VN Ren'Py The Outong [v0.1.6] [Gon D. Eser]

[Ursus4321]

A pretty fun game. Congratulations dev.

 

[Gon D. Eser]

I'am gonna definitely check the game, keep it up.

Try using intel denoise for the noisy images, takes away a bit of the details but atleast you get rid of the heavy noise.

well, nice advice

changelog v0.0.6 ?

ah, yeah I forgot

Gondeser i'm a bit lost about the transformation tag too, can you clarify?

yes, for the transformation tag is you will see people turn into a dragon, I plan to add some kind of transformation in the future

I have updated my mod to v0.0.6 HERE

hmm... OK

the girl is so pretty

who's the girl?

The description doesn't give us much, would anyone care to elaborate more about the game?

in this game, you will play the role of a mage

Da hell some are pretentiously complaining about the "grain" and renders? If it is any like the screenshots, they are more than okay. Dev should focus instead on other things first (whatever they are).

hmm...yeah some

Not gonna lie, I like it very much
The girls are beautiful and the story and lore are good enough to keep you interested, but…
Where is the porn? Is a porn game after all, right? Anyway, I just wish there were more balance between the story part and the lewd part of the game.

I just want to make the lewd scene happen naturally and don't want to make it rush because it's a VN not like other fuck games

Alrighty then... list of Pro's and cons. Then a few words.

Pro's - The animated sex scene wasn't that bad.. and what the hell, that's the main thing a lot of folks care about.

Cons - Everything else.

Depending on your viewpoint this could either be a really rough job with Engrish, bad writing, jumpy story.... OR it could be from what I've gathered by the DEVs responses to some of what's been written to him. Just a dude who's first language isn't english who felt like writing and rendering a story.. because what the hell, it's something he's wanted to try.

Props to the man for putting this much effort/content/work out there. If he wants to continue it just as it is.. well then more power to him.. BUT if he wants to step this game up.. well then maybe he should consider putting feelers out there for some like minded individuals who wouldn't mind giving a hand. He's got a storyline.. but he's not a great writer. Maybe his ideas couple with somebody who can put them down on paper better? A bit of help/advice can't hurt.

But, you know what? If the man wants to continue on just as he's been doing that's fine by me.. looks like he's having fun with it and when you get right down to it that's what this is all about.

Keep plugging away Gondeser

yeah, you're right.

I really enjoy this one and am glad you are able to continue on with the story. This is one of those really good storys that seems to be very under played. thanks again for the share and please continue on.

I'm glad if you like and of course, I'll continue developing this game

Thanks for saving me the time and the download.

good for you then

A pretty fun game. Congratulations dev.

oh, really?

 

[JB08]

Can I get an example of this graphic violence? Its one of the tags.

 

[Gon D. Eser]

Can I get an example of this graphic violence? Its one of the tags.

you can see here

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[Paapi]

Mc need stat points

 

[Ive-11]

What is transformation content here ??
Femdom avoidable ??

as far i know its not, and its just f/f not f/m

so what does the transformation tag stands for ?

Gondeser i'm a bit lost about the transformation tag too, can you clarify?

i dont really remember, but as far i know is dev mentioned its a guy turn into dragon(not mc), and also if correctly i do remember theres a femdom i means f/f but with his dick on it, so its basicly a futa but theres no tag on it , or maybe its just my illusion ?

 

[Gon D. Eser]

Mc need stat points

hmm... I'll consider adding some stat point, but maybe on the major version and it still too long

as far i know its not, and its just f/f not f/m


i dont really remember, but as far i know is dev mentioned its a guy turn into dragon(not mc), and also if correctly i do remember theres a femdom i means f/f but with his dick on it, so its basicly a futa but theres no tag on it , or maybe its just my illusion ?

yeah, that's true it's just your illusion I never make a futa character in this game

 

[KenneX]

Very good concept, plot and models but very bad writing. Even with proper English it would still sound silly . Fortunately it can be easily rewritten with mods/updates in the future.

 

[nhel]

here is my unofficial android port of The Outong v0.0.6 + Compressed + WT/Gallery Mod

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visit my blog for more android ports

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[caxhub]

Download android v0.0.6 APK

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P/s: Request Link Android Game at my

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[Nateberuks]

layla retired from ml and come here

 

[ImperialD]

at 1st i thought what a weird name for a game .. than i downloaded it and played and thought dam this game is pretty dam good ... so wheres my next update ,,, hmmm ... stop making me wait dam you

 

[gtz-god]

ok the walkthought mod got a bug in it because it say it 0.5 even so it 0.6

 

[Chris Greenway]

I'm still thinking about it

is his sister going to be a romantic intrest too

 

[PhoenixAuburn]

v 0.6 for OSX Mac doesn't seem to work. Its not a Ren'py file.

 

[yamcha]

I like this game so far good job!

 

[Deadlyreaper]

so the walkthrough mod does not work, the game starts with mod not gives a crash without starts the game

 

[Spfjolietjake]

I really enjoy this. The language is somewhat brutal. But overall I find this vn charming and engaging plus I want to bang all the womenz in it.

Best of luck with this and I look forward to more

 

[AceOfNiagara]

I really enjoy this. The language is somewhat brutal. But overall I find this vn charming and engaging plus I want to bang all the womenz in it.

Best of luck with this and I look forward to more

Kinda looking forward to that part myself.

 

[AshramAscendant]

I really enjoy this. The language is somewhat brutal. But overall I find this vn charming and engaging plus I want to bang all the womenz in it.

Best of luck with this and I look forward to more

Kinda looking forward to that part myself.

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Really? ALL of them? She looks...unpleasant.

Also, yeah, the word usage throughout this game is really bad. I don't even know if "Engrish" is the right description...