So far, the story looks promising. Shriya from the FDA - I bet the dev has never seen a government employee though, lol
Oh I have, and that's part of the joke. I try to be somewhat realistic in my game, but I also have fun and Shriya is NOT realistic in the slightest. From her looks and attire to her very flirtatious nature. She is just fun. Similar to what I did with the two workers at the sex clinic in Chapter 2. I find it refreshing to lighten up the mood sometimes.
In both those cases, I did not originally write them to be comedy. The sex clinic was going to be a serious scene, but as I was rendering it, I didn't like it. Too heavy. So I decided to make it fun and whimsical. I changed all the colors and put in light-hearted music. And then I completely re-wrote the dialogue and made the two workers fight like an old married couple. I even made Brenda, the sex-crazed chick, a funny character. Brenda just might make another appearance in Chapter 4...
Shriya was originally a serious person from the FDA. Someone to be scared of. But since this is an adult VN I thought, let's just make her hot and behave wildly different than expected. I'm so happy that I changed both those scenes on a whim.