I think what's needed is a competent proofreader/editor. English can be a beast of a language for people who aren't used to it.
The faces look fine most of the time, but some of the facial expressions are way off. I don't know what program is being used for the models so I don't know how easy that is to fix.
A version for macOS would be nice. I can play it through the Ren'py engine itself, but that's a few extra steps.
I am also not a fan of Angela's story. Way too many games have characters just like her and they're always the ones I like the least. Also, the MC's suggesting she sell nudes is mindbogglingly stupid. Let's pretend this wasn't all fiction for a second. If your sister had been lied to and manipulated into sex by some heartless scumbag, would you then suggest she sell her body online? Even if she didn't have that kind of past, why would any self-respecting brother make such a proposal to his own sister, even if she's an overall unpleasant person?
The faces look fine most of the time, but some of the facial expressions are way off. I don't know what program is being used for the models so I don't know how easy that is to fix.
A version for macOS would be nice. I can play it through the Ren'py engine itself, but that's a few extra steps.
I am also not a fan of Angela's story. Way too many games have characters just like her and they're always the ones I like the least. Also, the MC's suggesting she sell nudes is mindbogglingly stupid. Let's pretend this wasn't all fiction for a second. If your sister had been lied to and manipulated into sex by some heartless scumbag, would you then suggest she sell her body online? Even if she didn't have that kind of past, why would any self-respecting brother make such a proposal to his own sister, even if she's an overall unpleasant person?