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I prefer that style to be honest and yes, used previous WT's of hers as a base template to get started (as I did with the original Intertwined WT I used to do before I had to step away and allowed Bubu to take it over). I will keep up with this one though.
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Yep, it's Nevergreen, an inside joke about The Simpsons.
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There's always one isn't there
Fixed and updated. (Weird how got it wrong twice early chapters but right in Ch5...oh well.)
Thanks Xap
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It's not healthy to be on Ceo's server while trying to do something useful. The weirdos there messing up your mind. It's not your fault. It's all on them.
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Big Thank's to the Staff and to the Mod of this thread, you already moved the Links to the PDF Walktrough and the Neverwhere Lore thread to the OP !
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Would love it if in their traditions you have sex with them you are classified as their spouse. Which means you have say on what you want done on behalf of your wife.Tell me about it....
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Yeah, like not going on patrol or whatever that was...
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I think you have a point here. The relationship with Kaija isn't handled/exposed in the best way.
- Our first choice with her: love tap, or say hello. We have no idea that Kaija actually hates being startled with the love tap, and first-time players could think a “hello” is too Platonic. At the same time, Alex would know this, he's been with her for years.
- There's very little framing about how the relationship is already in a bad place at the start of the game. We see both Kaija and Alex at their worst. This biases the player against Kaija (Alex makes some passive-aggressive remarks, even sighs when Kaija calls, is tired of her being messy, and annoyed when she doesn't keep her promise of letting him know when she arrived.)
- Only after shit has hit the fan, do we get actual exposition about their relationship.
This is honestly one of only a few criticisms I have of the game. I would love a bit of framing that describes the relationship going through a(nother) rough patch, and that it's up to the player to decide if Alex puts in effort to support Kaija regardless, or if he's just done with it. I also think that the first choice needs a bit of framing as well, maybe with the MC thinking "She hates being startled, but that ass is just too tempting."
No! No! This can't be happening!! Finnabair can't be dead!!! She was now my favourite secondary heroine!!! Someone has to be pay for this!!!"That was simply heart wrenching!!
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Well, afortunatly that is something what could be resolved with a short Introduction text. (on the other hand the average F95 don't read
) .Yes that is a good point, I remeber the back and forth we had as it turned out, that the ass slap gives negative Kaija points
(at least the ass slaper faction got exposed including myself )
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"afortunatly"? Say what now?Well, afortunatly that is something what could be resolved with a short Introduction text. (on the other hand the average F95 don't read
Yes that is a good point, I remeber the back and forth we had as it turned out, that the ass slap gives negative Kaija points
Also: "remeber" should be "remember". I have issues with that one a lot myself. lol
And: "slaper" should be "slapper".
Just trying to help you, bro. Not being one of them "what's its".
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I was still processing it all and I just replayed the scene for better clarity, when I read the "Ainu hen Medb", I remembered Ainu means daughter which means Finnabair was Medb's daughter and that has just wrecked me even more... It explains so much. Initially I just thought they were close friends but now I understand the significance of the MC sparing her, because he did it before her parents. The feels man...
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Yeah I read that too... Ceolag said apparently the two aren't related so I'm struggling to understand the "Ainu hen Medb"....
Whatever it is ; MC spared her in front of her father and Medb, and given what happens if you kill her (I peeked at the code) she was very dear to everyone....
Talk about player punch...
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Ughh it is "fortunatly " lol seems that my brains went full on neural short-circuit on that one, had to consult DeepL from spanish "afortuandamente""afortunatly"? Say what now?
Also: "remeber" should be "remember". I have issues with that one a lot myself. lol
And: "slaper" should be "slapper".
Just trying to help you, bro. Not being one of them "what's its".
You're welcome !
guess that cleaning my keyboard also helps to avoid 60 % of the typos but still struggling with the english writing, more so that some letters are spelled differently as written
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