- Thread starter PhatSmash
- Start date
- May 2, 2020
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Hey man, overall solid game idea, good start.
I see people complaining about the MC being an ass, dont listen to them too much, its a breath of fresh air to be a bit different than your average pussy whipped male MC in 95% of the games on here. The only suggestion when it comes to him, overall writing and character dialogue is use the word "bro" a bit less, or at least have a designated character that says it instead of everyone doing it randomly.
I've wrote my thoughts on another game that is quite similar to this one when it comes to gameplay type, point in time the game is in when it comes to game development and medieval/fantasy setting. Pretty much everything there applies to this game as well so you can look into that and you can also check that game ("What a Legend!") out yourself to get some more ideas for the future.
Cheers.
I see people complaining about the MC being an ass, dont listen to them too much, its a breath of fresh air to be a bit different than your average pussy whipped male MC in 95% of the games on here. The only suggestion when it comes to him, overall writing and character dialogue is use the word "bro" a bit less, or at least have a designated character that says it instead of everyone doing it randomly.
I've wrote my thoughts on another game that is quite similar to this one when it comes to gameplay type, point in time the game is in when it comes to game development and medieval/fantasy setting. Pretty much everything there applies to this game as well so you can look into that and you can also check that game ("What a Legend!") out yourself to get some more ideas for the future.
Cheers.
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- Aug 7, 2016
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Fuck... yeah, game about female orc, finally
- Aug 9, 2018
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i love this new update but it was kind of spoiled by the new home page on a side note the chiefdom and shaman's daughter what new stuff can we do with them in the future ?
- Jul 23, 2018
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- Nov 4, 2018
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Never av seena mor glitched gam
Like seriously I had to press ignore approximately 20 times in the first 10 minutes,
3 showed up the moment I launched the game yeah thats right 3 errors before the main menu appeared,
A whole ant colony of bugs I'd get a min or two of sfw content then another 3 errors over and over again till I finally uninstalled.
Like seriously I had to press ignore approximately 20 times in the first 10 minutes,
3 showed up the moment I launched the game yeah thats right 3 errors before the main menu appeared,
A whole ant colony of bugs I'd get a min or two of sfw content then another 3 errors over and over again till I finally uninstalled.
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- Jan 13, 2018
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Good game so far! Great art, Orc Woman x Human Male is a favourite of mine, good writing. Main character is completely fine imo. Very excited to see this go further.
seems like there's a name bug because I just downloaded the game changed the name and at some point in chap 4 the text defers to bratan. If this is a bug then please fix for next version. Great game btw.
- Nov 18, 2018
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I wonder if the dev played the Android port he released. It's pretty broken and unplayable. After the map screen, there is no way to progress without the renpy error screens crashing your game.
This game is surprisingly enjoyable. I would keep doing what you're doing with the MC, I think it makes a kind of sense he is the way he is. Completely over his head, physically and culturally, his own weapon as it were his wits, and instead of being passive he decides on aggression which works because of the vision of the shaman and the fact that the orcs around him find the aggression relatable. That at least makes sense.
- Sep 9, 2018
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The art is rather nice I found quite easy to get into which is a big plus. Story was quick to get into for me. The progression of the characters is nice, it'll quite nice to see potential variants of previous actions later on. The UI stands out and a real good job there.
There needs to be a pass trough of the dialogue some of the early stuff has some bad English structure (then there is stuff like man being used instead of men etc.) Gameplay wise it could be improved if you saw less repeated dialogue and a message to say you've seen all the bits of this section so far.
There needs to be a pass trough of the dialogue some of the early stuff has some bad English structure (then there is stuff like man being used instead of men etc.) Gameplay wise it could be improved if you saw less repeated dialogue and a message to say you've seen all the bits of this section so far.