VN - Ren'Py - Onhold - The Office [Ep. 3 v0.3] [Damaged Coda]

Ep. 1 - v0.3

Look, this game isn't perfect despite my 5 star review, but I really like it and it has tons of potential.

• Renders are really nice
• Character models are great, specially Gail (I like them thicccc xD)
• Office setting is enticing
• Dev is active here and makes fast and steady updates (so far, 1 update per month on average, which is pretty good)
• No unnecessary sandbox, yay!

Could have a little more teasing and seducing, but that's just a personal preference. And I can't comment on story yet because it's too early, but it seems fine so far.

This has easily became one of my most anticipated games. I was bought by just one look at the main heroine and presently I'm hooked.

This is based on the version 0.3 (which is - I believe - third release), so there is not much content as of now... BUT the potential is enormous.

First of all, renders are really beautiful, models (I'm looking especially at you, Gail!) are great and overall the scenery is pleasant to view.

Gameplay is light, in the good way. It's not complicated, easy to swim through the story without thinking about unnecessary things (at first I wrote "thighs", apparently I still have Gail on my mind ), the choices here and there along with the point system are nice touches so it doesn't completely feel like linear VN.

I also am positively surprised by the story itself. It's not your usual corruption game, mainly because the pacing and reasoning is unlike any other title I can think of. Gail has her own motives, which I think are believable AND I could see that kind of behaviour in reality. I like the way she's struggling with the deeds she does, but also is not ashamed that she enjoys them quite a lot.

Overall, it's a gem, only to be cherished and I hope we have many more installments to come ahead of us.

An AWESOME looking game. I love the big titted MC and the way her corruption is building. I personally love NTR games and with big titted MCs so this game is everything my doctor recommended me jajaajjaa. Thanks for sharing

Models are out of this world and this VN reminds me a lot of Kate's Corruption on a higher quality scale. Female MC corruption games are always a blast for me to play and this one does not disappoint. The updates have been pretty frequent so I am excited to see how this story pans out. I do hope that there is a third path option created that allows the MC to gain corruption in other ways than just sleeping her way to the top but if not I can totally settle for what we have so far! Keep up the good work~!

My Rating of this Game is:

Pros:
+ Graphics Great
+ Characters Great
+ Hot Scenes
+ Nice Story
+ Nice Closeups
+ Many Sex Scenes

Cons:
- Nothing

Conclusion:
Nice Story with a lot of hot women, with huge tits.
The Game is easy Playing, no senseless walking around with good scenes.
The Story is also Pretty nice showing how to climb the Business ladder quickly.

Overall:
A Hot Story, Great Characters.
Worthy of a Download, and I bet you will love it.

Good Points
+MC looks pretty hot and its only good point about game...

Bad Points
-Writing is to poor. Story is pretty much nonsense and makes no sense at all.
-We dont have animations (Only have one as far i can see and its pretty bad with short length) so we are lacking sexual content here.
-We dont have enough image, positions etc in sex scenes for game dont have animations. Its lack of images and positions or angles etc.
-We dont have enough content about story or other things.


For The End
Its pretty much poor and time waste game. I'm waiting since its came first with every update: ''Maybe DEV will fix this game? Maybe he will make good changes?'' but nah he wont make any good progress. Its just waste of potencial and time. MC looks pretty hot with decent story and sex scens this game could be 4 star rate game easly but nah DEV dont want make that...

5* - this is just my kind of game. Gorgeous models, great outfits and heels, and a good dose of corruption / sluttification too.
Story seems pretty linear, but the writing is reasonable.
Gail would rock a short skirt and some outrageous boots too, hoping to see that sometime. And I could see her putting Cindy in her place too!

Early game but full of promises. The main character is one of the sexiest ever, face, make up, clothes, heels, hot and gorgeous. Looks like it's gonna be a straight to the point game and I'm totally fine with that. Please keep it up

I guess it's still super early, but seems like it could be a total fapfest, really fun and the scenes are damn hot. If you want to be immersed in a storyline and want tons of choice and all that good stuff, maybe not for you, but if you're here for a good time, definitely should try it out. The main character is simply wow. If you've played other games with female MCs that use their assets to get ahead, this falls right into that category with potential to be just as good as any of those.

Wonderful game, this game has a potential to be the best, the renders so beautiful and her thickness is unreal I like it, that old guy scene fucking her is so hot, I'm bored + tired of playing game that have handsome male fuck beautiful women or milf, it's already too many in this website, old guy fuck young women it's rare and this kind of game not too many in this website, i need something new, I will support this game, hope to see more content in the future

Yeah sorry. I can't play this. Fuck, I can't even make it through the first scene. Now I have no problems with stories about corruption and changing over time. Hell, I don't even have a problem with a story about a woman sleeping her way to the top.

But you have to be fucking shitting me if you think I'm going to play a story that goes from "How can I wear this, it's far too revealing." to "Fuck me on your desk." in a matter of minutes, in the actual story.

First scene: I can't wear this, it's far too revealing, I would be so embarassed... Teases boss with eye candy and cleavage revealing outfit... boss gropes her... she says she's going to report him to HR... he threatens her with "look how you're dressed, you're asking for it." (Literally that hasn't been an actual argument since the 80's)... boss grabs her, and starts molesting her... she pushes him into his chair, yelling at him for assaulting her... he tries to bribe her with the job of being his personal assistant... she pulls off his pants... boss forces his cock in her mouth and down her throat... boss cums... sets her on his desk... she goes along and they have more sexy time.

That's where I stopped. I'm like sorry, but nah. I can't play this shit show. If she was already sultry and slutty, fine I can believe it. If it was her trying to get attention but she is prudish and runs out, only to be corrupted over time. I could believe it. But going from prudish to slutty in about 20 minutes, in the actual story time. Can't believe it. Sorry. I just can't suspend my disbelief that much.

The writing was already sub par, not so much the grammar but really just everything about the story telling. The visuals weren't bad, though the tits are just too massive for what this story is trying to be. I got nothing against massive big titties, I write "Doll City" for fuck sake. They just aren't really fitting to what this story seems to try to be.

1 star, don't recommend. Not even going to bother putting it on my list since I couldn't make it through the first ten minutes of the game. Hell, I've probably spent more time writing this review than I could stand playing this story.

This is written poorly, but has good renders. To be frank, the writing is childish - it reminds me of poor AOL chatroom cybersex, full of typos and cliched or nonsensical adjectives ('petite vagina' 'muscular erection'). Only play this without reading through the text.

Fantastic game the renders quality is top notch, Gail look so fucking hot and sexy, this game has a potential to be Jessica O'Niel but in their own way
Hope to see more excellent content in the future

Main character Gail just looks so amazing. She has tight tits and big ass.
She just looks so sexy, with her glossy lips, glasses and sexy dresses.

Writing is good as well. I am surprised by the quality of the renders. The environment and overall graphics are really really good. I have also noticed that fluids in this game are better than other 3d games. The game gives options branches, if you are submitting then the boss treats her rough other wise she can probably go for her loving boyfriend (not my taste).

Looking forward to more of it.

Solid animations with nice models. Obviously wish for a actually game but hey.

Like the models. Looking forward to more work.

Hoping creator turns this into an actual full game. =D

Curvy is too good!

High rating for me because I enjoyed myself very much playing this game. First release was already good, very nice body types on the girls and good sex scenes, and with this v0.2 there is a nice choice in paths: stay loyal, cheat and/or go lesbian. There is a bit of a story and there are some choices, not overly complicated, and that's just the way I like it, this is a porn game afterall... Fapability : 5/5

Hi. I normally don't give such high ratings so early into the game but damn... nearly everything about this game hit the right spots in my tastes and fetishes. I am nearly speechless.

I can't and don't want to make a Pro/Cons here like a normally do. So i will just simply write what i liked and a few suggestions (requests?):

First of the graphic is INSANE. WOW. Your tastes in girls is fucking GREAT. i LOVE the mc. everything about her. the idea and character included. i also like the relationship and corruption points very much.
the english is great, and straight to the point, its starts right into the story without any blabla like a porn game should for the most part imho. you have decisions to keep things interesting and again playable. (TOP!) AND it's in renpy!

and my god... i need to separate this cause its so important for me: your positions and sex scenes are amazing. a bit fetish atm not too much is really nice, many positions (even standing sex and tit sucking! - even i personally hoped to see more tit sucking or animated ) and even animations which look solid. And you can reject her boyfriend! and other girls look hot too! FUCK YEAH!

the only - for me - concerning things are that Theo has to be always around her, that her boss dave should have more wrinkles and maybe a bigger nose to let him look older (i mean 25 years marriage can't let him look so "young" hello xD) and that Noah should be more the weird nerd guy who gets ignored or the guy who gives a shit on everything with longer hair, far more chubby with a less pretty face. i mean come on, a creepy and horny nephew should look more creepy imho. and Theo already looks like young Clark Kent. xD

so these are also my suggestions/requests + i hope to see more of the game and see more characters (especially old guys - maybe some small, very thing or fat guys with maybe even beard? you decide but please more old guys <3)

you are one of a few stars for me and definitely in my top 10 if not top 5 atm with the potential to be even higher!

Thanks for your effort, making and sharing and keep that god damn wonderful work up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

The second episode massively elevated this game imo. I mean that in terms of quality, but it's also a significant expansion in the amount of game content as well.

It's a female protagonist corruption game and the protag is very attractive and sexy, yet maybe proportioned in an overly-exaggerated manner. But that's just down preference and for many it will no doubt be a plus.

As mentioned the 2nd update is a big one and it really opens up the story and adds many interesting scenes and characters.

-the lewd scenes themselves are great.

-the renders are generally very high quality and clean.

-the same goes for the rest of the Daz3d work; environments, lighting, etc. Admittedly i don't have a discerning artists eye for this kind of thing but nothing stood out as poorly done to me.

-the few animations range from bare-bones-but-sufficient to high quality and smooth. That's one area that could clearly use improvement in quality and consistency, but personally i could take it or leave it. For me everything else about the game is good enough to stand on its own.

It was the setting and characters themselves that really appealed to me. So far the story of a woman embracing a more sexual and naughty aspect of herself is well done and enticing. Lots of fun stuff has already happened and more payoffs are set up. If you're the kind of person that takes issues with the pacing in a game like Jessica O'Neil's Hard News (not really the case for me, but i can see how some might feel that way, and i can appreciate a more direct pace too), this one is probably more in line with your preferences. It finds a nice rhythm between the very slow burn games and what are basically smut delivery programs that are a weird alternative to just looking at traditional porn.

There's already a good bit to enjoy and i am very much looking forward to more.

This VN is another corruption game. It's good though

PROS
Renders are crisp
Story is so-so
Characters are well done
Ladies are all hot

CONS
Run of the mill corruption VN

Overall
I gave this a 4 star because of the renders and models. I know this is only the second chapter, but the story is wash, rinse, repeat. Hopefully the dev puts some twists and turns in there to spice things up more. There are clear choices in game though. You can basically decide what path you want to carve out for the MC. I do recommend giving this one a try for yourself. Keep up the good work

This is beyond bad. This is barely a kinetic novel's early stage demo.
Characters behave contradictory, depending on which scene they are, and sometimes even stupid.
first of all Gail, she's trying toseduce her boss, but as soon as he touches her legs, she goes full "I'll report you to HR", and the boss instead of acting smart, goes full on sexual harassment...
Gail is supposed to be this prude woman that decides to be more seksqual to gain a baetter jobs oportunty, yet she goes from 0 to 100 in less than one render. there's none of tht promised corruption nor moral conflict...
and the sex is boring, anticlimatic and really poorly animated.
Engrish is so baad that in comparison this rewiew is a masterpiece of english literatures.
the only good thing? it doesn't use comic sans as a font. if you want to play it regardless, jst unren the images and fap to them