I mean tropes are called tropes because they work, sure, but really? That is where you decided to put time and effort? Disappointment.
- References, references, references. Humor in games is a good tool if you use it in the right time and place. But if you are going pun after pun mixed with easter eggs and references to modern media all the way it's just overwhelming to see.
-Game also have redundant mechanics of "push pointless button like open eyes or knock the door to progress the scene". Like, what's the point of that ? Player have no other choice but to push it one button, in that case you can just remove it and NOTHING will change at all.
Also mechanic with the need to click an eye icon to see extra images - just why? What player wouldn't like to see all the possible images? it's also not very handy if you use autoforward (i don't but still)
- Minor one - if the Character can't see something there for the player also shouldn't be able to see it. So all the scenes that takes place without MC present are not helping the narrative, you just wasting your time on characters and events we don't care about. Like that armored column of guys who are chasing us - why do we need to know what they are talking about if MC isn't present? The answer is we don't.
TLDR Pretentious game with nice visuals but narrative, dialogue and setting are currently dragging it down. It's not by any means unsavable YET, but if Dev won't tone down his ambitions and put work in fixing what still can be fixed it's safe to say that we are looking at but another "abandoned after5-6 updates" project.