With all due respect, as much as I've enjoyed The List, I'm not sure I follow the logic of where things are going and if I want to continue with it. I've been waiting on playing the last update of The List precisely because of what happens to Alex. I wanted to stay optimistic it was just another in a long line of cliffhangers, but it was just temporary and things would be sorted somehow...
That said, my brain cannot even seem to grasp the unnecessarily complicated and purely contrived attempt to fix something that wasn't broken in the first place just to 'raise the stakes' and introduce more drama. It took me several updates of being patient with the story and gradually becoming more invested in seeing where it was going...
I genuinely loved Alex, and most of the other girls in the harem, and sure, I was disappointed one of the other LIs was killed off-screen and essentially thrown away/sacrificed in the name of story progression... along with one of the MC's 2 remaining unborn children, but you don't seen anything wrong with sacrificing the MC's last remaining HUMAN daughter to be essentially replaced or traded for what we are told is the MC's true love and VAMPIRE soulmate? That the person, the feelings, emotions, personality of who the daughter will grow up to be will be supplanted with Alex's once she comes of age. I mean, Twilight parallels aside (where a similar premise was used) I just don't think it makes much sense.
Good luck with your story, for what it's worth I enjoyed most of it, and I'm certainly not telling you how to make your VN, I just don't think it's for me anymore.
