VN Ren'Py The Libido Enigma [Ch.7] [broiler_x]

[broiler_x]

Nope, she started in college and tells us about all her clients. I'm out.

Thanks, all the best! I hope you find what you are looking for.

 

[rooney10]

The shoes were a last second decision and I'm so glad I decided to go that way!

Sexy shoes good, thigh high fuck me boots...BETTER!

 

[hysepReC]

Avoiding spoilers, but Brooke's night job actually is hugely involved with the main biotech storyline. I can't say more, but there is specific reason for her second career. I didn't just do it for shock value. Chapter Three will be very revealing, and you will see a new Brooke and she will change A LOT. Just like Isabella is clearly changing. I like dynamic characters. But again, I also totally agree with being protective of your love interests. Just stay tuned and I think you will like where this is going....

One other thing to keep in mind is unlike other VN's, these characters are not spring chickens. Isabella was a University professor and started this biotech company 10 years ago, so she is at least 36. (likely older). So her, with her looks, at her age, still being a virgin? Impossible. Most VN's feature a MC that is somewhere between 18-22. Not here. So they do have history. Emily is 23 and Brooke is 28, but the rest are all 30's or older. So yeah, some history. But also room for discovery and change.

I have tried to put a lot of heart into my game, and I hope the audience can see that.

Personally, I don't care if a LI is a virgin or not but there is a big difference between a woman who has slept with a few guys and a literal sex worker. I'm not sure how many LIs are in this game but based on the comments in this thread there's an escort, a town bicycle and an ex-gf that cheated on the MC? Not exactly a stellar collection of LIs, is it? None of them sound appealing to me.

 

[sunqian3000]

good new game

 

[gregers]

Lack of choice in sex scenes aside, the MC jumping from finding out one of his colleagues is an escort to immediately hiring said escort under a false name makes him come off as the worst kind of creep as well.

 

[Raziel_8]

I think you will like Chapter 3. Also there will be a point where you can punish Brooke for her past and dismiss her, if that's what you want. She definitely evolves with the game and she has a great heart... We all make mistakes.

Ok, Brooke's escort job will be important to the story.
But the MC already figured out her secret, he has the online side with her infos, the point is, why are we forced to pay her 5k and fuck her ? I mean, we could just have confronted her next day at work or after work...

Also while i have no interest to punish her for being an escort (i mean, why ? They were just coworkers which barely spoke with each other), dismissing for her being an escort is nice, well if you would do it before fucking her... but doing that and punishing her for being an escort after the MC used her service is well...hypocritical to the extreme at best.

Beside that i find it a bit strange, the MC figured out his co worker is a prostitute, and his first idea, without a shred of doubt is to pay 5k and fuck her ?
I mean, this guy was going on about how a sexual relationship with his boss, with which it is already known they had a relationship prior, could lead to problems at work and with HR.

Beside that, i don't really care for virgin or not, even less if we talk about characters which are 30y+.
That being said, sluts, town bikes, sex workers are just not my thing.
Isabella i just found desperate, neither did i like her to be honest. As she got on about how the fuckboys she had on the call list all got in relationships, i just had to laught. I mean, that doesn't want me to take over their job, i'm sure she finds others which are willing...well so far i find Emily is the only interesting LI, that sex crazed experimentee i liked more than either Isabella or Brooke to be honest.

 

[MixQQ]

damn, an escort LI who regularly fuck older guys (50- 60 years) a perfect gf material!

 

[AgnorWolf]

I feel like this is gonna be a tough sell for a lot of players. There's a lot of head scratcher moments to say the least so far. Also the sheer inconstant semi kinetic makeup will really put people off. We have choices for some and not for others. I personally hate forced content. First what was the purpose of the mcs partner cheating on him? It servers zero use to the story and it all happens off screen so there's no real resolution or reason for it(I have my own theory that the big story mcguffin aka the drug will maybe be the cause but I cant see any players accepting that bullshit if you tried some sort of redemption.
Isabella does nothing for me, I'm not remotely interested in her character. I will say I don't care if lis aren't virgins or who have slept with guys that's just a normal part of life but I don't want to know she's basically a town bike.
And then we have to worst offender imo, Brooke. I just have zero interest in prostitutes and as mentioned above the way to mc gives a fake name and spends 5k is gross and that was the point in closed the game and I was pretty much done.

 

[fajiker145]

Fr Isabella can't just shut up about her boytoys? Who even talks about that shit, are we supposed to be happy that they just used her and moved on to better options and MC now gets the leftovers of all those dudes?
And not to mention the literal prostitute, I dont care if she turns into nun now, the fact the she was a whore just invalidates her as a LI, you'll have to be crazy to want to start a relationship with someone like that.
Not to mention wasting 5k on a dirty whore lmao, MC is such a dumbass and his actions dont make much sense.
Just make them avoidable dude, I dont care if I lose sex content if it is just going to be with whores and prostitutes, characters that I just dislike and find honestly disgusting.
Almost forgot about the cheating gf, thats the icing on the cake for the shit list of LI here.

 

[th3n]

I feel like this is gonna be a tough sell for a lot of players. There's a lot of head scratcher moments to say the least so far. Also the sheer inconstant semi kinetic makeup will really put people off. We have choices for some and not for others. I personally hate forced content. First what was the purpose of the mcs partner cheating on him? It servers zero use to the story and it all happens off screen so there's no real resolution or reason for it(I have my own theory that the big story mcguffin aka the drug will maybe be the cause but I cant see any players accepting that bullshit if you tried some sort of redemption.
Isabella does nothing for me, I'm not remotely interested in her character. I will say I don't care if lis aren't virgins or who have slept with guys that's just a normal part of life but I don't want to know she's basically a town bike.
And then we have to worst offender imo, Brooke. I just have zero interest in prostitutes and as mentioned above the way to mc gives a fake name and spends 5k is gross and that was the point in closed the game and I was pretty much done.

Fr Isabella can't just shut up about her boytoys? Who even talks about that shit, are we supposed to be happy that they just used her and moved on to better options and MC now gets the leftovers of all those dudes?
And not to mention the literal prostitute, I dont care if she turns into nun now, the fact the she was a whore just invalidates her as a LI, you'll have to be crazy to want to start a relationship with someone like that.
Not to mention wasting 5k on a dirty whore lmao, MC is such a dumbass and his actions dont make much sense.
Just make them avoidable dude, I dont care if I lose sex content if it is just going to be with whores and prostitutes, characters that I just dislike and find honestly disgusting.
Almost forgot about the cheating gf, thats the icing on the cake for the shit list of LI here.

Wow, this game seems to have it all! What an appealing info to know (sarcasm).

 

[Nerra]

Seems like the game Lab Rats 2 might have been an inspiration for this one.

 

[Sngo]

Seems all the info dev asked prior was not taken in account, well this was the last chance i gave to this game.

To much trash LI in this game and we are forced to be with the town bicycle and a street whore so yeah no ty.

No redemption can save a whore like Brooke not even with a full biohazard suit would touch her, she is more than just nasty, disgusting.

After hearing about all crap spouted by sabella she is crossed as LI too, town bicycle stay in the streets we don't bring it home.

No they don't need to be virgins they just need to not be whores and Brooke well no salvation since it's a disgusting sex worker,.

So yeah, 2 major NO being forced.
Not worth investing time in this game if the pay we get is used and abused whores as love interest .

GL with the project anyway, but with that niche fanbase you want to attract with that kind of LI will be hard, let's see. Have fun .

 

[Avaron1974]

aye, sus stuff happening Us "normal" guys don't want to hear our li talk about past sexual endeavors with other guys, nor have used escorts as Li Maybe we'll get lucky and she just started and hasn't had a client yet

Escorts and prostitutes are entirely diffrent things.

Escorts get paid a lot of money for being eye candy, a lot of them never have sex with clients. Those that do only do it because they get offered a ridiculous amount of money.

Same thing with male escorts.

 

[fajiker145]

Escorts and prostitutes are entirely diffrent things.

Escorts get paid a lot of money for being eye candy, a lot of them never have sex with clients. Those that do only do it because they get offered a ridiculous amount of money.

Same thing with male escorts.

Escort must mean something different in your country because in mine it basically means just a "expensive" prostitute. Just to differentiate them from the crackwhores and the ones walking on the streets.
And the one in the game is one of those "expensive" prostitutes either way, whether calling her a escort is correct or not, is irrelevant.

 

[JenMistress]

Just got caught up with the Dev.

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Really been enjoying this game thus far. Thank you so very much for it!!!

 

[Avaron1974]

Escort must mean something different in your country because in mine it basically means just a "expensive" prostitute. Just to differentiate them from the crackwhores and the ones walking on the streets.
And the one in the game is one of those "expensive" prostitutes either way, whether calling her a escort is correct or not, is irrelevant.

I'm in the UK and escort means just that, someone that gets paid to escort. Usually by rich single people to attend functions as arm candy.

 

[fajiker145]

I'm in the UK and escort means just that, someone that gets paid to escort. Usually by rich single people to attend functions as arm candy.

Well, I googled escorts uk and it is just a bunch of prostitutes that came up, so that word is used as I expected

Sure there are might be some that say "they dont do sex" or maybe some that just dont guarantee it but the word is generally used for that, sex work. The amount of people paying for just company is minimal. Offtopic discussion btw

 

[Berserk55]

THX

 

[Daraich]

So far (end Chapter 2) promising

 

[Vortex@]

EDIT: Dev has fixed it all now. All good!



Looks like 99% agree on the same issues

1) Brooke needs to be a normal high end escort, without being paid for sex. Does she actually need to have sex for the plot? If absolutely necessary, can we remove the talking about other clients? The prostitution is bad enough, we don't need to hear of the other guys she was with.

2) All instances of our Li's talking about other men need removed (Isabella Brooke), and quit adding it. We know they have a past, but we don't want to hear it. It's just extremely HOT hearing what our Li did with other guys (sarcasm).