Mister Wake
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gotta keep an eye on this one! Its very good, but just needs more scenes 
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Arkade
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Hoping updates are consistent.. Dev is aiming at what.. one a month?.. Have they said? . I supported on boosty for 1.2- getting things a week early and supporting the potential is fine- just hope updates are somewhat regular.
I have now played this. It is fun, just needs more content. System works great imo, just needs more stuff, considering the main part of this gameplay is watching the right side of the screen(the girl and mentor,) the gameplay itself doesnt need to be very complex, focus on the right side of the screen mainly and I think this will be a great game. Maybe have some item that keeps the light at 10% or so as well, for those that want to see the girl at all times, whether she is 'h-ing' or not.
Hello. Thank you! Releasing an update once a month (2 months at worst, I hope) seems manageable to me. But I can't say for sure yet. It will be much clearer when I update it a couple more times.
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As someone that loves Kegani Lab games I am looking forward to how the game progresses in the future.
one suggestion:
- torch item button needs be on a seperate layer than on your item inventory so you can use it whenever. Else you will just be seeing black shadows.
When you flesh the game out more and start getting more and more animations for her to cycle through, consider disallowing 'early game' ones as she gets corrupted so we're not seeing a million ass slaps and light petting.
I can also see it get jarring when she does something like reluctantly giving a blowjob only to transition to a full nelson scene or something.
Have some continuity with the groping I guess is what I'm getting at.
So using that reluctant blowjob example I mentioned before, have it transition to him guiding her head, or her giving it herself with some confidence as she glances at the 'camera' to make sure you're not looking, and then have that one transition to him being rougher until he cums, with each main transition being another room or combat encounter.
Then for players who want to prevent NTR, you can give them an option to spend stamina to check behind you to see if they're doing anything to prevent them from escalating provided you aren't split up, using that same split up mechanic you can add things like teleportation traps and what not, and then use skill checks to have the player avoid them and split the mentor off from the party, or fall into it and you get split instead.
I can also see it get jarring when she does something like reluctantly giving a blowjob only to transition to a full nelson scene or something.
Have some continuity with the groping I guess is what I'm getting at.
So using that reluctant blowjob example I mentioned before, have it transition to him guiding her head, or her giving it herself with some confidence as she glances at the 'camera' to make sure you're not looking, and then have that one transition to him being rougher until he cums, with each main transition being another room or combat encounter.
Then for players who want to prevent NTR, you can give them an option to spend stamina to check behind you to see if they're doing anything to prevent them from escalating provided you aren't split up, using that same split up mechanic you can add things like teleportation traps and what not, and then use skill checks to have the player avoid them and split the mentor off from the party, or fall into it and you get split instead.
Played and enjoyed the game so far. The early delving isn't bad but it can be rough at the start. The only options that one can do right now are delve and buy a few items. Overall a decent little short game rn but I look forward to future updates where you can do more outside of just delving.
This guy is really doing a great job! That game is still limited of course but the idea behind it is amazing! I'm sure that this will be a 10/10 game. Keep up the good work!!
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really good concept. My one piece of feedback would be a more gradual escalation to the lewd acts between the mentor and the fmc, plus i think she should be tougher to break. oh also splitting should yield greater rewards (either in treasure or how the girl responds to the mentor).
Love the Game as a Concept, but apart from it not having a lot of Content, I feel like your Game would benefit from having more stats that slowly change depending on what happens. You could have sexual compatibility for example, which could influence how much sex between mc and his gf change her arousal. You could have corruption as a lasting consequence of not managinf the gfs arousal and more. You could even have love and sexual compatibility for the mentor which could decide if she just ends up fucking him anytime she can or if she actually leaves mc and ends up with mentor.
Also, we need at least some sort of interaction outside of dungeon diving. But I'm sure that's planned anyway.
Also, we need at least some sort of interaction outside of dungeon diving. But I'm sure that's planned anyway.
The concept is nice, but that's all it is.
The balance is seriously busted, and the mechanics are unclear.
The balance is seriously busted, and the mechanics are unclear.
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Pretty interesting concept, it looks like it's going to be a very decent game. Although in my opinion they need to fix the problem of contradiction between not being able to see the girl when the torch is going out and only having the sex scenes done precisely when the torch is low. Maybe with a potion for example, of night vision
im interestet what the next update will bring!! (promesing game)
(promesing game)
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So powerfull and cool game. I just imaging how candy that can be. Awersome work Dev.
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Loving this game, both in concept and in execution (so far). There are a lot of excellent suggestions in this thread so I won't go over them again. To the dev, I hope you ignore the comments that are variations of "Hey, make the game more like MY fetish!" and listen to the ideas that make YOUR concept work better.
Loving your work so far. Can't wait to see it with more options in town and more variety in NTR scenes.
Loving your work so far. Can't wait to see it with more options in town and more variety in NTR scenes.
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Arkade
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Looking forward to update- will renew my subscription if it pops up this month as it's supposedly possible. I know right now there's still mechanics being added(shops/inns/maybe smithing?etc) so it'll probably be a while before more of the actual hcontent gets focus. But hoping there ends up being lots of variety and many h-actions that can be shown through silhouette. Of course starting like it is- but getting into more explicit stuff that we haven't seen yet. Different phases of corruption that can't be reached except through failures over many levels(as the game should be about getting through the dungeon- making a profit- and keeping heroines lewdness down.. to avoid NTR.. But still be very rewarded for those who want to see it as well.. )
A more wordy prologue could be nice- a summary of who this girl is to you. And maybe even ending in a hscene with her(could just be a bj or something if dev wants to start her as a virgin- or maybe the MC fails at the plan when you two were going to have sex..).. Optional- but that gives perspective to how close you are with heroine- and possibly showing what MC is packing if there's a scene like that which feeds those who want cock comparisons... I also hope there are at least some sort of perspective toggles- like not being able to see heroine on split paths even though it does that to an extent- more work could be done here. High potential for teasing- or wondering what's going on as that lewdness bar grows..(Maybe a toggle to hide that bar?!.. and guesswhere it is by actions rather than the bar and when you should invest in the potion... though that would be hardmode..)..
Things like the heroine getting back to you after the split ends with unbuttoned shorts or like.. hair on the mouth- disheveled in ways would be peak. Small subtle changes just for that one scene of reuniting- depending on what actions were done on the split. taking another step would revert to her usual self but it still great polish.
A more wordy prologue could be nice- a summary of who this girl is to you. And maybe even ending in a hscene with her(could just be a bj or something if dev wants to start her as a virgin- or maybe the MC fails at the plan when you two were going to have sex..).. Optional- but that gives perspective to how close you are with heroine- and possibly showing what MC is packing if there's a scene like that which feeds those who want cock comparisons... I also hope there are at least some sort of perspective toggles- like not being able to see heroine on split paths even though it does that to an extent- more work could be done here. High potential for teasing- or wondering what's going on as that lewdness bar grows..(Maybe a toggle to hide that bar?!.. and guesswhere it is by actions rather than the bar and when you should invest in the potion... though that would be hardmode..)..
Things like the heroine getting back to you after the split ends with unbuttoned shorts or like.. hair on the mouth- disheveled in ways would be peak. Small subtle changes just for that one scene of reuniting- depending on what actions were done on the split. taking another step would revert to her usual self but it still great polish.
More things I was thinking about since I apparently get notifications for this game when someone comments, which then makes me think about it in my free time for some reason.
Consider making town events have the window on the side from the explorations to show what she's doing. It's kinda the big thing your game does different then others, you should capitalize on it hard.
So, for example you might see her taking backshots while you're buying gear or doing side quests or just talking to people.
Consider making town events have the window on the side from the explorations to show what she's doing. It's kinda the big thing your game does different then others, you should capitalize on it hard.
So, for example you might see her taking backshots while you're buying gear or doing side quests or just talking to people.