Hi OrcaHideout45,
Thank you for taking the time to write such a detailed and honest message. I genuinely appreciate how direct you were — I can tell it wasn’t meant to tear me down, but to help me improve.
Your analogies hit home. It made me step back and realize I’ve been postponing a fix that would immediately improve first impressions and the overall experience.
So yes: you convinced me. I’m going to do the script update and rewrite the first two chapters to clean up the grammar and make the text feel natural and consistent. It’s the right move, and honestly your comment gave me the push I needed to stop hesitating and just do it.
Thanks again for the support and for caring enough to write all that. I hope you’ll enjoy the improved early chapters when they’re ready.