VN Ren'Py The Mother of My Best Friend and Her Irresistible Desires [v0.5] [17MOONKEYS]

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Devil3D

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Aug 10, 2021
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Could you please give me some honest feedback? It's very important to me

Try my other games: UFO - Our Secret - - The Loving Son - Futanari Universe
JUST STOP IT!!!


You have short story ideas but struggle to turn them into long VNs.
Either you can't write long stories or lose motivation before finishing.

Right now, you have six stories using the same assets repeatedly.

Just make episodic VNs—short, self-contained stories that end properly. If you come up with a sequel idea for a previous episode, instead of forcing a long VN.
 

onefingersalute

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Mar 30, 2022
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i like the other VN he makes but this is kinetic so i dunno how good it will be but i wish they would focus on one VN and stick with it for several updates instead of flip flopping from one to the next .
 
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