Appreciate you asking for feedback - be careful though that everyone here will have their own fetishes but forget that since I'mma share my thought now (haha jk)
Personally I prefer the more 'realism'approach you are referring to simply in terms of that growing corruption and teasing elements. Those are my favourite parts of the game (which are more so in the beginning, like when she teases the nerd, the janitor, bus guys, delivery guy, Noah etc). I personally replay the game because of those, and tend to skip the scenes with almost instant intimate scenes.
This isn't for me to say idc about intimate scenes (i want them lol) - it's just the build up feels more satisfying especially when most of those build ups you have the choice and you get Gail to lead them on progressively, instead of like the landlord or for me worse, Dave, just dicking the shit out of Gail whenever and as much as possible almost immediately.
Edit: I have very specific scenes in mind but I didnt want this to be a wishlist lol though happy to message you directly if it could help