VN Ren'Py The Last Star Walker [Ch.3] [Veluxa]

[Kyle Randall]

Man... i gotta tell you, i think this was too much for me. I found a really interesting concept in this game but that scene, whitout being able to do nothing was too much. I was hoping that he would switch with his alter ego and beat them all to death or something. That's what i've been waiting for, since i played the first version. All of this for what ? for giving the MC a reason?? brother, i would've killed all of them for much less, if you've given me the chance!!!!
i really like the game but i think this was too much, call me weak if you want but this went too damn bad too fast... this doesn't count simply as violence, to me... if only it was just in the lore, maybe i could oversee. but putting me in there... fuck bro. i'll try playing a little more, but if it keeps going like that, i'll drop it off and pray to never rememeber this game again..

 

[ThisKmavel]

It's a long time I have seen such a narrative mess and I have seen a lot of garbage on this platfom. The thing what especially hurts, is that this game has really good potential, but messes up in the execussion. Surprisingly the smut scenes, especially the futa on male scenes, are well written - dirty talk is on point plus great visuals. Everything else, not so much.

 

[Kyle Randall]

Man... i gotta tell you, i think this was too much for me. I found a really interesting concept in this game but that scene, whitout being able to do nothing was too much. I was hoping that he would switch with his alter ego and beat them all to death or something. That's what i've been waiting for, since i played the first version. All of this for what ? for giving the MC a reason?? brother, i would've killed all of them for much less, if you've given me the chance!!!!
i really like the game but i think this was too much, call me weak if you want but this went too damn bad too fast... this doesn't count simply as violence, to me... if only it was just in the lore, maybe i could oversee. but putting me in there... fuck bro. i'll try playing a little more, but if it keeps going like that, i'll drop it off and pray to never rememeber this game again..

Yeah, okay, i'm out. The plot threw me off too much and if there was going to be a miracle to change it (like time travel or some shit), the game would've presented already. And for a game with THIS QUALITY of lewds, to threw me off bcs of narrative like this, it tells a lot.
The worse thing is not only that the story it pretty infuriating, up to the point where i gave up. It's that is just Awfully written. It doesn't get anywhere, doesn't explain anything, just keeps spitting aleatory information, more and more characters, doesn't even have a wiki so you can keep up.
Damn man, it pains me a lot to drop this game, i was so anxious for more, had so much expectation... But maybe it's for the best that i was disappointed so early in the game. Curse the day that i chose to download it...

 

[Kyle Randall]

if i knew that there was going to be NTR in this game, i would never have downloaded it. Doesnt even have the 'Rape' tag in it.

 

[carmafia]

Milf lactation

 

[walrus13]

People ask where is the story going? I can't tell where this has already been, never mind what is next... its too jumpy without explaining anything and i actually read everything to try and understand what happened

 

[cover456]

why the fuck did the dev think it was a good idea to give the doctor the likeness of a pedo?

 

[Futa_Buddy]

Futa on male is pretty rare, so it's nice to see it here... but man that story is a mess...

 

[Scyths]

I tried this game yesterday, never played it before the rework so I didn't bother with the old version and only played the reworked one. I gotta tell you though, it's all over the place. Both story, main character and scenes. I don't understand why we even have to choose if we want to be more dominant or submissive at the very beginning if that choice is never offered to us afterwards, especially during sex scenes. And no I don't consider "Would you like to be 100% submissive or skip the whole sex scene entirely thus miss critical story since there is no alternative whatsoever" to be a real choice.

 

[DarkFlame44]

So before I try, is there any advantage to downloading the pre rework version over the current version?

 

[estrada777]

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[Fazed]

Yep, its still a mess narrative and I have no idea wtf is going on...but I am conflicted. I like futa, and with the introduction of an alter MC I was fine with the other MC being a bitch to handle that kind of content. Even as the bitch MC tho there is an option to just leave the scene. NGL I turned my brain off and just watched the scenes for what they are and it was hot. All of them. But thats about where the positives end for me.

Greater care needs to be added to ensure path separation.

Using the same renders that implies the MC was "Dolled up" anyway isnt gonna fly. Yes the scene with the wife was presented with different dialogue that indicated the MC got there earlier because of declining the scene with Nyx but he still looked like he had on some makeup. Its an inconsistency.

Also turning off "feminization" only skips the process and MC still ends up as a doll in the scene with all the extras. Thats still feminization dude.

Biggest issue is the story, and respecting player choice. The next issue is the reuse of renders in alternate paths. It gets messy and can play into the first issue. I know its a time constraint to make different renders but you have to be on point with the details.

Veluxa

one more thing, just personal preference but if you are gonna do sissy femboy, I'd rather it be 90%-100% than awkwardly half assed. The middling in between look creeps me out. That said the MC looked better in that regard later in this update than in the earlier frames at the beginning of the game.

 

[FrapFrapper]

Confusing as fuck story and lack of consistency with MC being smart nerd, to bully victim, vigilante, to sissy? Writing was kinda bad that I ended up skipping much of it since it felt so boring to read much beyond the first part and around choices.

I also kept freezing up around the latter middle part of the strip club so I just inch forward with saves and tried to speed past the scenes with skipping unseen text option to get me by.

The flip between modern scifi and medieval fantasty was really working against the finer aesthetics of the cyberpunk part of the game setting. I think the Nava or whatever parts should all be dropped or put in a separate game.

Sex scenes and the quality renders were pretty good overall, bit annoyed at the lack of any real meaningful choices to impact the scenes beyond skip the scenes or don't.

 

[fixions]

Super exciting characters and scenes, love the futadom, not a big fan of sissification but sadly despite it being presented as a choice, it's not really at this point. The story, although intriguing, is somewhat confusing to follow. Also not a huge fan of the Doc and Trump references personally. But don't want to come off negative, because I'm very excited to see more.

 

[LonerPrime]

After playing this for a good 45 minutes, I have decided to shelve this. I know what I'm about to state has been stated countless times in this thread, but instead of leaving a review that tanks the ratings further, here is my short take on the entire thing:

I can't figure it out. That's it. I can't seem to figure out what my MC is. Is he a smart person? Is he a ideologist? Is he a sci-fi protag or a fantasy hero? Or perhaps.. is he just a normal guy with sissy fantasies lurking in the shadows? Seriously though, my strike zone when it comes to fetishes is pretty wide and I can tolerate most kinks, but what I do struggle with is trying to piece together a story that has puzzle pieces that don't even match.

Ultimately I guess I'll just wait for this one to finish before I restart again- that is if that happens. Hopefully it does as I do not wish any project to die midway. At least then it might just make sense. On the positives, the sex scenes are well written, though for some reason futa stuff is pretty heavy, but I'm not complaining. Here is to hoping it is not all domination stuff only in the long run and we can get more vivid focus on other genres as well.

 

[johnmnf692]

As many others have noted the game lacks a lot in the context department. For the most part it's not a big deal, but it really leaves the MC's motivations and backstory as a blank spot. Who are Eve and Iris? What are their relationships with the MC? Why did the MC want to join the Legion?

I appreciate that the futa and futadom content are both avoidable. This game has a lot of potential, but it desperately needs to expand on the relationships between the MC and those around him.

 

[johnmnf692]

Man... i gotta tell you, i think this was too much for me. I found a really interesting concept in this game but that scene, whitout being able to do nothing was too much. I was hoping that he would switch with his alter ego and beat them all to death or something. That's what i've been waiting for, since i played the first version. All of this for what ? for giving the MC a reason?? brother, i would've killed all of them for much less, if you've given me the chance!!!!
i really like the game but i think this was too much, call me weak if you want but this went too damn bad too fast... this doesn't count simply as violence, to me... if only it was just in the lore, maybe i could oversee. but putting me in there... fuck bro. i'll try playing a little more, but if it keeps going like that, i'll drop it off and pray to never rememeber this game again..

if i knew that there was going to be NTR in this game, i would never have downloaded it. Doesnt even have the 'Rape' tag in it.

Dude, I am one of the most anti-NTR people you will find, but this game does not have NTR. A non-LI side character getting raped offscreen is not NTR.

 

[Scotsman1989]

3 things I'm hoping for in this avn, simply because I feel this has incredible potential.....

#1:- much, MUCH more futadom content with Mommy Nyxi!!!!! She is easily my number 1 fave here.

#2:- The chance to save Grace from M.A.I.D, and help her recover from that trauma.
Or even better, be able to go back in time to kill those fucking rapists and prevent that tragedy from ever happening.

#3:- thanks to the harem tag, I'm hoping that the MC brings a lasting peace between both worlds and has a loving harem with beauties from both worlds helping him with that.

Aye, I agree the story is all over the place, but it is still early days.
Maybe things will come together and start making more sense in future updates.

 

[blacklight47]

3 things I'm hoping for in this avn, simply because I feel this has incredible potential.....

#1:- much, MUCH more futadom content with Mommy Nyxi!!!!! She is easily my number 1 fave here.

#2:- The chance to save Grace from M.A.I.D, and help her recover from that trauma.
Or even better, be able to go back in time to kill those fucking rapists and prevent that tragedy from ever happening.

#3:- thanks to the harem tag, I'm hoping that the MC brings a lasting peace between both worlds and has a loving harem with beauties from both worlds helping him with that.

Aye, I agree the story is all over the place, but it is still early days.
Maybe things will come together and start making more sense in future updates.

Grace should become a reverse rapist that would be new

 

[Azraelith]

Futa on male is pretty rare, so it's nice to see it here... but man that story is a mess...

Except it's not at all. Male on Futa is rarer.