Ren'Py The Manor [v0.6.0] [0ptimus]

[Warsteel]

if that was true she would just be a model rather then a OF girl, but here shes performing sexual acts for money = prosititution
and the mc is a cuckold cause he wants to share her with the world in that way.

OF are like strippers, not models. They can do whole sex shows on stage but there's no touching them. Therefore it is NOT prostitution. This is just a fact of law, not an opinion.

 

[gomdnatybtch]

why am I just discovering this now......
12+ GB's oh wow

 

[0ptimus]

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NICE GAME

Thanks! Glad you like my game

And thanks also for your incredible review, the presentation is very polished. I've never seen anyone put so much effort into giving their opinion, which at least proves that you respect (a little) the time I put into making my game.

You should try making one yourself, why not? I'm sure it would be perfect.

 

[0ptimus]

I cant move from chapter 4. All are done but Amanda with 24/30 6/8 and 2/3 and done all i can with her but numbers dont change? How do i get to move on to chapter 5? I have been spending all week with Johanna and olivia several times to be sure i did not miss a single interaction but still no luck since the dev posted his help to prceed,,, OMG finaly got the elusive ? mark in my room and later on the map. realy have to check every map once you are on the verge of a new chapter :-D

You can also read the instructions in your room to find them:

 

[rafa30]

It should be this one

Thank you, darling.
You have that save at the beginning of the scene.
This one is halfway through and I can't go back.
Thank you, love.

 

[rafa30]

0ptimus

This game is fantastic
More Carmen my love
Judy and Angela
Olivia too

 

[OrcaHideout45]

Thanks! Glad you like my game

And thanks also for your incredible review, the presentation is very polished. I've never seen anyone put so much effort into giving their opinion, which at least proves that you respect (a little) the time I put into making my game.

You should try making one yourself, why not? I'm sure it would be perfect.

I have to ask. Reading your post it is quite clear your grasp on the English language is far superior than that of whomever wrote the script for the first two chapters I have played. My question is simply, why?

 

[Jaga Telesin]

I have to ask. Reading your post it is quite clear your grasp on the English language is far superior than that of whomever wrote the script for the first two chapters I have played. My question is simply, why?

I think 0ptimus simply hasn't gotten around to proofing/re-writing the first 1-2 chapters yet. Once you get past them, the reading is vastly easier and better. I suggested it some time ago (1+ years?), but I'm not going to fault him for not getting someone to help - it's quite possible he wants to do it himself when he gets time. The only real downside is the initial impression it leaves on new players. Beyond that, the game is good, the animations great, and his efforts both timely and significant.

 

[OrcaHideout45]

I think 0ptimus simply hasn't gotten around to proofing/re-writing the first 1-2 chapters yet. Once you get past them, the reading is vastly easier and better. I suggested it some time ago (1+ years?), but I'm not going to fault him for not getting someone to help - it's quite possible he wants to do it himself when he gets time. The only real downside is the initial impression it leaves on new players. Beyond that, the game is good, the animations great, and his efforts both timely and significant.

If he is, as you say, simply putting off doing a proofreading update for the script of those chapters. That he is clearly capable of doing himself, then he is doing himself a massive disservice.

If I were him, whatever thing I had planned to work on for the game for the next 8 hours (And that is most likely more time than needed) would be postponed. This should be his number one priority. It would be more impactful than anything else he could do with those 8 hours without question.

 

[Jaga Telesin]

This should be his number one priority. It would be more impactful than anything else he could do with those 8 hours without question.

I agree - it would serve to pull in a lot more fans who otherwise might drop the game early due to having reading difficulties, or simply be turned off by rough text. But again, it's his game - I won't fault him for it. If you can power through those chapters, the rest is quite good. Time will tell how his priority list evolves.

 

[OrcaHideout45]

I agree - it would serve to pull in a lot more fans who otherwise might drop the game early due to having reading difficulties, or simply be turned off by rough text. But again, it's his game - I won't fault him for it. If you can power through those chapters, the rest is quite good. Time will tell how his priority list evolves.

Well if that is the case, and you don't want to fault him that's respectable. But I would. It is almost criminal to ignore such a quick cheap task that has such value. It would be like spending days filling a swimming pool and then not taking 2 minutes to check for leaks before you leave.

 

[Ferven40]

Isn't it too big on disk considering the poor graphics and limited content of this game?

 

[Mauser45]

MC is dumber than a brick (which I can see) and one of his sisters loses her virginity to another dude
(haven't reached that part yet, but based on the comments on here, yikes). Yeah, I'm out

 

[Jaga Telesin]

Isn't it too big on disk considering the poor graphics and limited content of this game?

It's bigger than some, but the animations make it worth it. I suspect that's why he chose the rendering engine he did, as the model detail in the animations is better than a lot of other games. It could benefit from more compression, but I'm just as happy with a larger download and accelerated content delivery vs time lost to compressing.

Additionally, there *is* quite a bit of content when you add up all the hours it delivers. Compared to games where you have to download multiple 5GB parts, it's fairly on-par.

 

[Painfoler]

MC is dumber than a brick (which I can see) and one of his sisters loses her virginity to another dude
(haven't reached that part yet, but based on the comments on here, yikes). Yeah, I'm out

Then better reach that part Play game and dont lisen to crouch experts

 

[Mauser45]

Then better reach that part Play game and dont lisen to crouch experts

I've read enough about Angela. I'm not into that type of storyline, so I'll still pass.

 

[Kingjack1505]

For Amanda questline, I need to ask her question, when MC met her at cafe, keep coming no news for now. its been 40 days, I am stuck from there and finished all the girls questline.

 

[marcodelamoret]

Hello,

Yeah !

Finally, a game with Big Ass, Big Tits !!!

 

[Rebeccacummins]

Is there no like grammar fix mod or something? I'm just now finding and trying this game out but holy hell man I'm at the part in the beginning where you meet the Fed chick and I'm struggling here. I don't know how to code or mod or anything myself so i apologize if i sound ignorant but its just rough.

 

[Painfoler]

I've read enough about Angela. I'm not into that type of storyline, so I'll still pass.

Eh... so bad to you In other hand cam girl banging with brother fu fu fu
Aniway its your choise I respect it, just don't like when people make decisions based on rumors

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Is there no like grammar fix mod or something? I'm just now finding and trying this game out but holy hell man I'm at the part in the beginning where you meet the Fed chick and I'm struggling here. I don't know how to code or mod or anything myself so i apologize if i sound ignorant but its just rough.

Grama way better after first 2 chapters...Just dev don't have time fix it