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Effinpist

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May 10, 2018
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Animations would make the game better, not looking forward to another grinding sandbox type game, but what's really making it difficult is the writing. The MC gives a 300 word exposition dump while he's in the basement, but even after reading it several times, I'm no closer to understanding what the hell he is talking about. It's not only repetitive, but it's incoherent. The writing needs some help. Lots of it. There are other flaws, but those are the worst offenders. Good luck with the game Dev, I'll check back in a few updates to see if things improve.
 

Poopytaint

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Jun 2, 2021
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stepcast (n) no animations (n) and im guessing that it will take like 3-4 years before mc saves his real mom?

mc dick look way to small in vaginal sex, while in bj scenes it looks average.

the constant weird camera angles doing almost every new sentence and brightness changing multiple times doing some of the same scenes, was annoying af.

when they are thinking it looks more like they are talking to themself, you should add (thinking) next to names or do something to the text so it dont look like they are talking out loud.

there was also a few cases where the name i gave mc was replaced with the default name tony.
The programmer thought it looked huge during vaginal. Lol
 

sergerserj

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Jul 2, 2021
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Well... a lot of work need to be done...

Firstly - naming. You can change [name], but still in text there are some "Tony" guy...

Relations - in some places it's "step", in some others it's not. Sister, neighbor and friend - wtf man...
Just make relations changing possibility (30 min of coding) or "ask someone" for simple ipatch with replace_text. Or any other variants... Right now, it's just a mess.
Damn Patreon rules...
And btw, there are 3 simple rules for capitalized letters in relations in text.

Why thinking text not different from regular? Need to define it somehow. For example, with creating new
define ot = Character("Olivia", what_prefix="(", what_suffix=")") or change it in script.

All that mm ahh nnh nnhg, looks really weird.
Visual decent, but some light problems exist. No animations in 2025.
 
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