What alley scene? I did not get any, just "I am walking through the alley" part!
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Thats whyThe alley scene is removed from the game but the next scenes still refer to that scene. New players would be so confused. This is where I think the game is getting worse. Also without that scene, without the mental break down, I don't see why MC and blake can progress so quickly.
I got one better, a male protagonist that turns another guy into a sissyA Male Protag. with some Sissys to fuck would be nice...
there are not many games Like this out there...
All the criticism ive seen is the art, there was never mentioned anything and lgbt, and if they complain about that than ghb ey are not better than the people that gors to ntr threads and complain about itI don't know why so many users on this site bully new creators, even more so if they make LGBT content. Why comment when something is not your cup of tea?
Sure you tell that the artist is now super experienced but the foundations are def there so that'll def get way better with practice.
It's just a teaser so I can't give any helpful criticism except keep going and have fun this is a good start!
A proofreader might be the better word since writers will write something you didnt ambitionfor that i have to hire the writer to write a good/erotic story for me,
Nice try, but the eyes are too high and ready to leave the head, the chin isnt bad. Lastly, the hairline separation should be higher ratherthan the side since the are that separates the top of the head and side should be in a 45 degree angleView attachment 1261268
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I don't really draw but heres my poor attempt with PAINT to tweak MC's head shape to make him more natural?
just think he deserves an actual jaw and normal forehead, reduced hair/skull size, changed ear position and neck abit
i know MC isnt happy but i dont like his long face..
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Lots of good things about the new 3D version. But I'm not a fan of the dialog text/background colors. It's too hard to read. The white text on a pale pink background doesn't provide enough contrast between the text and background.Loving this new 3D version. I assume this is the way going forward? Did I miss the incest part, father/son? Or is that cumming up? Will Ash get around to cheating, or will Ash and Blake throw some wild parties (group sex, swapping)?
Try using this, my friend: Put it in your game folder.Lots of good things about the new 3D version. But I'm not a fan of the dialog text/background colors. It's too hard to read. The white text on a pale pink background doesn't provide enough contrast between the text and background.