VN - Ren'Py - Onhold - The Office [Ep. 3 v0.3] [Damaged Coda]

Review version currently 0.3b
After finishing the whole update im amazed by the fact that this game goes straight into sex scene something you dont see in the first 5 minutes of the game . Story its not perfect but not bad also choices in this game are very interesting because it can lead to a different outcome each time .MC is propably one of the most attractive with the whole package for other characters wanting to get to her pants . Update schedule is not great but i believe its damm worth the wait because the developer has not disappoint so far in my opinion .

Cliched but always nice premise of a hot office lady getting corrupted.

Pros:
Great renders, no pointless grinding, choices matter, gets straight into the action.

Cons:
Writing is okay at best with some truly awful stuff mixed in there.
Quote from a scene where the boss is coming inside the girl: "Her muscles were rigid and she held her breath. Ribcage turned into two parallel rollercoaster tracks. Rump puckered."
WTF is that?? And there's plenty more where that came from.

With better writing could be a 4 to 5 star game.

I like this game (currently 0.3b) a lot. Female MC with great proportions going corrupt is always great and appreciated.
+ Renders are good
+ MC is hot and has a lot of different hot outfits
+ the setting (office) is also a great way for the MC to get corrupted

there are still a few kinks missing but since we are early in dev, they will hopefully be added.

- Updates take a bit longer

Not a blue balling game..
Not a fan big boobs still this MC is hot coz of face..
Totally a good game..

But dev shouldn't make promises which he can't keep..
Delays are okay every dev does that.. but publishing a release date yet delaying further is not good..
Every human say a date which is far away from the probability time.. so it doesn't make sense to me.

Pros:
- Good Graphics
- Sex Scenes are well done
- I personally love female MC games with corruption and this game has that
- Game doesn't take 3 hours and a college course to get to the sexual content

Meh:
- Writing is okay; not great

Negatives:
- No meaningful choices that I was able to find
- Corruption isn't done very well. The game is too quick to have the MC just let her boss fuck her for a promotion. That needed a lot more set up to be done properly imo.

Beautiful game. One of the most sexually enticing games I have ever played. The renders are absolutely breathtaking and the writing is phenomenal. The player choices seem to actually matter and the player is allowed to choose their own path. Furthermore the MC is probably the sexiest 3D rendered character I have ever encountered. This game is just such an amazingly well done sexual adventure, and I can't get enough. I wish I could travel forward in time, so that I could see how this game turns out. Lots of love to Damaged Coda. Keep up the great work.

This is addicting. Love the art, the simple choices that lead to sexier and dirtier scenes. awesome work guys! such curvy babes in skimpy dresses is always a turn on. the expressions and the situations hit the right spot. The intrigue and the final explosive outcome of choices is also appealing. awesome work guys!

Really looking forward to this continuing. Have only played the corruption/cheating route to this point but it is hot. Hope the character keeps her love for her man even though she goes loose to get what she wants professionally. Can't really think of any way to improve on this at this early stage. Just please keep up the good work and looking for more. Highly recommend giving this one a go.

This is the best game ever. Gail is so slutty I love her. Best thing bout this game is that it doesn't bullshit around or take it's time to build up, it just goes straight to the good stuff. This is what porn games should have been. Amazing work keep it up

a really extraordinary game!

finally a female protagonist who besides being super sexy, has a personality and internal thoughts!

the corruption that sucks all the characters is well written and makes you look forward to the different paths that this story can take you! I don't even know how to recommend this game more eagerly! sensational work!

Ps: for some reason it reminded me of von trier's nymphomaniac!

I wasn't sure where to rank it at first, it's on the high end of 3 or the low end of 4, but then I decided I've been following it and if I'm following a game, at least at that moment, it must be above average. 4 it is.
The chick looks hawt, like that it pushes some darker content (and hope that continues), I wouldn't call it ground breaking or in my top 10 but, it is good and I would say try if you haven't to at least see it.

Would probably give it 4,5 stars but it seems i cannot do that so 5 starts it is.
Is it a perfect game? No. But when i play the game and am so turned on about the main character that i do not want to skip a single scene, i had to go for 5 instead of 4.
Main character is very sexy, from head to toes, good renders too. Developer is good at creating sexy situations too, like the one in the bus, with the cleaning guy in the office etc.
The one thing that maybe bothered me a little bit is that she became a whore a little bit too fast. I had a choice obviously, and went for the cheating path, so it is my decision to make her a whore and not a loving girlfriend.

But there are similar games out there like Jessica o Neill˝s hard news, with a female main character that is on a road to corruption, but for example in that game Jessica is getting corrupted slowly, and honestly i prefer that.

That being said i had so much fun playing this game, and am fine if the developer continues making the game as it was so far.

I loved the graphic and the story is good and I hope next update are longer ones ... this game is one of my best games I love female protagonist and I hope to see more choices in the future like GGGB ....
and I hope to see new stuff and events because I have seen alot of common thing in alot of games like anna and a like

Solid start with a gorgeous MC and renders. Gets right to action which isn't a bad thing imo, and a refreshing change for female MC games. Spoilers below.

The first scene is an interaction with your boss where you end up having sex with him no matter your choice. The boss dynamic serves as the "main" storyline. You can have sex with him at every turn, or you can initially spurn him and earn "loving wife" points. However you eventually end up fucking him again in a soft nonconsensual scene where the MC still enjoys it. Both paths do not seem to affect the overall story as of yet, as the recent update ends with the MC soon to be blackmailed by the company CEO for having sex with her boss indeterminate of your choices.

There are also side characters who you can interact with for more lewd scenes or decline for loving wife points. Something I was pleasantly surprised to see is that these loving wife points actually unlock exclusive sex scenes with your husband. Frequently in female MC games, picking the non-corrupt choices usually just means foregoing content with no benefit, so it is nice that is not the case here. However the loving wife route is significantly less developed than the corrupt, so it would be nice if it got a little more attention in future updates. The story is getting more and more lewd so I don't expect the MC to stay a saint, but perhaps threesome scenes with the female love interests or some NTR that is consented to and enjoyed by the husband would be cool paths that you can unlock only if you have built up some loving wife points.

Most negative reviews boil down to two criticisms, lack of freedom of choice and rushed corruption. While both of these points true, they aren't necessarily bad things in my opinion. Not every game has to be a sprawling tree of branches and endings, sometimes a concise narrative works better. More importantly, not every female MC has to start out a prude and slowly be corrupted in order to have sex. 90% of male MCs fuck everything that moves from the start of the game, there is no reason why female MCs shouldn't have that option as well.

I really enjoyed the first two episodes and will eagerly await new updates. The only improvement I would like to see is the loving wife route getting a little more attention so my decisions feel more consequential.

*sigh* I don't know why every game with a female protag seems to involve some level of rape/forced sexual intercourse you can't avoid, I guess it gets others going, but it's a huge turnoff for me. Choices aren't super relevant and can't dictate any important changes. Gail is megahot which makes it an even bigger shame but it's also the only saving grace of this, essentially kinetic, novel so if you're just in it for the images then go for it. I'd rate it higher if the forced/corruption narrative was more well done but as it is it's sloppy at best and childishly ineffective at worst like in a lot of similar games/kns. In ref to the poll I don't know why I was at all surprised that a majority of people prefer forced sex for the mc but again it tells you a lot.

i gave this game some time to see where this is going. i like the mc, renders and animations. but what i dont like about this game is that you get locked on paths and that you can´t deny or do things because your points are to high or low. i tried some diffrent palystyle but dont liked any of them and just got frustrated. this whole point system is just not for me so i just stop playing this game. good luck to dev with this.

Story - a dime a dozen, nothing original here
Choices - mean nothing ( story should be about being a loving gf or slowly being corrupted but all roads lead to the same outcome -the mc gets fucked silly) kinetic tag should be applied here
Renders - really good
Dialogue -childish to say the least ( from prude to mega slut in literally 2 seconds ,thats the internal monologue of our mc)
Conclusion - if you're looking for a quick fap this game is for you,if you want a decent story with choices that make a diference in your playthrough move along there's none here.

Gail is absolutely gorgeous, her alone make the game worth it.
The only reason I don't put 5 stars is because the corruption path is not progressive. The very first corruption choice lead Gail to become an instant slut.

Excellent renders, hot MC and simple plot with instant access to sex scenes. I'd give this game 4 or even 3 stars because i feel thats what the solid average (well, with such good renders more like good) porn game SHOULD be like, but sadly thats not the case at all, and that makes this game really good in comparesing. Too often devs are trying too hard to put as much shit in their game as they can, forgetting why the game was made in the first place. In this game devs arent trying to read you a huge book wich you have no interest in, they dont hide the sex scenes behind hours of tedious grind. This is a porn game, nothing more and, whats the most important, nothing less. Its a simple and lighthearted story with really hot MC, high quality renders and no grind at all, what more could you ask for? The game is really short, thats true, but its short only because it has no unnecessary grind or endless dialogues wich leads nowhere. For the ammount of content that game already have some crazy developers could make a game that will force you to grind for days, but would that be better? Im sure not. Oh, and i like the choices mechanic which made in a way that refusing to be a total slut will not gonna just skip the scene but show you another. So its not just a plain "skip" button, its a real choice. Although calling it "good girlfriend" or something like that is kinda misleading.
The only "complaint" i have so far is not objective but more about fetishes. Its not a big one but i would love if we had some choice about it. Im talking about people peeping on MC having sex. I can get why someone might like it, but for myself i draw the line when MC notices that someones watching. The scenes and the situations themselves are good and its not such a big turnoff to skip them entirely, but i just wish there were option for the MC to "not notice" that shes being watched.
This game is definitely worth checking up, i think its the kind of game that you will love or hate instantly so you wont be losing much time even if you dont like it. Im surely going be waiting for the updates and hope that devs will keep do what they doing without taking sudden turns in the wrong direction.