KuronekoVII

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In a perfect world, we can keep the NTR mystery and higher brightness where the mentor only does things to her in low brightness, but if it gets too high, she covers up with her hands.

How/why is she partially or fully naked? The "monsters" tore her clothes away in combat when the MC was not looking or when they split up.
The more corrupt she and the mentor get, the higher the light level they will attempt to do H-Stuff.
Right now, it's near 30; she can cover at any point above that, but on higher corruption, she will stop covering and do H on 40 or even 50.

I don't think making the MC an obvious cuck is the way to go here, at least not until way later into development, if at all.
that could make a cloth resistant health, where she could get hits that torn clothing. so tailor can increase cloth resistance and for some reason, mentor will have some clothes so she can wear at the end of the dungeon, or you can buy it before delving.
 
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I loved the game; it's simple, fun, and exciting.

Suggestions:
I'm considering that the content will be greatly expanded, so I won't focus on anything I believe will be in the game, like more spy scenes or the like.

- (Essential) Please add an item like "Cave Explorer's Goggles" or some new brightness mechanic. Monsters could even use magic that increases brightness. Seeing only shadows/outlines at first is exciting, but after a certain point, it gets repetitive. I think if there was a way to keep the brightness at a minimum of 15% and keep things happening, it would be very stimulating. It could be an option in the preferences too, but I'd find it more immersive with something like the goggles.
- Personally, I found the game too difficult. I think some leveling mechanics for the MC should be added. Or at least armor.
- Clothes and costumes you can buy for Aster. Bunny, Nurse, Sexy Witch, Goth Slut. At the salon to get her hair done, dyed, or get special makeup done "for the MC."
- More lines; after cumming, she could make comments like, "I think someone's trapped here."
- After losing a dungeon, you could have flashbacks that worsen with Aster's depravity, of her having sex with her mentor and then saying it was a nightmare.
- At high levels of depravity, Aster could have sex with monsters, perhaps after losing the dungeon, and her mentor enjoys it.
- At high levels of depravity and with a lot of money left, some of the money could disappear and Aster could appear with bigger breasts, ass, and thighs, saying it was a side effect of magic and the money was given the money to starving orphans. This is cool because it adds a new perspective to the late game.
- Perhaps there could be a mechanic for Aster's affection for the MC based on the ratio of wins to losses. Does that prevent anything? No. But it could change the dialogue and how much Aster tries to pretend/lie about the obvious or rub it in the MC's face. This would add two possible NTR types and would please many fans, without relying on difficult implementations (I think), just one variant and scripted dialogue (50% of an NTR game, as a rule, consists of dialogue, not necessarily long, but well-crafted).

I'll come back here if I have any more suggestions. I hope they're good and implementable, one way or another. You already have gold in hand. Congratulations on the idea and the project!
 

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Hey, just wanted to know if you're adding some kind of cheat system, cuz I'm not pro enough for this
 

HappyGoomba

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Hey, just wanted to know if you're adding some kind of cheat system, cuz I'm not pro enough for this
There's a guy on this thread who makes a cheat mod whenever a new update comes up.

Also, the save file is JSON, so it's pretty easy to cheat in extra money to buy potions.

JSON:
"materials": {
        "SILVER_COIN": {
            "amount": 973646
        }
 

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GIVE ME MORE!!!

One a side note, I agree that there should be a way to increase brightness without making the MC a cuck, so we can see scenes better. Maybe some high level item that increase it, or valid explanations for why the girl is naked (just say some monsters tore her clothes apart) and this give us a reaason to keep buying clothes for her, which increase game time, otherwise being naked make the mentor fuck her more. Maybe make it so thatusing the item to see scenes better only works for the player and canonically the MC can't see shit, plenty of options that don't break the magic of him not knowing...
 
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GIVE ME MORE!!!

One a side note, I agree that there should be a way to increase brightness without making the MC a cuck, so we can see scenes better. Maybe some high level item that increase it, or valid explanations for why the girl is naked (just say some monsters tore her clothes apart) and this give us a reaason to keep buying clothes for her, which increase game time, otherwise being naked make the mentor fuck her more. Maybe make it so thatusing the item to see scenes better only works for the player and canonically the MC can't see shit, plenty of options that don't break the magic of him not knowing...
There could be enemies that casts a flash so you see what's going on for a few moments. It could be a combat spell that blinds the MC, so while you as the player see them, the MC can't because he is isn't blinded for some time.

Or maybe enemies that tear her cloths off or a combination of both: some enemy cast fireball and it both illuminate the area and burn her cloths.

Just play with the lighting. There could be a thunderstorm and the lightning strikes illuminate the area, or some enemy casting lightning. Or you fight slimes that cover them with luminescent goo.

I also don't like the cracked screen when they are separated. Maybe make it so that the screen is fine at first but begins to crack more and more the less love she feels for the MC. There should be an item, option or unlockable that removes the cracks.

While separated, you as the player can't really see what they are doing. Maybe they encounter the same flash enemies, or luminescent slimes so you can see them for a moment.
 

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There could be enemies that casts a flash so you see what's going on for a few moments. It could be a combat spell that blinds the MC, so while you as the player see them, the MC can't because he is isn't blinded for some time.

Or maybe enemies that tear her cloths off or a combination of both: some enemy cast fireball and it both illuminate the area and burn her cloths.

Just play with the lighting. There could be a thunderstorm and the lightning strikes illuminate the area, or some enemy casting lightning. Or you fight slimes that cover them with luminescent goo.

I also don't like the cracked screen when they are separated. Maybe make it so that the screen is fine at first but begins to crack more and more the less love she feels for the MC. There should be an item, option or unlockable that removes the cracks.

While separated, you as the player can't really see what they are doing. Maybe they encounter the same flash enemies, or luminescent slimes so you can see them for a moment.
Status effects in general would be fun, blind, poison, sleep, etc etc. Enemies that exist to stun lock you
 
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There could be enemies that casts a flash so you see what's going on for a few moments. It could be a combat spell that blinds the MC, so while you as the player see them, the MC can't because he is isn't blinded for some time.

Or maybe enemies that tear her cloths off or a combination of both: some enemy cast fireball and it both illuminate the area and burn her cloths.

Just play with the lighting. There could be a thunderstorm and the lightning strikes illuminate the area, or some enemy casting lightning. Or you fight slimes that cover them with luminescent goo.

I also don't like the cracked screen when they are separated. Maybe make it so that the screen is fine at first but begins to crack more and more the less love she feels for the MC. There should be an item, option or unlockable that removes the cracks.

While separated, you as the player can't really see what they are doing. Maybe they encounter the same flash enemies, or luminescent slimes so you can see them for a moment.
Yup, thought abou it too. Many options to improve the lighting witout breaking how the story works and still using the system. What Idislike the most rn is the clothing system, once they're gone it's garanteed darklight since you can't increase it anymore...

Again, just give it a valid reason for her to be naked, maybe everytime the MC doesn't defend against a blow her clothes get damaged, like he could't protect her so he gaslight himself that she is naked because of his incompetence etc...and then we have to buy new clothes that can be worn mid delve, but they're expensive, give buffs and prevent sex (more party members attacking) so the player have a reason to work for them and increase time spent playing..

I don't think the player should be able to fully and clearly see what is happening all the time but rn it could do with a little improving.

I must say that I do like the broken glass effect. Maybe make it so that it's not too much broken so we can still see, and ofc no dim light to compensate. And if she appear naked after he will just think they fought a lot at their side of the dungeon...
 

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Yup, thought abou it too. Many options to improve the lighting witout breaking how the story works and still using the system. What Idislike the most rn is the clothing system, once they're gone it's garanteed darklight since you can't increase it anymore...

Again, just give it a valid reason for her to be naked, maybe everytime the MC doesn't defend against a blow her clothes get damaged, like he could't protect her so he gaslight himself that she is naked because of his incompetence etc...and then we have to buy new clothes that can be worn mid delve, but they're expensive, give buffs and prevent sex (more party members attacking) so the player have a reason to work for them and increase time spent playing..

I don't think the player should be able to fully and clearly see what is happening all the time but rn it could do with a little improving.

I must say that I do like the broken glass effect. Maybe make it so that it's not too much broken so we can still see, and ofc no dim light to compensate. And if she appear naked after he will just think they fought a lot at their side of the dungeon...
I largely agree with you, and I think some dungeon (thunderstorm that makes it darker, with flashes of max-level light, for example) or battle effects (someone casts fireball, 1 turn of max brightness. Someone casts blind, 3 turns pitch darkness, etc.) would be a really cool way to expand on the light mechanics, but I still hold to the stance that we need some items that affect that side-image most of all. Something you can use your hard-earned gold on that improves and expands upon what is arguably the main appeal of the game.

The two main examples I usually think of are:

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I dunno, this game has crazy potential, and I love brainstorming ideas like this. The side-panel image with the light mechanics is such a fun concept that I can't help it. XD

Spoilers are just for formatting's sake. I may have gotten mildly carried away with the brainstorming.
 
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