First, let me forewarn that I have only played a very small amount of the game before saying this. With that out of the way, let me say that I really like the looks of your game. I think that, from what I have seen so far, you could definitely have something good on your hands here. You seem to be willing to put forth effort to make changes that people want, and that is definitely good to see in a dev. As for criticism, I know you said earlier your first language isn't English. I can definitely tell from the text in the game, but it isn't impossible to understand. I think a native speaker could definitely be of help to you, if you can find someone willing to look over and make changes on it for you. Again though, I think you have a really good idea here, and a lot of ambition. I look forward to following this game, and I wish you good luck.