Ren'Py The Pilgrimage [v2.00] [Messman]

[GH057ts]

Хороший день. Редко игры-пародии на "mass effect" выходят на просторы сети. Я рад видеть такое искусство. Но я немного опечален фактом использования Тали'зоры. Я слишком уважаю ее как личность. Я бы не возражал против другого кварианца, с другим цветом костюма и именем.

И еще.
Только три типа противников? Или их будет больше.
Если костюм поврежден, то он сразу же восстанавливается после боя. Было бы интересно, если бы костюм порвался и нам нужно было бы починить.
Атаки происходят один на один. Можно ли создать атаку один на два, три, четыре. И соответствующее разнообразие анимаций.
Случайные события. Что нападению подвергается не только герой, но и другие персонажи.
Спасибо, что выслушали мою мысль.

 

[GH057ts]

I can guess. the next one will be a parody of "StarCraft". And the hero will be a protoss woman who got on a planet infected with a swarm.

 

[kenny is alive]

question: will the lewd level have an impact on the story especially the ending, for example tali gets so messed up in the head that she no longer wants to escape from the spaceship. I know this is very specific

 

[Stupidkiller]

Can I just have an option to kill them instead of fuck them? It look like the secon fight against the gong it usless. Can we imporve Character level to make abel kill them. And avoid the bugs into showr. I'm not into this kind of fatish. everything that ain't bugs and beast, I'm ok with a (I'm oke with all humaoind forms).
Some options could be cool.

My god dude, take the hint already. Dev isn't going to change the fetishes in their game to cater to you. Go find something else to play.

 

[wetzlar]

This looks pretty awesome, here’s hoping for an Android port.

 

[Tosk]

It was a fun game. I look forward to your next installment.

 

[_Messman_]

Very decent game, love that content and cant wait for it to get expanded! I dont know how you did it but youve managed to make me interested in mass effect where nothing could before

I waited for a long time when someone will do something like this, really surprised still noone does. But i tired waiting and decide one day: time to grab all the matters in my hand... I mean hands

 

[_Messman_]

Is there any plan to make the porn scenes with her completely naked at some point?

I know she shouldn't be able to walk without her suit on lore-wise but maybe there could be an item or something that makes her able to walk without the suit, since it's a porn game it doesn't need to make complete sense.
Either an item or exposure to the beast's cum makes her immune to the environment of the ship at some point
It would be quite nice as a last lewdness level in my opinion and since you already has a naked model of her it might be quite easy to implement.

Just a thought, great game overall and very good job.

You know, the idea of immunity training is really great, wonder how i missed it. It can depends on Tali's "experience" as well as i can make some kind of lab synthesized potion which she can do with ingredients found. Thanks for this thought, i will put it in good use.

 

[_Messman_]

I can guess. the next one will be a parody of "StarCraft". And the hero will be a protoss woman who got on a planet infected with a swarm.

I know one good StarCraft parody for sure, the plot almost the same but Kerrigan is the main character. SlutCraft as i remember. Great game.

 

[_Messman_]

Хороший день. Редко игры-пародии на "mass effect" выходят на просторы сети. Я рад видеть такое искусство. Но я немного опечален фактом использования Тали'зоры. Я слишком уважаю ее как личность. Я бы не возражал против другого кварианца, с другим цветом костюма и именем.

И еще.
Только три типа противников? Или их будет больше.
Если костюм поврежден, то он сразу же восстанавливается после боя. Было бы интересно, если бы костюм порвался и нам нужно было бы починить.
Атаки происходят один на один. Можно ли создать атаку один на два, три, четыре. И соответствующее разнообразие анимаций.
Случайные события. Что нападению подвергается не только герой, но и другие персонажи.
Спасибо, что выслушали мою мысль.

About the suit damage, maybe you will be surprised but i had 3 folders with Tali dialogues pictures depends of suit durability. Stamina level which her have in game in fact named "durability" in code like variable. But when i start to analize this idea, there are bunch of options that i had to consider, about her movement around. For example if player decide to go talk with NPC etc. Or some triggered events, where i will be forced to take into account the suit condition. So i had a choice: do the hell of limitations for moving around with damaged suit, or rewrite the hell of a code to put the damaged suit level in all possible encounters and/or cutscenes. And yes, i choose the easy way here, concentrating on content mostly.

About the rest - no, monsters types will be more. I had DP scene pics during door hacking event, done it long ago, but it looking like shit. Will remake it, no worries. Tali-suit-less-20durability won't let me lie

 

[_Messman_]

question: will the lewd level have an impact on the story especially the ending, for example tali gets so messed up in the head that she no longer wants to escape from the spaceship. I know this is very specific

Oh, i haven't looked that far yet. I have so much really weird shit to show, so don't even know myself how end this mess But sure, the main idea of this lewd level is dialogues and scenes options.

 

[GH057ts]

About the suit damage, maybe you will be surprised but i had 3 folders with Tali dialogues pictures depends of suit durability. Stamina level which her have in game in fact named "durability" in code like variable. But when i start to analize this idea, there are bunch of options that i had to consider, about her movement around. For example if player decide to go talk with NPC etc. Or some triggered events, where i will be forced to take into account the suit condition. So i had a choice: do the hell of limitations for moving around with damaged suit, or rewrite the hell of a code to put the damaged suit level in all possible encounters and/or cutscenes. And yes, i choose the easy way here, concentrating on content mostly.

About the rest - no, monsters types will be more. I had DP scene pics during door hacking event, done it long ago, but it looking like shit. Will remake it, no worries. Tali-suit-less-20durability won't let me lie
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And if you do the opposite. During the battle, he is torn. This will affect further animation.

 

[Pantsuhunter]

Woah! I'm just finished replaying ME Trilogy with Miss vas Normandy as my LI. Now I happened to find this VN... Amazing! Thank you & good luck with game development. Hope to see what's next.

 

[RatherDevious]

I sincerely hope we can find another monster (or even a super beast the ship had experimented on) that has a very big cock later on down the line.

The plot is simple and amazing with lots of opportunity for expansion. Maybe even give Tali the option later in the game to release some pheromone or serum into the ship's air to make the monsters hornier/bigger, hah. You could tie it into an important decision she has to make to make her mission in the ship easier/harder.

Just as a thought, but adding a second quarian could be an interesting decision. You'd have to use a different model or find a way to recolor Tali, but it could provide an interesting spin on the ship's lore, or even a promising look at just how depraved Tali to become. Maybe its her mom even, haha.

I'll offer my services again as a writer in cleaning up the english you have written here - I can not express how long I've looked for a game like this to come out.

 

[lanablovely]

Hi, just wanted to say with my first comment ever that I loved the game! : )

As mentioned before, it's the right mixture of story, game mechanics, and sexy stuff. It's actually inspired me to start messing around in my own game creation!

So thanks so much for being you and sharing!

 

[_Messman_]

I sincerely hope we can find another monster (or even a super beast the ship had experimented on) that has a very big cock later on down the line.

The plot is simple and amazing with lots of opportunity for expansion. Maybe even give Tali the option later in the game to release some pheromone or serum into the ship's air to make the monsters hornier/bigger, hah. You could tie it into an important decision she has to make to make her mission in the ship easier/harder.

Just as a thought, but adding a second quarian could be an interesting decision. You'd have to use a different model or find a way to recolor Tali, but it could provide an interesting spin on the ship's lore, or even a promising look at just how depraved Tali to become. Maybe its her mom even, haha.

I'll offer my services again as a writer in cleaning up the english you have written here - I can not express how long I've looked for a game like this to come out.

Thanks, i will let you know when i need help. Just now i feeling little confused. I planned just throw the game and forget abt it for month maybe. Didn't expect such positive feedback as this is my first project ever. But now i start to manage my time to do all what i want to do in game, letting my demons out. Need some time to make complete picture of how it will be going further.

 

[RatherDevious]

Thanks, i will let you know when i need help. Just now i feeling little confused. I planned just throw the game and forget abt it for month maybe. Didn't expect such positive feedback as this is my first project ever. But now i start to manage my time to do all what i want to do in game, letting my demons out. Need some time to make complete picture of how it will be going further.

A good amount of people really like Tali and its usually Liara, Miranda or FemShep who get plenty more attention, hah. You made yourself a shining project and a lot of folks starved for content are flocking from the news that Tali gets her own game.

I'm sure you'll get plenty of people wanting you to work on krogan, vorcha, batarians, or even other humanoids since the main content here is beasts, but you can always consider that something for the future. The project doesn't have to get too big though so don't get stressed over it - you can always make a Pilgrimage 2 with Tali stuck in a different space station or even a planet.

Personally I'm excited over finally getting a Tali project. I've actually wanted to start one but I never had the friends, knowledge, or money to support such a large project. You just made one to 'throw away' and it looks stunning, haha. I'd love to help out in any way I can, even if its just fixing the english text in the game. I can draw as well but I don't use photoshop so some have told me I'm missing out.

Like plenty of other people I myself have plenty of ideas over how you should proceed but I don't want to bog you down with that. I say you should know where you want the story to go and just add extra stuff into it so you can still have fun. Otherwise, if you're looking for a grander project and don't mind making Tali be a glorified sex toy for a bunch of animals and aliens, you could open up a Patreon and have plenty of people support your newfound inspiration.

Overall I just hope you'll continue this project. I've never really been this excited for a project before, not even for large ones I kickstarted, so I'm hoping you can send an update once a month at least, even if its a small added animation of patchnotes.

Looking forward to it!

 

[DeynanDescafeinado]

A good amount of people really like Tali and its usually Liara, Miranda or FemShep who get plenty more attention, hah. You made yourself a shining project and a lot of folks starved for content are flocking from the news that Tali gets her own game.

I'm sure you'll get plenty of people wanting you to work on krogan, vorcha, batarians, or even other humanoids since the main content here is beasts, but you can always consider that something for the future. The project doesn't have to get too big though so don't get stressed over it - you can always make a Pilgrimage 2 with Tali stuck in a different space station or even a planet.

Personally I'm excited over finally getting a Tali project. I've actually wanted to start one but I never had the friends, knowledge, or money to support such a large project. You just made one to 'throw away' and it looks stunning, haha. I'd love to help out in any way I can, even if its just fixing the english text in the game. I can draw as well but I don't use photoshop so some have told me I'm missing out.

Like plenty of other people I myself have plenty of ideas over how you should proceed but I don't want to bog you down with that. I say you should know where you want the story to go and just add extra stuff into it so you can still have fun. Otherwise, if you're looking for a grander project and don't mind making Tali be a glorified sex toy for a bunch of animals and aliens, you could open up a Patreon and have plenty of people support your newfound inspiration.

Overall I just hope you'll continue this project. I've never really been this excited for a project before, not even for large ones I kickstarted, so I'm hoping you can send an update once a month at least, even if its a small added animation of patchnotes.

Looking forward to it!

nah man, fuck patreon and their policies , it would be better Subscribestar.

 

[Atl92]

A good amount of people really like Tali and its usually Liara, Miranda or FemShep who get plenty more attention, hah. You made yourself a shining project and a lot of folks starved for content are flocking from the news that Tali gets her own game.

I'm sure you'll get plenty of people wanting you to work on krogan, vorcha, batarians, or even other humanoids since the main content here is beasts, but you can always consider that something for the future. The project doesn't have to get too big though so don't get stressed over it - you can always make a Pilgrimage 2 with Tali stuck in a different space station or even a planet.

Personally I'm excited over finally getting a Tali project. I've actually wanted to start one but I never had the friends, knowledge, or money to support such a large project. You just made one to 'throw away' and it looks stunning, haha. I'd love to help out in any way I can, even if its just fixing the english text in the game. I can draw as well but I don't use photoshop so some have told me I'm missing out.

Like plenty of other people I myself have plenty of ideas over how you should proceed but I don't want to bog you down with that. I say you should know where you want the story to go and just add extra stuff into it so you can still have fun. Otherwise, if you're looking for a grander project and don't mind making Tali be a glorified sex toy for a bunch of animals and aliens, you could open up a Patreon and have plenty of people support your newfound inspiration.

Overall I just hope you'll continue this project. I've never really been this excited for a project before, not even for large ones I kickstarted, so I'm hoping you can send an update once a month at least, even if its a small added animation of patchnotes.

Looking forward to it!

For this type of game SubscribeStar is better, since this game kinda break quite a few of patreon's TOS policies.

 

[kenny is alive]

Oh, i haven't looked that far yet. I have so much really weird shit to show, so don't even know myself how end this mess But sure, the main idea of this lewd level is dialogues and scenes options.

anyway i think it will amazing because it is already . so go ahead