VN Ren'Py Abandoned The Professor Chapter II - The Black Hand [v2.0] [Pixieblink]

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tk99

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I DID ask. And thanks for taking the time to answer.
No problem, you put a lot of work in your project, so you deserve feedback.

I don't get the above comment. It means... Story-good. Progression-good. Dialogue-bad?

You raised some good points.
No, the dialogue is not bad.

Picture, one sentence, repeat .... makes me click through it. I focus neither on the pictures, nor the text.
It feels rushed.

With two or three sentences for each picture it feels more natural (for me).
(Surely that doesn't refer to scenes with quick changing emotions)
 

Pixieblink

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No problem, you put a lot of work in your project, so you deserve feedback.



No, the dialogue is not bad.

Picture, one sentence, repeat .... makes me click through it. I focus neither on the pictures, nor the text.
It feels rushed.

With two or three sentences for each picture it feels more natural (for me).
(Surely that doesn't refer to scenes with quick changing emotions)
Never even crossed my mind.
I guess if you've played a lot of really wordy VN's it would make it "feel" like a sprint, instead of a marathon.
Like reading a comic book after you've just finished "Lord of the Rings".

So... adjust the "pace" of the game by tweaking the amount of dialogue. Interesting. Seems obvious. Now.
HOW did I not even think of that?

Thanks for pointing it out, and great feedback!

Look 4 it in the next update.
 

Pixieblink

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My thoughts: Update game every 3-4 months, instead of 1 month updates, thus increasing the amount of content by 3-4 times. Add replay gallery, ability to unlock secret scenes and/or images when achieve milestones, x-ray image capability a la Sunshine Love, ability to change boob size(?), more sex in all possible combinations.
Good feedback.

- Replay gallery. Yes. When there's more content. Maybe v1.3/4 or so.
- X ray glasses? LOVE the idea! Good one, thanks.

A lot of fun ideas, but I'm not sure they really would apply to this particular game.
More sex? The dude's really old... maybe he needs to order some viagra :sneaky:
 

tk99

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So... adjust the "pace" of the game by tweaking the amount of dialogue. Interesting. Seems obvious. Now.
HOW did I not even think of that?
The problem is to find the right amount.
I love story driven VNs, but some devs put a 5 minute dialoge with 2 changing pictures in it ...
That's obviously not the right way either :)

And than you have the users who only play for the lewd scenes - and I know they completely disagree with me. :confused:

But I think you got point.
Thanks again for your work!
 
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TommyTuba

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Good feedback.

- Replay gallery. Yes. When there's more content. Maybe v1.3/4 or so.
- X ray glasses? LOVE the idea! Good one, thanks.

A lot of fun ideas, but I'm not sure they really would apply to this particular game.
More sex? The dude's really old... maybe he needs to order some viagra :sneaky:
If the professor's not up to the task at hand,we can still have more sex between the girls! :love: Twosomes, threesomes, the possibilities are endless! :p
 

Pixieblink

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If the professor's not up to the task at hand,we can still have more sex between the girls! :love: Twosomes, threesomes, the possibilities are endless! :p
Foursomes, Fivesomes, Sixsomes. Hell, why not throw in all the girls? That would be a... 14somes? :ROFLMAO:

I like it. Maybe I should make some of the new girls lesbians. Good idea!
 

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doubt mary would be ready to have sex unless prof. would bribe her with truckload of cookies and even then she would most likely bail out.
 

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doubt mary would be ready to have sex unless prof. would bribe her with truckload of cookies and even then she would most likely bail out.
Would be funny if she took the cookies and ran lol
 

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LewdKun

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Please add the settings back, would be greatly appreciated. By default the audio is too loud for me, I also use things like skip transitions.
 

cxx

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Please add the settings back, would be greatly appreciated. By default the audio is too loud for me, I also use things like skip transitions.
why using skipping on 5 mins update (10 if watches movies)?
 

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The Professor Chapter II - The Black Hand [v1.1] [Pixieblink]
Preferences-Mod

Features:
  • re-adds Preferences textbutton to the Main and Game Menu screens
  • re-adds Preferences quickbutton to the Quick Menu screen
so you are able to access the Preferences screen again

Installation:

  1. Download the attached file (right-click and save as)
  2. Rename the file to "screens.rpy"
  3. Copy the file into the "game" folder and overwrite the original
Beware that you cant change/mute the video volume through the preferences!

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Pixieblink

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I will re-add the Preferences in the next update.
Honestly just didn't realize that anybody used them.

Unless it's some kind of emergency? Anybody really think it's worth re-releasing as a bug patch / fix?
 
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