VN Ren'Py The last picture [v1.0.3] [Boby Boo]

[MrBenny]

It would help if instead of an empty criticism, you accompany it with what you don't like or what is wrong, in order to have feedback with which to improve

FYI, the reason for all the negative comments, many players have already seen this recently before where a developer used a female face asset, and then tried to change it into a baby faced young male. And out of all those recently made titles using this method, later ended up scraping their MC and used a real male asset instead. As they realized their MC choice had resulted in a loss of potential momentum with their fan-base growth (and most likely resulted lost potential revenues with the fans that might have subbed their work).

But ultimately this is your story, but consider many people here have a lot of experience and knowledge with regards to what can work in the AVN industry. As some content works well together, and some just doesn't mix well together (harem and NTR as an example). And it's best to spend some time and review how some of the other successful titles did so well with their content (content presentation, marketing, etc.).

One title comes to mind from a first time developer...Grandmas House which is a good harem title, and has no animations but has over 1600+ paid subs.

Spoiler: A good example Genre Section...

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Anyways wishing you great success with your future endeavour.

Regards.

 

[Bucketbot89]

FYI, the reason for all the negative comments, many players have already seen this recently before where a developer used a female face asset, and then tried to change it into a baby faced young male.

Did this dev actually do this? No wonder the MC looks like a lesbian. His awful haircut didn't help.

 

[consumptionist]

this game makes no sense at all.
it starts with a choice of language. there is a spanish flag for spanish, a russian flag for russian and an american flag for american.
i selected the russian flag and the language is indeed russian.
then i went back and selected the spanish flag and hey presto.
finally i selected the american flag and got english instead

where are the acronyms??? the text was readable! m8 dis sum

 

[hakulaku97]

ah yes, killing your father and fucking your mom after, a classic
dev sigmund freud would be proud of you!
he will stare right into your soul and judge you for it...

 

[DERAX12345]

Looks awesome ignore the haters!

 

[Boby Boo]

FYI, the reason for all the negative comments, many players have already seen this recently before where a developer used a female face asset, and then tried to change it into a baby faced young male. And out of all those recently made titles using this method, later ended up scraping their MC and used a real male asset instead. As they realized their MC choice had resulted in a loss of potential momentum with their fan-base growth (and most likely resulted lost potential revenues with the fans that might have subbed their work).

But ultimately this is your story, but consider many people here have a lot of experience and knowledge with regards to what can work in the AVN industry. As some content works well together, and some just doesn't mix well together (harem and NTR as an example). And it's best to spend some time and review how some of the other successful titles did so well with their content (content presentation, marketing, etc.).

One title comes to mind from a first time developer...Grandmas House which is a good harem title, and has no animations but has over 1600+ paid subs.

Spoiler: A good example Genre Section...

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Anyways wishing you great success with your future endeavour.

Regards.

I'll take note of what was described in the spoiler.

About the MC — yeah, maybe he's not the most masculine guy in the room, but he doesn't look like my girlfriend either hahhaha. If I had to say something, I'd say he's androgynous leaning towards masculine (an 18-year-old young man, which is also how the asset I used for the MC is marketed).

I get that, out of habit, we tend to associate 18-year-old guys in visual novels with super developed bodies and faces — same as what happens in comedy movies (like American Pie, Scary Movie, etc.). But I don't know, to me he looks the way he's supposed to: a young adult who doesn’t look like he has two families and three jobs xd

I'll drop a few images here.

 

[Boby Boo]

ah yes, killing your father and fucking your mom after, a classic
dev sigmund freud would be proud of you!
he will stare right into your soul and judge you for it...
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As for the whole mom thing...

 

[JoeTheMC84]

Mc looks fine to me. Haven’t played it yet, because I like to wait before jumping in to any new story, but he doesn’t look terrible, and as long as he doesn’t look like a grotesque monster then I’m way more concerned about his personality than I am about his looks… and even a grotesque monster might be an okay Mc in the right story,

 

[Boby Boo]

this game makes no sense at all.
it starts with a choice of language. there is a spanish flag for spanish, a russian flag for russian and an american flag for american.
i selected the russian flag and the language is indeed russian.
then i went back and selected the spanish flag and hey presto.
finally i selected the american flag and got english instead

where are the acronyms??? the text was readable! m8 dis sum

There are people who pull the door to open it, even when there’s a sign that says push hahaha. Because of people like that, I prefer to make things super obvious and not use acronyms.
Sorry for thinking about the diversity of people on our planet

 

[Ali ibn Hassan]

The last picture

" a young man pushed to the edge "

Thnks fr shrng

 

[Chimba]

Right now it is materially impossible, my pc is not the best in the world and that would mean wasting a lot of time rendering similar scenes, but omitting content and even it is not practical thinking about it, it is impossible to make different variables of an animation trying to omit specific fetishes because there will be those who do not like different things haha. .. that would be logical and affordable at this time, would be to add in the settings menu an option, in which in each scene of the game you can choose to skip the content to zone without risk and whoever has the need to maybe skip a scene, can do it, and whoever wants to enjoy the full experience, whoever does not activate that option and so everyone is happy.

If the option is simply to "skip the scene," then I would recommend not bothering with that since it doesn't change anything.

That aside, does the player have any control over the story or which characters the MC is interested in? Or is this just a KN without the tag?

Thanks.

 

[kwiatos]

snif snif snif I smell
Vilkas Creative

 

[Boby Boo]

If the option is simply to "skip the scene," then I would recommend not bothering with that since it doesn't change anything.

That aside, does the player have any control over the story or which characters the MC is interested in? Or is this just a KN without the tag?

Thanks.

Yes, throughout the game there will be choices and they will influence the plot and the relationship with the characters

 

[Saint Blackmoor]

snif snif snif I smell
Vilkas Creative

snif snif snif I smell

 

[xmilteach]

+1

 

[goulet1995]

Right now it is materially impossible, my pc is not the best in the world and that would mean wasting a lot of time rendering similar scenes, but omitting content and even it is not practical thinking about it, it is impossible to make different variables of an animation trying to omit specific fetishes because there will be those who do not like different things haha. .. that would be logical and affordable at this time, would be to add in the settings menu an option, in which in each scene of the game you can choose to skip the content to zone without risk and whoever has the need to maybe skip a scene, can do it, and whoever wants to enjoy the full experience, whoever does not activate that option and so everyone is happy.

as far as im concerned this skip option changes nothing as described the scene happens but i just dont see it it still affects how i view certain characters and there relationships with the mc for me unless i can fully avoid that typeof content i would likely skip the game

 

[skyrfen]

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[willly423]

mc looks like a femboy.

lol wasnt going to say anything but weird to me also,he has womans face,white body and black dudes hair,surprised the wokie community police arent screaming ha ha

 

[hakulaku97]

The last picture [v1.0.3]
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[Nadira]

But where is Lerd0?

Probably crying in the shower...