If you cum on her face, will she be Emma Frosted
If she makes you cum on your own face, do you become Frieza?
Maybe it is the "I cant see the forest, the trees are blocking the view" kind of thing, because this image is the best example of why the vibe is off as others suggested. And although I just see this character for the first time in my life, I fully agree, and with 100% confidence.
1. turtleneck =/= collar
That thin choker just screams 'cumslut'
(btw. I'd like to remind of my suggestion to add collar accessory for girls to use on protag)
2. perspective/posture
On your art, she just simply doesn't look as your superior, neither literally or metaphorically. Left side - chin up, nonchalant expression, she just knows she's above you. Right? It looks like she's admiring you and trying to get confidence to ask for your number.