Holy god damned fuck. I haven't played a game that made me feel like this in a while. Good luck to the dev. Love it thus far.
Man this game gets you right in the feels......I don't know if I wanna play any new releases from this one. 
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I "knew" what was going to happen but still cried about twice, great job dev, this one will be hard to play but I belive it can be very much worth it
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Wait, so the harem tag in this game just refers to dating multiple women at the same time right? A choice to choose 1 LI would come in the future?
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This is good. A very sad and emotional start. The good bits of the drama will start next episode, just hoping dev will not rush directly to the harem, dev should focus more on the MC tackle his emotions.
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When I picked to play this game, I did so because saw in the menu that future releases would have a built in Walkthrough. What I didn't expect going into it was this game having enough of a body count that it could be featured on the Kill Count YouTube channel. Damn, talk about your depressing Prologues. Hopefully future chapters are more light hearted than this. But I am at least curious to see where the story goes from here. Thank you so very much for this thus far.
Very good story, lots of tension and well paced. Introduced a few possible Love Interests for the following chapters.
Looking forward to future updates. Well done Dev.
Looking forward to future updates. Well done Dev.
will we find out what the wife and daughter died from in next chapter. This was so sad it made me cry
Holy shit this was just down right depressing. Actually made me cry. Can't wait to see how this story turns out.
Holy shit, I wasn't expecting that. As a father myself, it hits really hard.
I'm very curious of how Developer will tell a not-too-dark story from that start. In my case, in a similar situation, I know that my life would stop instantly, and that nothing could ever cheer me up. So good luck Developer, you have a lot of powerful writing to do. But it seems you can manage, good job.
I'm very curious of how Developer will tell a not-too-dark story from that start. In my case, in a similar situation, I know that my life would stop instantly, and that nothing could ever cheer me up. So good luck Developer, you have a lot of powerful writing to do. But it seems you can manage, good job.
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I just finished the prologue and I think I flooded my keyboard. I felt a similar emotion with "Acting Lessons", one of the very first VNs I watched, 6 or 7 years ago. Some other VNs have deeply moved me but not to this extent. Losing your wife and daughter one after the other, I don't know how I would have reacted because I had neither one nor the other. I hope the following chapters will be of the same quality. I'm ready, I bought a waterproof keyboard...
Good start for an emotional VN. Hits right in the feels.
The writing is a bit off unfortunately, as is common with the first chapter. Please cut down on the exposition and make the conversations less wooden in their style.
Try to make the characters say things that real people in that context might say rather than give the entirety of the context and background in the speech itself. I understand that you want the relevant information to come across, but the characters (all the employees in the hospital in particular) sound too much like AIs.
Trust your audience to figure things out on their own, and everyone will benefit. Readers will be more invested in a story if they have to participate, and you will find it a lot easier to write if you can focus on the things that matter in the text. Both of those seem quite important to the story you are wanting to portray.
Oh, and I'm deeply suspicious of the daughter's age. She is quite developed for an eight year old and sounds closer to ten or eleven.
The writing is a bit off unfortunately, as is common with the first chapter. Please cut down on the exposition and make the conversations less wooden in their style.
Try to make the characters say things that real people in that context might say rather than give the entirety of the context and background in the speech itself. I understand that you want the relevant information to come across, but the characters (all the employees in the hospital in particular) sound too much like AIs.
Trust your audience to figure things out on their own, and everyone will benefit. Readers will be more invested in a story if they have to participate, and you will find it a lot easier to write if you can focus on the things that matter in the text. Both of those seem quite important to the story you are wanting to portray.
Oh, and I'm deeply suspicious of the daughter's age. She is quite developed for an eight year old and sounds closer to ten or eleven.