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I really Hope this become better than this JP trash Char build.. Lets be friend , Me: MC he killed your Family he rape your GF and Sell her into Prostitution and You want to be friend with him (total brain dead)??? Hope not and MC become a littel more Bad ass after killing.
 

Silent Raven

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Nice work Dev. I'm enjoying the game so far (only just started ch3 though).

I think I found a bug however, in your use of menu set:
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Hm. That's weird. You're absolutely right, adding the variable to the set afterward is redundant. However, in my testing, it doesn't seem to add the variable twice anyway, so it shouldn't be a problem in theory. I can't seem to replicate it in my testing no matter what I do. I'm not sure why it would do this for you. It looks like you're playing with Koga's mod, so I can't confirm whether there are any changes in that which would affect this. Either way, this issue shouldn't be present in similar choices past Chapter 3. I guess I never went back and removed the code for the choices before that. I have removed them now though, so future updates should, for sure, be fixed. Sorry for the confusion.
 

Uzhirian

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Hm. That's weird. You're absolutely right, adding the variable to the set afterward is redundant. However, in my testing, it doesn't seem to add the variable twice anyway, so it shouldn't be a problem in theory. I can't seem to replicate it in my testing no matter what I do. I'm not sure why it would do this for you. It looks like you're playing with Koga's mod, so I can't confirm whether there are any changes in that which would affect this. Either way, this issue shouldn't be present in similar choices past Chapter 3. I guess I never went back and removed the code for the choices before that. I have removed them now though, so future updates should, for sure, be fixed. Sorry for the confusion.
All good, it might be that it doesn't add duplicate strings (so happens for me because the mod changed the string on the menu choices, but not the additional add). I didn't test without the mod sorry. Anyway, cheers, and again, nice work on the game.
 

Silent Raven

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All good, it might be that it doesn't add duplicate strings (so happens for me because the mod changed the string on the menu choices, but not the additional add). I didn't test without the mod sorry. Anyway, cheers, and again, nice work on the game.
Oh yeah, that would make sense. Might be something to bring to Koga's attention. I suppose as a temporary fix, you can just roll back to see the other dialogue, shouldn't cause any problems.
Thank you!
 
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KoGa3

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All good, it might be that it doesn't add duplicate strings (so happens for me because the mod changed the string on the menu choices, but not the additional add). I didn't test without the mod sorry. Anyway, cheers, and again, nice work on the game.
Sorry for the issues, I removed the Mod now to prevent causing such game problems
 

Uzhirian

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Sorry for the issues, I removed the Mod now to prevent causing such game problems
You're mod was fine other than one thing, worked like a charm. Thanks for your effort! And it shouldn't happen anymore in future versions with the changes Silent Raven made anyway. It wasn't a game breaking bug either, so at most people would have just missed a bit of extra dialogues.
 

johnmnf692

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The game is solid, with some very strong moments. Right up until Sasha is a rape victim (because of course she is). Of all the clichés in this game this is by far the worst. It just doesn't need to be there, it doesn't actually add anything. It doesn't make her a "deeper" character. It's just basic bitch edginess for the sake of having a broken LI whom the MC needs to heal. However, this set-up was already used for Mara to greater effect, just without the rape.
 

Silent Raven

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Any news about this amazing game - Silent Raven?
Yep! Progress on the next update is sitting at about 45% right now. There's a pinned post on my Patreon that I keep updated with the progress if you want to keep track. There will also be periodic progress updates posted there for free, and sneak peeks for paid tiers as well.
 

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Lily, Morgan and Nikki just too slutty for me, I don't like these type of characters, especially not in harem games; additionally all 3 of them are bisexual, hitting on other LIs, even if it's just teasing now. Not sure what's the situation with Morgan and Nikki, probably they are fuck buddies or in a relationship? Not sure what's up with them or if it's ongoing or not. Morgan came off quite domineering in her scenes so far, especially in that threesome and I don't think this will be the last time she will fuck someone with the magical dick if MC lets her.

Alice is lovely so far, but I didn't like that scene where she asked Lily about sex and said she'll think about letting her show some stuff to her, the MC is there, why would you have a virgin LI if she's going to learn about sex from someone else and not from the MC? Hopefully nothing happens, otherwise it feels pointless to have her as a virgin if she'll do stuff with Lily before the MC. It's almost on the same level when the virgin LI uses dildos before she sleeps with MC so she is prepared for the real deal.


I enjoyed the story so far, good luck to the dev!

(gonna prefix this by saying I don't feel like Morgan and Nikki's relationships have actually started, it feels just physical at this point)

Yeah Morgan and Nikki kind of came off as the girls you fool around with while the real LIs develop feelings and finally give themselves to the MC. I mean getting a chance to actually dominate Morgan wouldn't be bad but she doesn't really come off as a good relationship, kind of the same with Nikki. I suppose that can change but they give off more "Open relationship" vibes, beyond the harem. I do agree that having Morgan kind of boss around the MC during the threesome was a turn off, like I'm not totally against femdom but it did come off as weird for me but that's just personal preference... (I guess all these takes are) Plus I wouldn't trust Morgan not to try and dick the girls lol nor would I trust Nikki not to go along with it if MC weren't there. Having a girl tell you they want to be fucked by a futa (I imagine Morgan will probably get there) would kind of kill the magic for me. I mean yeah you can avoid it but it was still brought up.

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Lilly at least seems like she is fighting against her nature. She seems to at least have a genuine interest in MC. While she may come off as slutty, she mainly directs that towards MC. Kind of. Idk I didn't get the same vibe from her as I did from nikki or morgan

Alice, I agree, is lovely. And I also agree that I would prefer the MC do the corrupting lol not a lesbian succubus. Kind of a turn off when the virgin has her first experiences with someone other than the MC, as you said. Lilly offering advice isn't bad but going beyond that kind of ruins the archetype. Kind of fucked up if she gets physical with a succubus while the MC is building his relationship with her and they are exploring their feelings... and yeah yeah, hypercritical but she knew what she was getting into, you can't emotionally blackmail your partner into being okay with you sleeping around because you let them do it first, you kind of need to establish that that is okay first lol

But that is one big "what if?" based on one conversation. I am in no way saying that is what will happen, nor am I saying what should happen, just giving my two cents on what could happen.

Gotta wait to make a decision on Isabella. I want to see how her feelings develop before I form an opinion on it, I don't think she has had enough screen time.

Mara, Cassie, and Hannah are A-okay with me. A nice slow burn romance is nice... Unless they all turn into lesbians because apparently harem means polyamory/polycule these days.... Joking (kinda) Having to share LI's with other LI's kind of sucks in my opinion. A LI loses something special when they aren't exclusive to MC

Sasha, well her story is just starting so again, I kind of want to wait and see. I don't mind characters having a past (traumatic or otherwise) as long as it is done well.

That's my opinion on the LI's so far. I am enjoying the story though, I mean some of the forced behavior of the MC or choices kind of sucked but can't really change that lol And I just attribute them to him being young and the "traumatic events" influencing his decisions more than I. Most were early on though, I haven't really had any issues with recent updates. Haven't noticed any issues with grammar, at least nothing that sticks out ( though that may be because I am a dumb dumb) and animations are good. All and all a good experience and I am looking forward to more.

While I might complain and sound like I dislike certain LIs, I take no real issue with them if they aren't forced. Having variety in the game for players isn't a bad thing, allows people to find something they like... I was just giving my opinions on the LI's directions or possible directions in response to OnePT12

Hopefully I didn't spoil anything. Most of what I put was just my personal opinions on the LI's and not things that happened.
 
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