Just like with almost every submission, if the renders and roi animation are sweet, the dialog is horrendous...like it is here.
The language translation is only part of the issue though, since it's clear nobody have shown the Devs what a Thesorasus is or how to use one, it's like they find a word and HAVE to use it...in every sentence...sometimes repeatedly IN that sentence.
One of the more annoying repetitive use of words was "Fuck".
In one paragraph it was used SEVEN TIMES in various iterations, which made it sound like a grade-schooler wrote it lol.
He has Magic Power, and that Magic Power is Powerful for his Magic, that he cannot contain that Magic Power, I have Magic Power and the Master has Magic Power, so we know you have Magic Power...
Just post an ad on here looking for someone to donate their time to do a once-over with the script and iron out the huge errors.
If I had a crash course in editing dialog, I would simply do it myself.