VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - The Office [Ep. 3 v0.3] [Damaged Coda]

Short review - great game!
I really like it. The plot and graphics are very good.
Special thanks for stunning Gail.

Another positive moment is - the game became only better with every release. And I can say, that this game gave me a lot of fun and pleasure, what is very important in my point of view.

Omg such a good NTR / corruption game. Stunning graphics, sexy, teasy, and with plenty of hot content. Not as vulgar or over-the-top as a lot of game (I enjoy that but this game did fine w/o it), respectful of the audience's time (though I did fast-click past some coffee-table dialog). I wouldn't say it has a lot of 'choices' as such.. There is one 'branching choice' (I think - go for the assistant or the fashion clerk), you follow the line of pro-boyfriend or ignore-boyfriend, and beyond that.. I mean obviously you're always going to pick the corruption options 'cause why else are you playing this. So.. fairly linear, maybe two playthroughs (one for each path).. but that's ok. What's there is wonderful

Almost skipped over this game due to what I perceived as being mediocre reviews.

Whilst I can see the basis for some of these reviews, namely: minor bugs, preferences that need to be adjusted to properly view text, and a weak early game with forced sex scenes, the game has dramatically improved since then.

The MC model is gorgeous - one of the best I've seen in a VN on this site after sampling nearly 100 games.

The lewd scenes are hot and vary. The MC doesn't just mindlessly enact in full sexual encounters with everyone, but rather just where the opportunity would present itself to get ahead.

Other than her immediate boss, the pacing is solid as well. Again, most characters you cannot have sex with at this time, and there is a real buildup to be experienced as the tension progresses.

It's not perfect, and there's a real danger that slow dev speed could severely impact how this game is perceived in the future (such as in the case of JOHN), but overall I was thoroughly impressed with how this game exceeded my expectations.

Game is pretty good.

GOOD
--well rendered female models
--lots of sex (which many other porn games lack for some reason)
--very obvious choices with avoidable ntr/cheating
--ingame cheat option available
--ingame (bonus?) gallery and scene replay (including scenes not viewed)

BAD
--intro logo sound is very loud
--cant skip transitions
--text is very hard to read so you have to mess with preferences (having white text with a white background is a bad choice when black outline is turned off by default)

Personally not into fat or old porn and didnt read enough of the story to say if its good or bad, but didnt pickup any cringe dialogue

There's more gawk gawk happening in the thread that is happening in the game. Super slutty bitch with a super slutty body only discovers she's a slut 20 something years in. Totally believable story. Let's pretend we actually read it and we don't just skip the dialogue until we get to the thicc.

Might as well be abandoned, dev overpromises and underdelivers constantly (if he delivers at all). Good protagonist model but thats about it for this game. A shame because it started of really good.

This is a visual novel about a woman of impossible proportions possibly using her body for the advancement in her career and possibly become truly depraved. It's pretty decent, although lacking in animations and the animations that are there are honestly not incredible. Yet, the story is still interesting enough to keep going and you just gotta keep going to see more of those impossible proportions, like come on.

I'm so sad to rate it only two stars but well i cannot give another rating.

Why would I want more? because the visual of the girls (mainly the MC) is beautiful. One of the best I have ever seen.

Buuuut there are so many things wrong.

First, no sound but as I came to realize, that's the "normal low level of development" in this kind of games. Too bad not enough developers understand the importance of music and sound design to make a game and nost just a visual novel thing.

But what is more problematic is the story:
- there are no real choices: when the story wants your character raped, she will be raped. Once, twice, thrice...
- choices are for "characters path" but lead to forced scenes afterward where you have no choice.
- and the main issue: the MC is not defined. She enjoys sleeping with anyone, but not because she is a slut (because that would require the player to have chosen her to be aslut) but just because plot says so. One scene, she loves her boyfriend, then another scene she loves sleeping with her boss, then a blowjob from a random guy in a cab, then doing a footjob in the same cab...

Those inconsistencies destroy the interest for the story. And without a story, it's just porn with a simple pretext story.

Dev isn't even quite certain of his forced scenes, but would he just decide a story, then stick to it. But let the player have a say in choices; if not during the rape, at least after. Or let the player choose to have MC abused, and not enjoying it.

Finally there are a lot of bugs (scenes appearing without image, or in the wrong place, or both at the same pace), names of NPC are not correctly written so you are not sure who is referred to (eg "Louise" in a sentence does not refer to a female "Louise" but to the male "Louis"; in an office environment where a Louise girl could work in the background of the discussion, it is quite annoying). Other example: some text will say "good trip on the cab!" whereas you could have either had sex in the cab or a huge fight with another passenger... that's incoherent and low quality work.

We have another game with a beautiful female figure. In Which games the scheme is very similar to the games found here. This time it is attractive Gail who wants to get to the top of the corporate ladder. But without proper education and hard work, it is extremely difficult. Despite her hard work, Gail doesn't get a promotion and decides to choose the easy way out, unaware of the consequences of her decision that will affect her life.

things on the +

Gail's character 8/10 has a little too much breasts

Plot 5+/10

Different paths to choose 7/10
there should be a choice as to whether or not Gail decides to accept her boss's offer

Choice matters 8/10
Gail won't be a turbo whore if you don't want her to

music 6/10

graphics 9/10

many interesting characters 9/10

stuff on -.

sex scenes 4+/10

Gail's intelligence 3/10
she can stand up to strangers .She will only give the boss a slap in the face to begin with and is submissive to the boss.

Building corruption Gail 1/10
was not quick, get to the point, he immediately accepts the boss's proposal.


Forced sex scenes 6/10 Two forced scenes, one at the beginning of the game and one in the middle, dev is about to rebuild it

4/10 If the text is too bright on a light background, it is hard to read

waiting for the release of a new part of the game 2/10

The game has a lot of potential, I can't wait to see how Gail's story continues.

+Gail looks hot
+Sexy scenes are well done
+I love the fact that this game doesnt shy away from throwing Gail into lots of exciting sexual situations and how she handles them depending on how the player wants to. I prefer not missing out and just accept about everything except her being "hurt" physically, for these situation I rather enjoy being th eone doing the hurting, so the choices are appreciated there.
+Many erotic scene have a different setting, so you can explore many different interest.
+The dialogue of the daily activities and social interactions is good
+There is thought put into some of the scenes and how they wil impact the story in the future.

-Gail is unreasonably dense when it comes to the effect she has on men, almost infuriatingly so. This makes her rather reactive instead of pro active. I guess its a plus when you as the player want Gail to be "sexually harrased" first and then its up to you if she actually enjoys it. From how it is portrayed, Gail is like a super sexy business genious with the emotial intelligence of a dead tree that burned down 200 years ago. If she would take a proactive approach to being an office slut that wants to sleep her way to the top, I'd have a better time playing it. Not that I mind scenes where she gets "surprise groped", its just... after like 2 times... how can she not figure the world out? Is she really stupid? Breaks the VN experience for me. And I also DREAD the fact, that she is not using politics to her advantage. I know this is not how her character is portrayed, but I'd love for her to play and like a submissive role to bosses, while she enjoys having a dominant role over her peers / subordinates. I got the feeling she liked ordering around the creep in the bus. Why not do that in the office? Also why wouldnt she use her looks to destroy Cindy? Also Gail feels kinda hollow. She never has a sense of achievement after "reaching a goal" or having a sexual encounter with one of her bosses. She is very engaged in the moment but seems to have non-existing medium to long term memory. She gets off by her boss fingering her to orgasm, yes I get that, this makes sense. She gets off by making a stranger licking her to orgasm in a bus, yes I get that, this makes sense. She gets off by jerking 2 randoms off in a taxi and getting fingered to orgasm by a third, the having two dudes cum on each other for her own amusement, I get that, this makes sense. I find it shocking how Gail then isnt happy when she leaves the office of her boss, thinking, yes now Im one step closer to the top and got off, this is great. Or how she doesnt think, I like having power over a person and making them lick me just because I can, I should explore this side of me, there are like 15 people I could use for that at my workplace. Or how she doesnt think, I like being the center of attention but still control the outcome of the situation (like in the taxi), I might be able to use this skill to my advantage. And then using her big brain, that is able to give a rather complex business analysis to her boss while being fingered to orgasm, conduct a plan to get for example revenge on Cindy for fucking her over with the presentation. I dont know this is a simple 3 step plan I came up with in like 2 seconds so don't expect much. Step 1: She likes being dominated by her boss -> go apologize, get punished, get off but verbaly throw Cindy under the bus. Step 2: get dirt on the bitch. Use Theo to her hearts content, get him off idk, she seems to like it. Also use the other males in the office, she likes the attention, use the attention. Step 3 could be many things, depends on how dark you want to go: either blackmail Cindy, publicly humiliate her, order sexual harasment on her, a combination of the three. My fucked up mind came up with a plan where Gail gets blackmail material on Cindy, uses both Theo and Louis to force Cindy eat out Gail, and then Gail letting them have a bit of fun with Cindy, making Cindy Gails personal office bitch. Outcome is the same, bitch destroyed, Gail is one step closer to the top.
Those are just some thoughts I'm constantly having^^ I guess as a gamer, I dislike her being bad at the game shes playing. I feel like I'm watching an overleveled player struggeling in the tutorial area.

Really like this one. The graphics are nice... and the MC is really, really hot. The only thing I think it's lacking is more interaction with her boyfriend. She's like a total slut (which is hot) but, he doesn't know anything about it. It'd be cool if there was some storyline leading that way. Either he gets pissed, she turns dominant and tells him how it is or he gets off on her sluttyniess. Any of which would be a nice expansion. Other than that. Total four stars! Love it!

Not bad, but not great either.

Better than average lighting, but the models look incredibly plastic.

Also, yet another game with unreasonably massive tits. The PC's chest could be half the size it currently is and still be unreasonably large.

As for the game itself, you do get a number of choices, but all it typically comes down to is "Be a slut" or "don't be a slut".

Other games have started to raise the bar on these sort of choices and The Office is falling behind in this aspect.

The game could get better. There's not a lot of content yet (Version E3 0.1b). So I'm hoping it adds a bit more depth to the choices. For now, there just isn't much to be excited about here.

The heroine's modeling is very good, and the plot is also very much in line with my taste. The content can be strengthened appropriately. For example, having sex with others is your boyfriend.Or you can add some compelling stories.

I like this game, Hot Female MC with great proportions going corrupt is a good teaser.

+ Renders are good 5/5
+ MC is hot and have lovely boobs
+ the setting (office) is also a great way for the MC to get corrupted and also all other things around it.


- Updates take a bit longer
I would say even if it takes time, it is still the best game here!

I've tried many games and every time I felt like the current game was "the best adult game I've played". Sure, there are some that are truly outstanding in many ways but let me tell you something.

The Office is the game that will give you the best hard-ons. The scenes are super sexy. Gail (the MC) is hands down the hottest girl in every VN, period.

Try it and play through a few episodes, trust me, you're in for an awesome ride.

[E2V0.3] Some of the writing isn't great, especially at the start, some spelling errors and some cringeworthy comparisons. The hot scenes make up for that though. Both corruption and faithful routes have some quality scenes. All in all quite good with room for improvement on the writing end.

Reviewing as of E2V0.3

This game is so GOOD!

If the renders are works of art, Gail is a masterpiece. Corrupting her was so much fun in this game. There are some minimal animations. The game doesn't leave you hanging until it delivers sexual content, you get what you came for pretty quickly.

The writing was very good. Nothing that made me angry, and no noticeable grammar or spelling mistakes. It's just full of fun steamy scenes.
Although Nathan(The boyfriend) is an absolute man child in the corruption route, but not enough to negatively impact my enjoyment. I don't know if he's different in different routes as I haven't tried them.

There is no music or sound in the game. It would've been nice to hear anything while playing. And the font and font size were hard to read at times

All in all, I loved my time with this game and I can't wait to see more in the future. Who knew The Office would be a great TV series, and a great VN as well

The game is really intriguing and provides pleasure. The model Gali is really breathtaking, thanks dev for bringing her. But the updates are really slow. Overall it has a nice potential!
The plot is also very thrilling to continue. I hope future updates are having bigger twists.

Pros - Gail is insanley hot, Nice renders
Cons- Everything else about the game
Choices Corruption or pure route right? Nope both end with you fucking your boss you just enjoy it or don't!
Story is if you ever played a female protagonists story then you played this one! Fuck the boss, mayor, hobo and I am sure the father in-law will be next!
It is getting really boring now that every fucking Female Protagonists game acts like they give you choice when in reality there is none.
This one is just not for me.

Personal favour.
The model of heroine is exactly curvy that I love most.
The story is lawd which also fits for me most.
And the author consistently works on the project which I repect most.
Hope keep going and add more curvy female characters in the future .