VN HTML The Lost World BTS [v0.04 Public Ch1-Ch4] [Salted Caramel Stories]

[meleaguance]

I don't know why I clicked on this since I'm not the target audience (I'm gay. I think I just like the old time photographs of the guys), but I liked it. Kind of like a romance novel with porn clips. could use a few choices here and there to feel more interactive.

 

[sguru]

NTR is Missing

 

[SimpleMind666]

I achieved to get to the end of chapter 1, and allmost fell asleep by then. This is not a game, but a very boring tale. At least not my cup of tea.... I hope there are others that like your creation better than me. Good luck!

 

[Al2(SO4)3]

NTR is Missing

Do you mean, it should have an NTR tag? I can correct that

 

[sguru]

Do you mean, it should have an NTR tag? I can correct that

No I mean that you can NTR content in the game

 

[Al2(SO4)3]

I achieved to get to the end of chapter 1, and allmost fell asleep by then. This is not a game, but a very boring tale. At least not my cup of tea.... I hope there are others that like your creation better than me. Good luck!

Thanks for your feedback. I'll consider adding an option to skip narrative passages. It may not make the game to your taste, but it would be a useful addition.

 

[xoxo1001]

There are way too many pages with one picture and one or two lines of text.

 

[youraccount69]

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[Al2(SO4)3]

There are way too many pages with one picture and one or two lines of text.

Thanks for your feedback! I prefer to have as close to single screens as I can, with minimal scrolling, like The Monastery. I will consider implementing a continual-scroll version too, it shouldn't be too difficult with the way I'm handling the structure.

 

[Al2(SO4)3]

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Thank you for adding this! I've added a link to the post. Let me know if that's not ok.

 

[Al2(SO4)3]

A review mentions not enough period feeling in this game, which is of course inevitable but also fair. I'll work to add more of that for the next release, and will gradually retcon more into the previous chapters as well.

 

[Knickkname]

I'm just reading the prologue now and it's gripping. The way you use, or are inspired by, the photographic "evidence" is erotic. Regarding period appropriate? Maybe replace names with dashes? Unless implicating them is part of the narrative. Also, great communication up front.

 

[Al2(SO4)3]

I'm just reading the prologue now and it's gripping. The way you use, or are inspired by, the photographic "evidence" is erotic. Regarding period appropriate? Maybe replace names with dashes? Unless implicating them is part of the narrative. Also, great communication up front.

Thanks! You mean like Mr M----- and Madame C---- ? I'd thought about that, it's a feature of old erotica that's rather charming, but usually they don't have so many persistent characters as does TLWBTS. From a practical standpoint, there's just too many names
I hope I'm able to keep your interest as the narrative progresses. Already the feedback has helped me keep more focused on building around what I find, which seems to result in a more integrated story, than creating the text and trying to find materials that fit.