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VN Ren'Py Completed The List [v0.13] [Uncle Loco]

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Grif1001

Grif1001

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Elhemeer said:
I posted that mostly for the third "shoutout" ...

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Yeah, I'm not the best with the whole spelling as Elhemeer knows very well, but the thing that got me was the constant use of "(name) and me" in every situation, instead of using "(name) and I" where appropreate.

For example... it would say something like "You can ride with Rob and me." which is correct, because when you remove Rob it reads as "You can ride with me." However, later it would say something like "Alexis and me will keep you safe." which is wrong because if you remove Alexis it becomes "Me will keep you safe." in this situation it should be "Alexis and I..." But it probably only bother's me because as a boy I would say "(name) and me" and my father would say "You sound like an idiot. talk right or don't bother talking. Even a fool is thought wise when he keeps his mouth shut." so I learned to say "(name) and I".

It's not a big deal, but hearing my dad's voice in my head when I read those parts would pull me out of the story for a second.

The game itself, however, is amazing!

Keep up the great work Uncle Loco!
 
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Grif1001 said:
Yeah, I'm not the best with the whole spelling as Elhemeer knows very well, but the thing that got me was the constant use of "(name) and me" in every situation, instead of using "(name) and I" where appropreate.

For example... it would say something like "You can ride with Rob and me." which is correct, because when you remove Rob it reads as "You can ride with me." However, later it would say something like "Alexis and me will keep you safe." which is wrong because if you remove Alexis it becomes "Me will keep you safe." in this situation it should be "Alexis and I..." But it probably only bother's me because as a boy I would say "(name) and me" and my father would say "You sound like an idiot. talk right or don't bother talking. Even a fool is thought wise when he keeps his mouth shut." so I learned to say "(name) and I".

It's not a big deal, but hearing my dad's voice in my head when I read those parts would pull me out of the story for a second.

The game itself, however, is amazing!

Keep up the great work Uncle Loco!
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When my kids were growing up, I once got scared as shit...

I was scolding them for something, I dunno, something silly... all of a sudden I heard my father's voice coming out of my mouth. I swear I looked around. I felt the hairs on my neck go up, a chill down my spine...

Then I realized, I was saying EXACTLY what he used to say to me, same intonation, everything... Bloody hell, I still shake when I think about it.

Peace :D
 
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Elhemeer

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Grif1001 said:
Yeah, I'm not the best with the whole spelling as Elhemeer knows very well, but the thing that got me was the constant use of "(name) and me" in every situation, instead of using "(name) and I" where appropreate.

For example... it would say something like "You can ride with Rob and me." which is correct, because when you remove Rob it reads as "You can ride with me." However, later it would say something like "Alexis and me will keep you safe." which is wrong because if you remove Alexis it becomes "Me will keep you safe." in this situation it should be "Alexis and I..." But it probably only bother's me because as a boy I would say "(name) and me" and my father would say "You sound like an idiot. talk right or don't bother talking. Even a fool is thought wise when he keeps his mouth shut." so I learned to say "(name) and I".

It's not a big deal, but hearing my dad's voice in my head when I read those parts would pull me out of the story for a second.

The game itself, however, is amazing!

Keep up the great work Uncle Loco!
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I never point this out 'cause it's very normal to hear people talk like this in real life.
 
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