Sadowdark
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I hate dave. Gail should kick him in the balls
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Jokr_
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Considering the drastic turns that happens in such kinda games, it can turn into a threesome.
it probably would. The wife would be fucking Dave in the ass. While hes eating Gail out. Then While Dave is getting his dick sucked his wife is face fucking him lmao! I say all of this with the Dave lovers in mind.
Look at you hero now! lmao.
Enjoy being Dave. As he gets what he deserves.
I hope that strap on can ignore Dave and either be used by Gail or on Gail by her office rival after a catfight... I'm not a Dave fan, and I don't hate him either I don't care about himit probably would. The wife would be fucking Dave in the ass. While hes eating Gail out. Then While Dave is getting his dick sucked his wife is face fucking him lmao! I say all of this with the Dave lovers in mind.
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Enjoy being Dave. As he gets what he deserves.
Losersriot
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You play like GIRL in female ONLY game (when missing lesbianism!!!
) on F95, where 99% games male or multiple protagonist !? Little funny lier ))
hakarlman
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It's asking us to rename relationship.
Gail is Ava's what? Are they sisters?
Gail is Noah's older sister or what?
How is she able to read the mind of the guy? Is this multiple protagonist?
Renders are great, music is nice, but this mind reading stuff breaks immersion. I don't see a superpowers or sci-fi tag?
Text size is too small. Edit: good job on dialogue customization, nice!
What the hell, she sucks the guys dick in under two minutes? hahaha. Isn't this supposed to be a corruption game? That means SLOW. The first thing he should do is grope her ass, then it escalates from there, COME ON.
GREY TEXT? WHAT THE FUCK? WHO USES GREY TEXT.
The boss is the worst fucking antagonist I've ever seen in a corruption game. He seems like such a nice and decent guy.
WTF. She sucks his dick, makes him cum, then he goes down on her, then makes out? .... WHAT IN THE ACTUAL FUCK IS GOING ON? hahahah
DUDE .... SERIOUSLY? Is this a dream sequence or something? Did he corrupt her in like 5 minutes?
How do we disable the fading between pictures? It's very distracting.
WTF. Antagonist suffers from premature ejaculation? I don't think I've ever seen that in a corruption game. hahaha this is the worst antagonist in the history of corruption games. hahahah.
He would make a better cuckold husband.
WTF? Why is she presented as being in a position of power?
EDIT: Oh my god this game sucks. GREAT RENDERS. Great Dialogue Customization. Nice Music. SHIT everything else.
EDIT: This game could easily be making three to four times more $$$ on patreon, if he just followed the basic rules of corruption games.
1) make the antagonist an asshole, not a nice and decent guy.
2) start slowly with his hand groping her ass or something, then it slowly escalates. it should take a while before they get to the sex.
3) the antagonists should be SCUM OF SCUM, the biggest piece of shit dirt bags to ever exist on the face of the planet.
4) do not put her into positions of power in the early or mid game. She should not be respected, unless your'e making a vanilla harem romance game or some shit.
Gail is Ava's what? Are they sisters?
Gail is Noah's older sister or what?
How is she able to read the mind of the guy? Is this multiple protagonist?
Renders are great, music is nice, but this mind reading stuff breaks immersion. I don't see a superpowers or sci-fi tag?
What the hell, she sucks the guys dick in under two minutes? hahaha. Isn't this supposed to be a corruption game? That means SLOW. The first thing he should do is grope her ass, then it escalates from there, COME ON.
GREY TEXT? WHAT THE FUCK? WHO USES GREY TEXT.
The boss is the worst fucking antagonist I've ever seen in a corruption game. He seems like such a nice and decent guy.
WTF. She sucks his dick, makes him cum, then he goes down on her, then makes out? .... WHAT IN THE ACTUAL FUCK IS GOING ON? hahahah
DUDE .... SERIOUSLY? Is this a dream sequence or something? Did he corrupt her in like 5 minutes?
How do we disable the fading between pictures? It's very distracting.
WTF. Antagonist suffers from premature ejaculation? I don't think I've ever seen that in a corruption game. hahaha this is the worst antagonist in the history of corruption games. hahahah.
He would make a better cuckold husband.
WTF? Why is she presented as being in a position of power?
EDIT: Oh my god this game sucks. GREAT RENDERS. Great Dialogue Customization. Nice Music. SHIT everything else.
EDIT: This game could easily be making three to four times more $$$ on patreon, if he just followed the basic rules of corruption games.
1) make the antagonist an asshole, not a nice and decent guy.
2) start slowly with his hand groping her ass or something, then it slowly escalates. it should take a while before they get to the sex.
3) the antagonists should be SCUM OF SCUM, the biggest piece of shit dirt bags to ever exist on the face of the planet.
4) do not put her into positions of power in the early or mid game. She should not be respected, unless your'e making a vanilla harem romance game or some shit.
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she can't read minds.
you're right Dave is a piece of shit. and the build-up is non-existent.
for the relationship thing they can be what ever you want.
but Ana and Gail are sister's noah is ana's son. Nate is a morn. Theo is a cuck. Dave is a walking corpse.
I think DamagedCoda should add new scenes to the beginning of the game to flesh out the escalation of Gail's and Dave's first encounter.
Coda needs to do alot of things to get the game to where it should be to be honest. but yes that is one of them.
Sadowdark
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I agree that the Gail coruption down too quickly wasn't built at all She just got straight to the point
That makes sense since Coda wanted to have sex QUICKLY to give the fans something in the first release. But now that he has a decent following he can flesh out the story to focus more on quality than quick quantity.
i agree. but only coda knows how he wants the game to go. i just like to get people active in here doing what ifs. and shitting on Dave whenever possible. Some people like him other don't. I fall under I hate Dave! camp
Now that Coda has a following he should spend time on character development. World building. and Correcting the story so it makes logical sense.
dolfe67
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which is even worse. There needs to be some kind of a outline to follow. seven almost 8 updates in. and there doesn't see to be any overall goal to the game. Yeah it states that Gail wants to make it to the top. But Getting fucked by dirty dave can only do so much for her career. and Now that dirty dave has Gail as a fucktoy. Dave isn't going to let Gail go anywhere. Gail is the only good thing that has happened to the old fuck in decades. So where can the story go now?? It will only get worse for Gail.
Each time Gail and Dave meet Dave forces Gail to submit more and more. Doing nastier and nastier shit. lol
I'm getting next. Dave is going to be fucking Gail in the ass and doing ATM soon. He already had her giving him a Rim job.
Where does everyone else think the game is going next.
Whats nasty shit is Dave going to do next to Gail.
My guess. Hes going to face fuck her until she passes out.
and then probably start hitting her. etc
Dave can
1. Pimp out Gail to clients
2. BDSM Gail
3. Fuck Gail in her apartment with BF asleep
4. Fuck Gail's sister in front of Gail
5. Fuck Gail and her sister
6. Fuck Gail in public: have her underneath the table
7. Fuck Gail in front of BF but with Gail hidden underneath table
8. Fuck Gail while she is on the phone to BF / sister / mom
9. Fuck Gail at Dave's house while his wife is sleeping
10. Dave makes Gail fuck Dave's son to make him a man and/or fuck Dave's elderly father
1. Pimp out Gail to clients
2. BDSM Gail
3. Fuck Gail in her apartment with BF asleep
4. Fuck Gail's sister in front of Gail
5. Fuck Gail and her sister
6. Fuck Gail in public: have her underneath the table
7. Fuck Gail in front of BF but with Gail hidden underneath table
8. Fuck Gail while she is on the phone to BF / sister / mom
9. Fuck Gail at Dave's house while his wife is sleeping
10. Dave makes Gail fuck Dave's son to make him a man and/or fuck Dave's elderly father
My first question is. Why and where do you guys keep getting the idea that Ana would ever touch Dave to begin with....
and the rest I've already had about Dave. Also for shits and giggles picking from the list given above what would a scene from each option look like.
I honestly can't wait to see what Dave does. So I can make some fan fiction flipping it on him. and Putting him through whatever.
BDSM Gail. Damn that would suck for Dave.
Gail getting fucked in front of Boyfriend.....
Dave getting fucked in front of peers.
I Love the ideas yall come up with. They are all colorful.
BDSM Gail. Damn that would suck for Dave.
Gail getting fucked in front of Boyfriend.....
Dave getting fucked in front of peers.
I Love the ideas yall come up with. They are all colorful.