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Small update on Martha's Chapter 5 content, now that I ran through it:
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Thank you for your message my friend, such a long text proves that you care about the game and I thank you.
Although the game is very advanced in terms of storyline and content, it's still an early access game and a lot can still change.
I want you to know that I'm taking careful note of all feedback to improve the game experience. I've already thought about making improvements to the interface, smoothing out the grind and so on.
But when it comes to the story and the different routes with the girls, it's not going to be that easy, because I've already got a clear idea of what's going to happen next, and I don't really want to change anything.
My way of telling the story is what it is, for Martha, why is she the way she is? Has she had a traumatic experience that would justify her behavior? That's something I want to save for chapter 6 and 7.
Anita has never known a man and is in the process of discovering her own body. I intend to speed things up drastically with her in the next chapter too.
And as for the main story, I recognize some ideas I've had for the next update.
Anyway, it's hard to please everyone, at first it was supposed to be a small project with no intentions, but it's grown to such big proportions that I have to stick to my vision in order to keep some consistency.
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Wait... ANGELA is the one considered the controversial LI? She only even discovers this games version of Only Fans because the MC prods her into it, actively participates in it with her as a ways of earning her trust (and eventual access to her vagina) and is the one who just as quickly gets her to diss the app for good as well. I fail to see how she is remotely controversial as a character and it in fact is something COMMON in popular harem games - i have seen it in everything from Harem Hotel to Power Vacuum and on the most popular characters no less.
If we WERE to cite controversial LIs then the mentally unwell sister has to be up there as number surely? or the lesbian cousin who you are actively trying to convert into loving the D at the behest of her mother who is clearly dead set against accepting her being gay or the nun who is perhaps the most bat shit crazy of them all lol
If we WERE to cite controversial LIs then the mentally unwell sister has to be up there as number surely? or the lesbian cousin who you are actively trying to convert into loving the D at the behest of her mother who is clearly dead set against accepting her being gay or the nun who is perhaps the most bat shit crazy of them all lol
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Honestly, the sandbox in this game ain't that bad. Let me get this straight, I detest sandboxed games. But at least, this one provides some leeway around where you have to repeat xxxx times just to trigger one scene and hell breaks loose if you miss it. I find this one passable. There are some I completely avoid.
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I'm glad you saw the time put into the feedback, and recognize that it wasn't so much criticism as it was me trying to help, which I was and am.
I definitely respect authors that have vision, and write their games the way they want them to be. The only part of Chapter 6 that rubbed me the wrong way was Martha, but not all LIs are for everyone. I, as a man, don't like being manipulated or pushed around by a woman. The MC, having so many women available to him, shouldn't have to put up with Martha doing that - but that's my personal take, and I don't know your vision for her or the story. So again, I respect it, and will simply wait to see how it unfolds. She however, probably won't be part of my playthrough in the future - not unless she unfolds some utterly traumatic story to the MC, breaks down emotionally, and apologizes profusely to him for stringing him along and manipulating him. Just how I am!
Hopefully the *other* feedback was of some use as well! I'm still available for text re-writes/revamps if you need (English native speaker, and one of my parents was an English teacher). But you already know about the text, so I won't harp on it.
Keep up the good work and efforts, and have a well-deserved break!
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The game is very good in animations but very bad in content, it has no options, the protagonist accepts everything and if the player doesn't like it, there is no yes or no to anything, so let the developer play.
The game is very good in animations but very bad in content, it has no options, the protagonist accepts everything and if the player doesn't like it, there is no yes or no to anything, so let the developer play.
near the end of chap5 the scene with Gisele and Jim (just before Sandra confrontation) is at dusk... The warning "I should stay in my room" was in the afternoon but no question mark on the map
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I think I remember running into that as well - the text message but no location circle for it.
This game is fantastic, I haven't seen anything like it, the animations and sounds are so detailed, I don't think anyone can match this game, you're a genius.
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I am also stuck at this point, did everything else available according to the heart guide, tried doing other repetitons of things but still get the stay in room line but no question mark, did you find a way to trigger it?
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Not yet, not through the end of Chapter 5's content. We see her on the phone with the MC, and get to catch a glimpse of skin, but no real interaction between the two.
Ignore the "stay in your room" prompt. Progress all of the LIs as far as you want. To trigger the end of Chapter 5's content, confront Sandra.
It is possible to complete all Love Interest content, then confront Sandra, while ignoring the erroneous prompt. It *might* have a scene behind it, but it wasn't necessary to complete LIs or the current story. Only 0ptimus knows what's going on with it.