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balboa2151

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ya know, there must be thousands of games on this site and every once in a while you find a gem, this game is one of those, great story but it's a little confusing at time, fantastic dialogue, especially during the sex scenes, absolutely stunning women, and my God the sex scene with Cynthia in the laundry room, it was amazing, and I pray that the dev keeps Joe in the game and we see more content with her and the MC, I love how the dev makes the MC so dominating during sex but after he so caring, that's one of my favorite things about the MC, I can't wait until the MC plows Ashley, with all the pent up lust in her she will go crazy, I also wonder how the dev with handle Maya with dating the MC? She doesn't liked to be intimate? also, I hope the dev beings Mellisa in the fold, her breasts are amazing, I was the 0x52 mod when playing most of my games and Mellisa wasn't in the love or lust group, hopefully the dev will change that, one more thing for everyone that's playing this game, while using the 0x52 mod there were a couple of scenes that would've been missed, the one when MC goes to Lily's house to question her about spying on him, it only gives you the choice to end the path for Lily( maybe I didn't make a correct choice somewhere) but I got to see the intimate scene between Lily and the MC and I kept Lily's path open, there was one more scene that would've been missed but 0X52 let me choose to see it( sorry I can't remember the scene) anyway, fantastic game, I already have too many patreon memberships but what's one more lol
 

xCalon

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A few days ago I started the process of reviewing, rereading and correcting as many spelling and punctuation errors as possible. All this after having corrected hundreds, if not thousands of them in the first round. :eek:

I didn’t know what I was getting myself into, when I started this last November. :cry::LOL:

I’m currently on ep4 scene 14. :cool:
It is somewhat weird to quote myself, but it is, what it is. :cool:

After nearly two weeks I finally finished the previously mentioned reviewing, rereading and correcting process. Yeah, I've managed to overlook many spelling and punctuation errors in the past, and I'm sure there are still quite a few. Still, I think it was worth it, and the script became somewhat better.

I already updated the attachments in my previous post: https://f95zone.to/threads/the-lost-love-ep-6-u1-speedpostx.113520/post-15423945

If you find any errors - I did two speedruns and didn't encounter any errors - send me a DM with traceback.
 
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hrm

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Any tips on how to get the scene? Unsure wether it is in version 5.4 or the start of 6.1. What variable did I miss?
It's not a full scene or anything, just a quick thing that happens after the scene in the laundry room with Cynthia in Ep5 U4. When they go back to MC's apartment, Jill is there regardless of if you're on her path nor not, but Ash is only there if she's still living with you (ash_love stat at 0 or higher). For her to not be there you'd need to have chosen "End the hug" at the start of the game and avoided her from then on.

If you're Ash's path and still didn't see it, I'm stumped. I looked through the code for all instances of ash_love to see if something could be going wrong, but everything seems fine.
 

Fraxo

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Thank you. Had a fresh play-through now and had several dialogues and small scenes that I couldn't skip text on meaning it didn't show before. The laundry scene popped up now. Don't know why it was missing the first time. Some bug fix or something I missed, maybe. All good now. Thanks. :cool:
 

indio68

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why ruin ashley and MC first time, shrinking MC dick?? his dick is smaller than before...why dev?
 

indio68

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Hon can Medusa now is Jill mother??? wasn't medusa jill's ex informator and bestie?? now is Jill's mother?? wtf
 

indio68

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she isn't her mother, you meet jills mother when she comes to visit with ashleys biological mother(your stepmom).
at the beginning og the ep 6 u meet both jill's mom (called medusa!!!! THAT WAS THE NAME OF THE LADY THAT HOSTED THE FIGHT OF mc WITH jOE...) how can she has same name as jill's mom?
 

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I'm just getting caught up now, so I know I'm a bit behind with this. FYI, SpeedPostx, you might want to be careful when using longer lines of text in the dialogue box. If your text is too long, it gets cut off and most players won't bother looking into your game's code just to see what text is getting missed. For example, in ep5_s29_cynthia_scene.rpy, line 2529 is too long and flows below the bottom edge of the screen:
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With the size of the font you use and your text box, I would recommend not exceeding 250 characters on any single line of dialogue or description. As a quick and easy guide to follow, if your text goes longer than a single line (i.e., if it will wrap to take part of a second line) in your code, you may want to cut it into two individual text lines:
Python:
2529                    "You wrap her body in your arms, and she wraps her legs around you. Both holding onto each other, trying to not lose yourselves in lust. As you feel her warmth against your skin, the world around you fades away."
2530                    "You are left with only the intensity of your connection. The rhythm of your breathing syncs as you both surrender to the moment, lost in each other's embrace. "

Additionally, you are trying to assign False to the zen_path variable if the player chooses "No, thanks" in the locker room. But you're using the wrong operator, which instead makes a check to see if zen_path is exactly equal to False. You want the = operator instead of == at this point.
 
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Jhon27

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Dorothy_1.png


I was working on scene 8. I already have many snippets written for this scene because this is one of the highlights of the next update. This render is for everyone. A few more renders in 4k will be posted tomorrow.
A life update, from tomorrow, I will get more hours to work on the game. The holiday season has started, and I got the green light to leave work early. So, Dev-Update tomorrow.
Let me know if you like this render.
Better version of this render
 
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