VN Ren'Py The Pink Answer [v0.4] [MobsterCorgi]

[The_Dragon_Reborn]

Damn this dude must have really pissed his dad off.


Son: *Spills the milk* "S-s-sorry dad!"

Father: *Heavy sigh* "Yeah I'm selling you to an agency that will turn you into a sissy."

Son: *Drops spoon of cereal*

Father:*Immediately dials number* "That confirms it."

 

[TheFamilyDog]

Damn this dude must have really pissed his dad off.

Its explained in the game that his dad had debts that had to be paid (or else), and the payment method was decided to be his son after some research (like the kid's porn intake). If the kid had been a little more "alpha", I'm willing to bet a different type of payment plan would had been offer.

 

[ninjasmurf73]

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THX for the share...

EDIT:
I'm going to sound kind of repetitive here, but why does the protagonist always have to be the sissy?
I wish the MC would eventually feminize someone else.

ABSOLUTELY WRONG. You are in charge of turning them. Now people are siding with you and you obviously did not play it. Why would you do this to the developer? It is one of few games where you are the trainer and you just made it sound like it is like all the other typical sissy games.

 

[ninjasmurf73]

"Repetitive" isn't the word to use here...

He is wrong You are the trainer in this game

 

[_user]

constructive criticism wanted

Please add full stops at the end of sentences, also be consistent with your ellipses.

The character looks like they're 12 half the time. That's a skip for me, but I'm sure plenty will like it...

 

[Remembrance]

Wow, it actually happened.
A game from the dom perspective of sissification...
A dedicated sissification game from the perspective of the dom instead of just a side route or option...
Didn't think I'd see the day.
Idk how the game would be, new dev & all, but this is a step in the right direction.
Hopefully more kinks associated with the sub side, like ntr or feet, would also be getting dom perspective games (one can only hope)

Anyway, good luck to the dev. No matter what the quality of the game is, you're a hero for filling this niche & hope you'll continue to champion this great cause

Anyway, time to try it out. Will edit with review if I have time.

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Have a Good Day.

 

[Panonon]

The MC in this case is the one feminizing the character, that's the whole point of the game !

I don't like sissification stuff, so this game probably isn't for me. (I enjoy gender bender, but not sissy stuff).

That said, good luck and I absolutely love your username!

 

[gay23]

What are you using to generate the AI images? There are some issues here and there, but they're pretty good.

 

[MobsterCorgi]

Please add full stops at the end of sentences, also be consistent with your ellipses.

The character looks like they're 12 half the time. That's a skip for me, but I'm sure plenty will like it...

Thanks for the feedback, it is very needed since its my first project. Also, which images makes him look like he's 12?, that's not the intention, that's for sure.

Wow, it actually happened.
A game from the dom perspective of sissification...
A dedicated sissification game from the perspective of the dom instead of just a side route or option...
Didn't think I'd see the day.
Idk how the game would be, new dev & all, but this is a step in the right direction.
Hopefully more kinks associated with the sub side, like ntr or feet, would also be getting dom perspective games (one can only hope)

Anyway, good luck to the dev. No matter what the quality of the game is, you're a hero for filling this niche & hope you'll continue to champion this great cause

Anyway, time to try it out. Will edit with review if I have time.

Spoiler: 0.1 Review

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Have a Good Day.

Thanks ! .. also, the progression is very simple by design, this first game i wanted to have a very "easy" target, since it's the MC's first patient, i understand people that comment its "too easy", the progression being simple or he is not resistant enough, but that's because he was kinda of a beta already. In future games, if there are, i want to dive into more "resistant" or "more difficult" patients. As i said, this is my first game ever, i didn't want to chew more that i could swallow. I'm learning a lot along the way as i make this game !

I don't like sissification stuff, so this game probably isn't for me. (I enjoy gender bender, but not sissy stuff).

That said, good luck and I absolutely love your username!

Thanks !

What are you using to generate the AI images? There are some issues here and there, but they're pretty good.

It's the Hassaku Hentai model for Stable Diffusion

 

[Remembrance]

Thanks ! .. also, the progression is very simple by design, this first game i wanted to have a very "easy" target, since it's the MC's first patient, i understand people that comment its "too easy", the progression being simple or he is not resistant enough, but that's because he was kinda of a beta already. In future games, if there are, i want to dive into more "resistant" or "more difficult" patients. As i said, this is my first game ever, i didn't want to chew more that i could swallow. I'm learning a lot along the way as i make this game !

Hmm, I wouldn't want you to misunderstand. While the simplicity of the plot was partly responsible, the problem lies in the writing itself.
The problem is not that there was no resistance, that he was too beta (though the simplistic storyline highlights the issue) but that the interaction (and by association the character) seemed to lack depth to it. It was very surface level.
Even with a beta patient who easily gives in, it is possible to write it such that there's greater depth to the character(s) & the scene.
It's like how a simple story sometimes sucks you in, but then a complex story reads like a sequential collection of plot prompts.
That's what I meant by perfunctory.
Basically it could've been written better, been more engaging.
It's really hard to put this in words, but that's what I meant by bland & lacks personality.

I say this not to discourage you, but as an honest feedback. Keep writing, keep creating & you'll get better.

Wish I could help more, but it's not really a specific problem but more like a general feel.

I look forward to the next update anyway.

 

[_user]

Thanks for the feedback, it is very needed since its my first project. Also, which images makes him look like he's 12?, that's not the intention, that's for sure.

I'm afraid that's just a byproduct of using an anime LLM. Anime tends to blur the age of characters, especially girls. I don't think there's much you can realistically do about it, besides regenerating the too off mark images from time to time. Avoid making the sissies small, they're men after all, that'll probably help a bit.

 

[Panonon]

Be careful of those.

A friend got their game banned because Patreon decided one of their characters looked too young, but wouldn't tell him which character.

 

[Erosynth]

can i not turn them into trans-girls? Can i decide to make them feminine with wider hips and better ass but no breast? i kinda dislike breast lol

 

[Zed152]

- Drop the Cruncher from your distributable. (Cruncher-x64 folder, readme-compressed-version.txt, RenCruncher-x64-v0.4.1.bat, RPGMCruncher-x64-v0.4.1.bat)
- You don't need 8k images. "preocupado.png" can be reduced from 618kb to 85kb by reducing it to 4k. Similar savings are available for the other images.
- Two periods (..) is never correct in English. Ellipses should be three periods (...) and always flush with the trailing word (For example...).
- Ellipses indicate a pause. Consider a hyphen for stutters. "O ... ok .. i will call you <name>..." would be better represented as "O-Okay... I will call you <name>..."
- The standalone self-referencing "I" is always capitalized.
- Commas are used to separate ideas to avoid confusing meaning. Prefer using periods when ending ideas. "Now, I will ask you to open the compartment on your right, there you will find a box" would be better represented as "Now, I will ask you to open the compartment on your right. There, you will find a box."

 

[AtomicGoblin]

anyone know how I would fix this? the first background is fine but this one and the one just after do this , and I have no clue how I would fix it.

 

[SomeRandomFuckwad]

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[Aeco]

Honestly, if this is supposed to take place in the future, it's incredibly immersion-breaking for there to still be people who subscribe to the whole alpha/beta nonsense and reference it in what is supposed to be natural language. It's not something any reasonable person believes in now, and I doubt it will stand the test of time aside from in some very weird niche groups, perhaps. So I wouldn't reference it or any particular terms associated with specific groups or beliefs that exist right now. People aren't gonna talk like that in 50+ years.

 

[Baudler]

I'm going to sound kind of repetitive here, but why does the protagonist always have to be the sissy?

It's more than half the sex-change erotica genre.

Why? Beats me.

 

[KingSchlong41]

Is there any chance this will get an android version?

 

[cleostar]

somehow this game doesnt work in joiplay. must because of compression issue