VN Ren'Py The Office [Ep.4 v0.1] [Damaged Coda]

[Sadowdark]

I felt bad when Dave spanked her at the room where she was getting some documents, and later raped her at his office when she asked for a day off and refused to have sex with him. At least the scenes with her boyfriend, while boring to some fans, are far better than the ones from other girlfriend/wife corruption games.

There was Gail's corruption just to the point. We should have a choice when Dave offered her a deal, whether to agree or not. If not, Dave should start corrupting her, but in the scenes, we'd have a choice. It would be more logical.

 

[Kazanovaromeo]

I felt bad when Dave spanked her at the room where she was getting some documents, and later raped her at his office when she asked for a day off and refused to have sex with him. At least the scenes with her boyfriend, while boring to some fans, are far better than the ones from other girlfriend/wife corruption games.

You know what , the most successful unique adult games are the games with multiple choices , people love NTR they can have it , people HATE NTR they can have it , people love incest they can have it , people HATE incest they can have it , people love lesbian (like me) they can have it , the problem will be that there will be many storyline routes and huge work to do , SO, in this case "the Fans either take it or leave it" [ of course this is a very wrong statement from one of the supporter of another game in another thread ] , but what we can do???
By the way I correct his statement because he said "the Fans either Suc.. it or leave it".

 

[Sadowdark]

Seems not only Dave is going to blackmail/corrupt her if we are following that path. Now the janitor has a photo of her masturbading at the job and can use it against her, and the nephew discovered her affair with Dave at the graduation so he may also blackmail Gail with keeping her dirty secret by getting some "love" from his aunt.

I wanted to write that there was a corruption building up Gail just got straight to the point. Yes, but these events were later dependent on what path you are playing.

 

[faptainhook69]

Any thoughts on this? Android version lol

 

[Kotobiki]

The convo above I hope is trying to be intentionally uninteresting :x

 

[Kazanovaromeo]

Sadowdark
Dear Sadowdark
thank you very much for this inspiring expression "is atmospheric and radiates such warmth", because english is not my 1st language and this is an inspirig phraze to use.

 

[javikaston]

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Hey, Do you think this Gorgeous fabulous Magnificent Stunning Girl should be FORCED to any thing againest her will.

Nope I don't think she should.

 

[Bazing124]

very nice game

 

[javikaston]

I have a question for everyone.

What are some of your favorite things about Gail? Is there anything you don't like
What are they? Anything you thing that could be better?

I'm talking about Gail as a person. The game is completely different

 

[Kazanovaromeo]

I have a question for everyone.

What are some of your favorite things about Gail? Is there anything you don't like
What are they? Anything you thing that could be better?

Dear javikaston, if you speak about Gail as a girl/woman , simply she is one of the most gorgeous girl in all (Adult and even Video games) ever.
if you speak about Storyline , For me ONLY I HATE to be FORCED to do any thing and it is better to have the options to do what we like and neglect what we dislike.

 

[javikaston]

Dear javikaston, if you speak about Gail as a girl/woman , simply she is one of the most gorgeous girl in all (Adult and even Video games) ever.
if you speak about Storyline , For me ONLY I HATE to be FORCED to do any thing and it is better to have the options to do what we like and neglect what we dislike.

I'm speaking as Gail as a person. The game is something completely different

 

[The Senior Perv]

I have a question for everyone.

What are some of your favorite things about Gail? Is there anything you don't like
What are they? Anything you thing that could be better?

•Favorite things about Gail?
Her body (too obvious); her persona when following the faithful girlfriend path (she does regret the things she does and tries to make up for her boyfriend); some of her scenes with non disgusting people (Dave, the boss, the guys from the bus for example) like the boy that works with her (can't remember his name) or the girl from the clothes shop; she reminds me of Anna from Become a Rockstar, except Gail is way more voluptuous, so that's a big like haha.

•Is there anything you don't like? Anything that could be better?
I think she got corrupted way too fast. Maybe the game isn't going to be too long and that's the reason why she changed, but I would have liked something like a blackmail that would keep Gail attached to Dave or other guys; either she resists and fights against it (faithful girlfriend path) or eventually gives herself in and enjoys it (corruption path); and I think her body should stay as it is, she is voluptuous enough and adding more breast or ass would kinda ruin her, at least for me... and that's all I can think off.

This can be my favorite girlfriend/wife corruption game. Not my favorite genre, but it's a very enjoyable AVN.

 

[javikaston]

•Favorite things about Gail?
Her body (too obvious); her persona when following the faithful girlfriend path (she does regret the things she does and tries to make up for her boyfriend); some of her scenes with non disgusting people (Dave, the boss, the guys from the bus for example) like the boy that works with her (can't remember his name) ir the girl from the clothes shop; she reminds me of Anna from Become a Rockstar, except Gail is way more voluptuous, so that's a big like haha.

•Is there anything you don't like? Anything that could be better?
I think she got corrupted way too fast. Maybe the game isn't going to be too long and that's the reason why she changed, but I would have liked something like a blackmail that would keep Gail attached to Dave or other guys; either she resists and fights against it (faithful girlfriend path) or eventually gives herself in and enjoys it (corruption path)... that's all I can think off.

This can be my favorite girlfriend/wife corruption game. Not my favorite genre, but it's a very enjoyable AVN.

I agree. Her corruption was way too fast.
I think she went too far with fucking Dave. If she was going to fuck him it could have been drawn out more. And her body is a masterpiece. Those big tits and that nice ass.

 

[Malika1234]

should also have a slow lesbian/bi seduction, or if possible lesbian route with a little reluctance. Personality wise i think shes fine.

 

[javikaston]

should also have a slow lesbian/bi seduction, or if possible lesbian route with a little reluctance. Personality wise i think shes fine.

thx you for talking about the game. but what are your thoughts on Gail as a character?

 

[The Senior Perv]

I agree. Her corruption was way too fast.
I think she went too far with fucking Dave. If she was going to fuck him it could have been drawn out more. And her body is a masterpiece. Those big tits and that nice ass.

Yeah, when going for the corruption path Gail suddenly stops loving Nathan, to the point it seems being with him is disgusting for her, despite them having been in a relationship for quite a while, and only longers for Dave or any other guy to bang her. Seemed way too fast for me her quick change of attitude. I forgot to mention that I would like to see more female options for the lesbianism route... only two girls, and a very small lewd scene, isn't enough.

And agree with you, her body is a masterpiece. Easily one of the hottest girls I have seen in all AVN I have played.

 

[javikaston]

the thing thats makes me kinda not like Gail is how she able to look nathan in the eyes and tell him that she loves him.
I hate nathan with a passion. but doesn't deserve that. that besiding said. I have no idea how nate can fall for a that ugly ass model. I have bigger tits than she does. and I don't have tits. yes nate beyond stupid. and If Gail does ever get some sense and leave him. I hope she steals his ps5 and sells it on him but its very clear that Gail doesn't love Nate. otherwise she wouldn't fuck everything in sight.

I also dislike how she forgives so fast. Perfect example is in the same day it seems. not only he buy the ps5 instead of paying rent. Gail wanted some time with him. so she got in front of him and tried to tease him and he instantly blow up at her. fuck his game and fuck his. if you decide to make him pay for his bull shit. Gail forgives him the next day. or she forgives him that night. even though it was his fucks. Gail can be a hypocrite. So there are times I fine it hard to defend her.

 

[javikaston]

Yep, you can't really defend Gail as much as you want, especially when she's fully corrupted. While it can be "understandable" (it isn't obviously) that she had to let Dave "keep banging her" because he gave her the raise, what justifies her flirty and lewdness towards the other characters? Nathan can be seem as an idiot who likes to play videogames, but at least he has shown to love her and never been unfaithful (at least for now).

All Gail has to do is pay attention to what is meaningful to dave. To his mistakes. and each time they meet up and fuck and whatever. Gail learns something. maybe how to be shameless. Gail has access to his files. once she has enough dirty info on him she come blackmailed. and keep it going as a series. once that blackmail session is over Gail already has another one to fuck him with. Gail is book smart. not so much common sense smart. If she would have taken her time. Gail would have everything she wants. It wasn't until dave spanked her and made her cry that he knew he got her. and then it was just downhill for there. Also I dont know why she lets him do that. when she could easily beat him senseless. she has the attitude with others she should figure out a way to not be so afraid of the old fuck he half way in the grave as it is. and Gail should just tell his wife.

 

[javikaston]

That's right, she could easily manipulate Dave and make him do whatever she wanted, and even his own boss, but sadly she prefers to be used as a slave toy. The worst is other characters, much less intelligent than her, may be able to blackmail her later; the janitor with the photo he took; or her nephew after catching her having sex with Dave at the school restrooms. Even the woman that was supposed to win the raise, before Gail banged Dave, is probably going to find evidence and used it against her and the other people involved (a public humilliation where Gail's family and even Nathan are present maybe?).

in the corruption path doesn't mind being a fuck toy. but she said it herself she wants to make it to the top. she can't do that if dirty fucking dave is in the way. so I have a feeling that once Gail has learned all she can fuck the worthless fuck. She going to destroy him and take his job first. then everything else.
Dave might think they have a master and slave thing going on but what it really is a teacher-student role. and just like it always happens without fail the student becomes the teacher. and either discards the old teacher or makes them submit to them.

very soon. dave is going to see the monster that he created and once that happens hes fucked.

also if dave is still trying Gail like a fuck toy. Im going to create myself another fan fiction. and destroy Dave's live myself.

now as for the good girl route. Gail finally grows a backbone and tells dave to fuck himself. and if he try to take her job away. he won't like the outcome. eitherway it about time dave retired. either by force. or him willing. but hes won't so Gail. should slowly strip his insanity away. like i said before. shes book smart. and dave is just retarded.

 

[javikaston]

i already made a fan fiction. but i half assed it. this time around i would time my time.