VN Ren'Py The Lusanti Chronicles [Ch.3 v1.03] [Grumpy Old Aussie]

[Avaron1974]

When you start the AVN there is an image that shows the Prince in fighting stance with a sword and a (for the lack of any oxford english skills and huge vocabulary on my part) loli goth next to him apparently casting magic. Always thought it was an older Yenna. Waif prophecy and all.

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I saw the pic but never made the connection to Yenna.

Yenna so far has been the goofy adorable fun kid, goth girl is hot. Just never clicked with me that the goofy kid would grow up to be a total hottie.

 

[Amnezziia]

Damn, I loved it. The story hooked me up soooo much. And except some weird expressions at time on character faces, which makes me chuckles more than anything, it was really good. The attention to detail on the map and the depth of the story, yeah, I can't wait for what's coming next!

 

[YogSothoth1982]

If you don't like Livvy, her role is rather minor.

I'm glad to know this.

 

[Grumpy Old Aussie]

Damn, I loved it. The story hooked me up soooo much. And except some weird expressions at time on character faces, which makes me chuckles more than anything, it was really good. The attention to detail on the map and the depth of the story, yeah, I can't wait for what's coming next!

Thanks, I have a lot of work to go back and do. I don't want to get bogged down with re-doing scenes. I want to have a balance of new content and fixing the old as I go rather than stalling the project and restarting it. I think restarting just frustrates everyone including me. Although, I do need to address lewd animations and that will be a priority with the next update.

 

[FatGiant]

Thanks, I have a lot of work to go back and do. I don't want to get bogged down with re-doing scenes. I want to have a balance of new content and fixing the old as I go rather than stalling the project and restarting it. I think restarting just frustrates everyone including me. Although, I do need to address lewd animations and that will be a priority with the next update.

I hope you don't mind some Portuguese brutal sincerity.

Look, lewd scenes are fine and good... sure, do them the best you can. But, the real strength of this, is the story and the characters.

I have a serious crush on Jacinta, a healthy interest in Lydia and Sarissa, and I am warming up to Charlie. Yuna, I'll look at her after she's grown. Why not go all in with Charlie? She feels too young for my taste, too sheltered, too inexperienced. Kinky, yes, but, without any real depth, YET. Since I know of myself, I have always had a strong attraction for experienced women, that have lived, that have suffered, that have enjoyed life and it's pains. I've never had any interest in virginal maidens, it's a personal trait of mine, something that I can't change.

The thing is, here I am discussing them like they take coffee with me everyday. Like we cross each other on the streets and talk as friends and lovers. You DID that. These characters are "alive".

So what some lewd scenes aren't this or that or whatever... so what the facial expressions are a bit too much on the excessive... I make silly faces everyday.

All this to say, if you feel you can do it and want to, sure, fix things to YOUR taste. But, what we are here for, is for this great story and quite enjoyable characters.

Peace

 

[Amnezziia]

Thanks, I have a lot of work to go back and do. I don't want to get bogged down with re-doing scenes. I want to have a balance of new content and fixing the old as I go rather than stalling the project and restarting it. I think restarting just frustrates everyone including me. Although, I do need to address lewd animations and that will be a priority with the next update.

Yeah, it's fine as it is right now, no need to redo everything at the same time. Like you said, some fixing here and there on older versions while working on new content is probably the best way to go, as long as fixing doesn't take too much time.

I'm just way more interested by the story, the possible battles that we'll be able to "control" and how the girls will fit and act in the governement. Lewd scenes are always a great plus to develop a relationship, so good luck with them!

 

[Grumpy Old Aussie]

I hope you don't mind some Portuguese brutal sincerity.

I am always open to constructive criticism.

Look, lewd scenes are fine and good... sure, do them the best you can. But, the real strength of this, is the story and the characters.

I have a serious crush on Jacinta, a healthy interest in Lydia and Sarissa, and I am warming up to Charlie. Yuna, I'll look at her after she's grown. Why not go all in with Charlie? She feels too young for my taste, too sheltered, too inexperienced. Kinky, yes, but, without any real depth, YET. Since I know of myself, I have always had a strong attraction for experienced women, that have lived, that have suffered, that have enjoyed life and it's pains. I've never had any interest in virginal maidens, it's a personal trait of mine, something that I can't change.

I'm biased, I love all the LIs. A few of Jacinta's secrets are out but she still has a few surprises in her. Lydia is still a little neglected, chapter four will bring some balance.

Compared to the powerful women around her, Charlie does look rather lost, and that is intentional. Her time will come, she just has to walk a path to get there. Scianna's interest in Charlie was valid, just not the timing.

The thing is, here I am discussing them like they take coffee with me everyday. Like we cross each other on the streets and talk as friends and lovers. You DID that. These characters are "alive".

My hope is when the time comes you'll be able to look back and say "Ah, I understand why that was necessary now. It all fits." I don't tend to do much in the way of "fillers". Most of my scenes have a purpose or a reason. Even some of the lewd scenes have a purpose to them in the scheme of things. For example, without Gwen's scene there is no Amara path. Rebecca's scene is there for a reason even though it is an optional side path. Jacinta's scenes have a purpose, etc.

So what some lewd scenes aren't this or that or whatever... so what the facial expressions are a bit too much on the excessive... I make silly faces everyday.

All this to say, if you feel you can do it and want to, sure, fix things to YOUR taste. But, what we are here for, is for this great story and quite enjoyable characters.

Peace

I appreciate the advice. definitely, food for thought.

 

[Scooter_Tramp]

Fair enough, people like different things. Thanks for trying the game.

I would only add:

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Her carriage ride with Charlie set straight the assumptions I had made. I'm glad I gave this game a second chance and can't wait for the next update!

 

[Avaron1974]

Livvy is the only downside for me.

I absolutely adore her and would love for her to be a love interest.

 

[FatGiant]

Livvy is the only downside for me.

I absolutely adore her and would love for her to be a love interest.

She really was handed a shit sandwich and forced to eat it. I like how she is with the MC. And I agree with you, she could be an LI.

But, I feel that her life as a concubine, or a lover of the ruler, at the most producing a bastard heir, would be extremely unfair for her. She obviously wants to be married and has the right to it. The MC can't give that to her while keeping her a side piece, not without compromising his position and destroying her reputation.

I feel for her, she does deserve better, if not for anything else, for being a pawn in Tabitha's machinations. She's been a great friend to the MC, a FwB sure, but a friend above all, and he doesn't have that many anymore.

So, all in all, while I wish I could keep her bed warming the MC, she has earned her right to choose the life she wants and go for it. Yes, even if it means she'll be out of bounds from now on.

It stings, yeah, but that's life...

Peace

 

[Avaron1974]

But, I feel that her life as a concubine, or a lover of the ruler, at the most producing a bastard heir, would be extremely unfair for her. She obviously wants to be married and has the right to it. The MC can't give that to her while keeping her a side piece, not without compromising his position and destroying her reputation.

That's the thing though, one ending is him with 5 queens, could have been 6 if she'd been patient.

Nobody likes odd numbers.

 

[Natev]

if you don't have anything good to say I probably shouldn't say anything at all so ill leave it at that

 

[Avaron1974]

if you don't have anything good to say I probably shouldn't say anything at all so ill leave it at that

You could have just not made that post and saved us all a few seconds reading pointless drivvel.

 

[Maviarab]

if you don't have anything good to say I probably shouldn't say anything at all so ill leave it at that

It's a good job you rarely post ...I do so despise removing idiots from the list just to add others.

 

[Maviarab]

Grumpy Old Aussie
24th oct free update

Hey all, That time of the week again. I've added 114 game renders to chapter 4 this week. I'm surprised considering the week I had. A couple of things got passed the testers and I:

• Faces of Lydia 6. It triggers in the persistent but doesn't unlock in the gallery. This should automatically open in the next content update,
• Charlie says the same thing twice. Each instance is attached to a different variable and is fixed for the next update.,
• The Chapter 1 'bh' sayer error is safe to ignore and won't effect anything except for missing one line of dialogue and is fixed for the next update.,

This week is a Chapter 4 preview. Lydia showing off some new armor. I wanted to do a special renders but it's been a crazy week. Have a great weekend. Take care.

GOA

 

[Maviarab]

Just posting..because...for reasons:

 

[xapican]

Maviarab You should watch your diet better, your loosing your healthy dark tan....and your helmet seems....smaller....

 

[Dessolos]

She needs a nice nose boop

 

[xapican]

She needs a nice nose boop

What she that is a pale Maviarab....

 

[Pixillin']

Livvy is the only downside for me.

I absolutely adore her and would love for her to be a love interest.

Yeah ... Livvy is best girl.