Woodstock_1983

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no offense to the Dev, but the graphics are really bad. Also, the grammar needs lots of editing. It says off when it means of and some words are missing or repeat themselves.
 
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hentai charley

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no offense to the Dev, but the graphics are really bad. Also, the grammar needs lots of editing. It says off when it means of and some words are missing or repeat themselves.
Agreed. Another example: during Alyssa's tour, she says (regarding the bathroom) "... Iris and Olivia so do me use the big one." Apparently she means that the 3 of them use the big bathroom, but I just can't make sense out of her actual phrasing.

Later on, Alyssa says "Isn't it a woman feeling to say?" Awkward phrasing, but at least in context this one makes sense.
 
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TinFoilHat19

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Hello friend,
The next chapter is currently being written, and will be as big as chapter 2 if not bigger.
Until I've written the whole thing, I can't really have an idea of how long it's going to take.

But I'm planning to update the current version with an updated affection screeen and a skip button, as well some minor tweaks next week.
Hey man great game

I used my last save from version 20, and had it completed, but its not working, it still shows the last part of the last version or is Amanda the only update? When is Yumiko having sex?
 
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Jack-Atlas

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Nice game, my only problem is that fucking bitch Angela, Dev made her so annoying/unlikable, and we can't even ignore her. It's making me want to quit the game. :(

Edit : now she told me to take her to meet a “client” I had to stop there and delete the game, it's really unfortunate, because I really liked the other girls. :confused:
 
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holaje12

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Nice game, my only problem is that fucking bitch Angela, Dev made her so annoying/unlikable, and we can't even ignore her. It's making me want to quit the game. :(

Edit : now she told me to take her to meet a “client” I had to stop there and delete the game, it's really unfortunate, because I really liked the other girls. :confused:
Client? Wtf? Is she a prostitute? well, MC certainly is kind of a cuck, he is the one who suggests Angela do onlyfans shit, and then tells Alyssa she should look for another man eventually.. sigh... So I wouldnt be surprised if this ends up having ntr/sharing with this retard protagonist. Actually the angela storyline just gets worst and wrost lmao, so yeah I think Im dropping this, probably should let us avoid her at least would help but whatever, not worth as it is.
 
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0ptimus

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Nice game, my only problem is that fucking bitch Angela, Dev made her so annoying/unlikable, and we can't even ignore her. It's making me want to quit the game. :(

Edit : now she told me to take her to meet a “client” I had to stop there and delete the game, it's really unfortunate, because I really liked the other girls. :confused:
Hello friend,

I'm glad you like the game, but on the other hand I'm a little disappointed that you're leaving it because of Angela...
Without spoiling anything, Angela is perhaps the most worked character in the story so far, and I can also assure you that there will be no NTR/Sharing in the game, hoping to have changed your mind!
 
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0ptimus

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Client? Wtf? Is she a prostitute? well, MC certainly is kind of a cuck, he is the one who suggests Angela do onlyfans shit, and then tells Alyssa she should look for another man eventually.. sigh... So I wouldnt be surprised if this ends up having ntr/sharing with this retard protagonist. Actually the angela storyline just gets worst and wrost lmao, so yeah I think Im dropping this, probably should let us avoid her at least would help but whatever, not worth as it is.
Let me clarify once and for all, I'm not developing this game for you or for the glory.
Or even for money, but what I do has to have some value, even if it's symbolic, my lowest tier on Patreon is $1.50, not even the price of a coffee...
I understand that for a game to be successful, it must be rendered with DAZ3D (whose look I find a little plastic, sorry...), have little dialogue and not think much.
I'm a creator, whether it's good or not is none of my business, whether people like it or not is none of my business.
I do it the best I can, and if you don't like it, I don't care.
 
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holaje12

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I understand that for a game to be successful, it must be rendered with DAZ3D (whose look I find a little plastic, sorry...), have little dialogue and not think much.
Nope, lots of games are very succesful while using all kinds of art from daz3d, to simple to stuff like Honey select 1 or 2, koikatsu or even Virt-a-mate.
About the "little dialog and not much think" you mention..., and Im saying this as someone thats been playing AVNs for a long while...., your game is no better than most of games here when it comes to that, it is not awful but neither it is something with outstanding dialogs or with much thought behind it. In fact, the storyline that you wrote for Angela is the same I have seen dozens and dozens of times here. Typical bitchy character doing onlyfans/camwork/selling porn and has MC helps her. Its not original, nor does it require much thought to write something like that, thats why you see it in most games, easy and lazy way to put the characters in sexual scenarios without having to work on a relationship first.
And btw, the option to avoid a girl you dont like is a very simple and basic one you'd find in most games that dont have a kinetic tag, even in those games with "not much think" that seem to do so well according to you. This is specially true when it comes to certain characters that could be considered controversial, like for example, sex workers.
I'm a creator, whether it's good or not is none of my business, whether people like it or not is none of my business.
This an open forum where people discuss about the game, and it wont all be just bootlicking 24/7, theres people who like it and those who dont, both opinions are valid and will be shared here. If you dont care then just dont read it, but it wont stop people from sharing their opinion. If you want an ecochamber with nothing but praises, theres discord.
Anyway, thats the last I will say here, good luck with your game.
 
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0ptimus

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Nope, lots of games are very succesful while using all kinds of art from daz3d, to simple to stuff like Honey select 1 or 2, koikatsu or even Virt-a-mate.
About the "little dialog and not much think" you mention..., and Im saying this as someone thats been playing AVNs for a long while...., your game is the no better than most of games here when it comes to that, it is not awful but neither it is something with outstanding dialogs or with much thought behind it. In fact, the storyline that you wrote for Angela is the same I have seen dozens and dozens of times here. Typical bitchy character doing onlyfans/camwork/selling porn and has MC helps her. Its not original, nor does it require much thought to write something like that, thats why you see it in most games, easy and lazy way to put the characters in sexual scenarios without having to work on a relationship first.
And btw, the option to avoid a girl you dont like is a very simple and basic one you'd find in most games that dont have a kinetic tag, even in those games with "not much think" that seem to do so well according to you. This is specially true when it comes to certain characters that could be considered controversial, like for example, sex workers.

This an open forum where people discuss about the game, and it wont all be just bootlicking 24/7, theres people who like it and those who dont, both opinions are valid and will be shared here. If you dont care then just dont read it, but it wont stop people from sharing their opinion. If you want an ecochamber with nothing but praises, theres discord.
Anyway, thats the last I will say here, good luck with your game.
Don't take my reply as a personal attack, I was just using your comment to back up my point.
I just find it strange to criticize when you haven't finished the story, but that's typical of the internet, you read a review and you believe it without having continued and tested it yourself, you let yourself be influenced in short... what's more by someone who hasn't even finished playing it either, it makes me chuckle to myself!
As for the rest, criticism can be constructive and has even helped me improve the game on certain points.
Anyway, thank you for taking the time to play, even just a little.
 

holaje12

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Don't take my reply as a personal attack, I was just using your comment to back up my point.
I just find it strange to criticize when you haven't finished the story, but that's typical of the internet, you read a review and you believe it without having continued and tested it yourself, you let yourself be influenced in short... what's more by someone who hasn't even finished playing it either, it makes me chuckle to myself!
As for the rest, criticism can be constructive and has even helped me improve the game on certain points.
Anyway, thank you for taking the time to play, even just a little.
I dont know if you mistook me for the other guy who said he stopped playing when "the client "was brought up but I did play the game fully after reading his comment because I usually don't play/follow games that have unavoidable stuff like that and I had this in my watchlist, so I wanted to make sure what the deal was.

I played till the end of the update because I always like to know what I am talking about when giving an opinion and while I did enjoy most other parts, playing the Angela storyline was always a hassle from start to finish,
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That's it, that's her story and I hated every single time I had to play her stuff to get to the next level just so I could get access to the content of the other girls. I don't know why you think playing it fully was going to change my mind about her when the problem I have is her being a sex worker and being dumb enough to get herself in those kind of situations where she is selling herself, I dont like that, thats a type of LI that I usually avoid in most other games, but here I am forced to play. Sorry for clogging the thread but I just had to make it clear since you were accusing me of just mindlessly going with someone else's opinion and commenting without playing which is something I never do unless I am asking a question, not giving an opinion.
 

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I think what's needed is a competent proofreader/editor. English can be a beast of a language for people who aren't used to it.

The faces look fine most of the time, but some of the facial expressions are way off. I don't know what program is being used for the models so I don't know how easy that is to fix.

A version for macOS would be nice. I can play it through the Ren'py engine itself, but that's a few extra steps.

I am also not a fan of Angela's story. Way too many games have characters just like her and they're always the ones I like the least. Also, the MC's suggesting she sell nudes is mindbogglingly stupid. Let's pretend this wasn't all fiction for a second. If your sister had been lied to and manipulated into sex by some heartless scumbag, would you then suggest she sell her body online? Even if she didn't have that kind of past, why would any self-respecting brother make such a proposal to his own sister, even if she's an overall unpleasant person?
 

0ptimus

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Hello friend,

I think what's needed is a competent proofreader/editor. English can be a beast of a language for people who aren't used to it.
Yes, I often read the same comment but well, I can't really afford to hire someone for that, I'm trying to improve using various tools for now, I'll make corrections later.

A version for macOS would be nice. I can play it through the Ren'py engine itself, but that's a few extra steps.
I'll keep that in mind for future updates!

I am also not a fan of Angela's story. Way too many games have characters just like her and they're always the ones I like the least. Also, the MC's suggesting she sell nudes is mindbogglingly stupid. Let's pretend this wasn't all fiction for a second. If your sister had been lied to and manipulated into sex by some heartless scumbag, would you then suggest she sell her body online? Even if she didn't have that kind of past, why would any self-respecting brother make such a proposal to his own sister, even if she's an overall unpleasant person?
I'm aware that this character resembles many others in other games, but I wanted to tell the story in my own way. The psychological spectrum of human beings is vast, and we can't all be nice, docile teddy bears.
So I had to create characters with different behaviors, or it wouldn't have made sense.
Everyone has their own intimate relationship with what's right and wrong. Angela is a tortured character, underneath her airs of a modern woman, she suffers from having been suffocated by a coded and over-protective childhood, which is a way for her to rebel.
 
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