Ok really enjoying this one...but another non native English dev I'll assume?
There's a LOT of grammar mistakes. Secondly, who the fuck says gosh these days unless your an 8yo boarding school girl? Seriously? Why do so many VN's have this in...blows my mind. Really, a 27yo woman of the world saying gosh or clitoris instead fuck or clit? heheh. If it was set in 1870's upper-class England then fair enough, like, golly, isn't it all rather improper dears. Come on lol. Next, no one...and I mean no one, says Miss First Name...ever...especially not in the business world. Give the MC a last name. Another hugely annoying aspect of far too many VN's. Also, rather confused why a 27yo who's been working full time for years is only just graduating. Might have made sense in your head but it doesn't in the context of the story.
That aside...lovely renders, great animations (though forced and not able to click to skip is annoying), really nice menu setup too, looking forward to seeing where this goes. Keep up the good work.