- Apr 14, 2018
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You are assuming that people who do not know your game are going to deliberately download and play this game instead of hundreds of others just to figure out who or what a "Kate" is in your overview?
You have just lost 99+% of your potential paying customers because you are too lazy to write an understandable Overview for the people you want to have trust in you and give you money for a quality product that isn't made yet.
Think about this, seriously.
In and out. Repeat if necessary.I defintely would like to see where this goes
- Apr 30, 2019
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I wanted to leave the fact of her being a retired pornstar a clue that the player is going to figure it out in the game.You are assuming that people who do not know your game are going to deliberately download and play this game instead of hundreds of others just to figure out who or what a "Kate" is in your overview?
You have just lost 99+% of your potential paying customers because you are too lazy to write an understandable Overview for the people you want to have trust in you and give you money for a quality product that isn't made yet.
Think about this, seriously.
- Jul 27, 2019
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The past is the past. Unless she got some nasty diseases in her career.Thing is would you want to date a retired pornstar? Wouldn't be my first choice
- Nov 30, 2018
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Well that's the risk you take in this situation at least we know she is well experienced
What I quoted of you was a response you made to someone else not quoted in my post (unfortunately) who was replying to your "Overview" in the OP. That is why I used the convenient "Reply" link provided in every post. (Just click the encircled arrow by your name in the quotation to go backwards to original messages ...)
So, what you said here (immmediately above), does this take into account the entirety of your "Overview" AND the other person's response to it AND your response to them AND my entire statement--or did you just respond to a few of my words without any context?
For example, why are the potential readers (the people with the money you want) that I referred to in my statement going to bother try your game if they don't have enough info from your "Overview" to download the novel in the first place?
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Remember, I said to consider my post seriously? Well, 'being a retired pornstar' is not in your "Overview" and the potential patron you responded to was obliquely asking a real question about it that you as a writer and promoter of your own work might want to consider ... for your current Overview editing, writing this novel, and all your works in the future.
If words are your choice of profession, YOU should bother to read and consider what potential purchasers say--you don't need to change things that don't need changing, you don't need do anything they say! But NEVER brush them aside if they point out a problem or weakness in your work.
Actually, you should thank them for their considered feedback because any real publisher or editor would just send you a mechanical "Please F*** Off" reply with absolutely no feedback that you might want or need. To get a taste of this, send out 10 resumés to publishers and you will probably receive the same number of P.F.O. replies and the same amount of income as snubbing good feedback gets you.
- Apr 30, 2019
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I took Your feedback seriously when I read your comment and I thank you so much for taking the time and explaining your point. I really take users comments seriously and I am sorry that my short answer looked like I don't give a F***. Actually i do.
But please consider that I am new to this domain and I am still learning.
What was in my mind is that I pulished the first build for free to promote the novel and as I saw that poeple that tried it had a good impression, Those are the potential customers that I am considering. As for the overview I am thinking about something new that will catch other poeple but without mentioning that Kate is a retired pornstar. I want the players to learn that in the game. Because think about it, not everybody has the chance to meet a pornstar especially if they are freelancer programmers. I wanted the player to say :"Oh Fuck! yes it's her in the first scene! The latino babe that I was jerking on her while she was getting her ass stretched".
So i am thinking about something like this:
The Pornstar Starlet is about a guy that used to watch much porn and work as a freelancer developer until he meets Kate, a friend of his friend Vicky. Despite her past that she wants to forget, she has a nice personality. She moved to live with Vicky and have a normal life but the fact that you are trying to get into the porn industry is going to ruin everything that you may consider building with her. Should you build a relationship with Kate or should you go into the porn industry? It's up to you.
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Only one small remark. So far, MC looks much better, than both the girls. They look much more artificial, plastic. I do not know, if this has something to do with the presets you are using or with anything else. Maybe, you have more talent for male bodies... certainly welcome
Great. So, it's been about 24 hours now since the easily editable problem in your Overview was brought to your attention.
Have you fixed your overview for every other potential customer who comes by, yet?
LEARN NOW that paying customers will not read the entire thread--especially if you can't communicate the first description of your own game.
If the developer does not abandon the game, then it looks promising. But still there is too little content for the first version.
- Apr 30, 2019
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I am not planning to abandon it in fact I'm working on the next build. The developing process is now slow because i need to upgrade my hardware.
- Dec 24, 2019
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Wow I'm loving it gets to an epic threesome so quickly, NICE JOB THANK YOU!
