First time trying this, few annoying things already.
Why is it 3 clicks just to save?
The default renpy menu is better in every way.
Why is the right-click menu animated? it just wastes time and adds no value.
Why remove the option to turn transitions off? they are super annoying, had to enable to console and input the command manually.
edit:
Now that I've finished the current content, I'll say that the story itself is quite good so far and has a lot of potential.
The only other thing I'd say is that while some choices are quite obvious as to their effects, other are not so much. If it was available I'd use a walk-through so that I know exactly what each decision will do.