After playing the update, I would first like to say I am happy this game is continuing but I do have a few critics.
1. The animation is a bit rough but if the story is good I can forgive that.
2. As was pointed out by someone else the group of mind controllers trying to control nations is a slight plot hole. While I can fully believe they had the hubris to try, The One should have tried to kill them. Assuming this is a plot hole, and not just a plot point that simply hasn't been revealed yet, I recommend you just add a sentence saying those not killed by infighting were hunted down by The One.
3. The scene with Alex at the movie does feel a little fast. making her take off her top is fine but I'm not sure we are at blowjob territory yet.
4. The bath scene only featuring one choice of fantasy struck me as odd when all the previous times we could choose between all girls found.
5. Lastly, I skipped to the new content so I can't remember if this was a problem the old dev also had or not, a lack of choices, we had to be sucked off by Alex, we had to have a threesome, while most players, me included, enjoyed that, it is still good to leave the option not to for the few people who are not attracted to those girls.
Overall while there were some issues with this update it still has the potential to be great. My biggest piece of advice to the developers is don't try to rush from point a to point b. Give the scenes proper time to breathe. Don't let negative comments get you down. as long as you listen to feedback and strive for improvement, I know you can finish this game up as the masterpiece it was always meant to be. Thank you for picking it up.
1. The animation is a bit rough but if the story is good I can forgive that.
2. As was pointed out by someone else the group of mind controllers trying to control nations is a slight plot hole. While I can fully believe they had the hubris to try, The One should have tried to kill them. Assuming this is a plot hole, and not just a plot point that simply hasn't been revealed yet, I recommend you just add a sentence saying those not killed by infighting were hunted down by The One.
3. The scene with Alex at the movie does feel a little fast. making her take off her top is fine but I'm not sure we are at blowjob territory yet.
4. The bath scene only featuring one choice of fantasy struck me as odd when all the previous times we could choose between all girls found.
5. Lastly, I skipped to the new content so I can't remember if this was a problem the old dev also had or not, a lack of choices, we had to be sucked off by Alex, we had to have a threesome, while most players, me included, enjoyed that, it is still good to leave the option not to for the few people who are not attracted to those girls.
Overall while there were some issues with this update it still has the potential to be great. My biggest piece of advice to the developers is don't try to rush from point a to point b. Give the scenes proper time to breathe. Don't let negative comments get you down. as long as you listen to feedback and strive for improvement, I know you can finish this game up as the masterpiece it was always meant to be. Thank you for picking it up.
