VN Ren'Py The Promise We Made [v0.5 Part 2] [AdultSpice]

[AdultSpice]

I vote for the unknown.

The looks interesting. Good luck. AdultSpice

It's like we are going backward in AVN games. AI sprites with generic backgrounds and a lot of dialogue.
This game is a good example of the cookie-cutter AI game. It's a decent story, and I'm sure the dev has gained experience
and the confidence to push things further. I guess these are good for learning the basics.

I wish you luck and success in the future.

Thank you, glad that you like it!

Can we dump her bf and start new relationship?

Yes in future updates you have the choice to either dump him or stay with him while cheat on him or just be faithful

incest with the father in the future

Yes there will be incest in the future with the father

Uhm.. so GGGB remake? Story sounds like the same.

It may have some similar tropes with the father and with the boyfriend right now but I assure you it will be completely different

 

[Defenestrator.for.traitor]

It may have some similar tropes with the father and with the boyfriend right now but I assure you it will be completely different

Looks good. Good luck with that.

 

[JKDDio]

sorry but this art style is trash, good girl gone bad also has trash artstyle. please stop.

What are you talking about ,the art is beautiful and GGGB was one of the best game !!!!!

 

[Ebet Ebety]

AI cg? Can I ask how much AI goes into this? Because if it's just the art I can live with it, but if it's chatGPT written I don't even want to look at it honestly

 

[AdultSpice]

AI cg? Can I ask how much AI goes into this? Because if it's just the art I can live with it, but if it's chatGPT written I don't even want to look at it honestly

No, the writting is all mine with some Grammarly spelling corrections

 

[Yngling]

Given the art style and the story premise, it seems difficult not to compare this with GGGB.

But having more of something good is not necessarily a bad thing.

Compared to GGGB, the dad does seem more interesting. In GGGB, the incest was kind of a side path (except with Arthur) I hope it will be more substantial here.

And, frankly, I also hope it has a bit more focus than GGGB. The many wildly divergent paths were cool but at the same time many were not my preference and therefore largely unexplored.

Honestly speaking though, the grammar here could be improved. I am certainly not a master in English, but there were quite a lot of errors. For a story heavy game, it is more annoying than for a pure fap game.

 

[Alan1986]

Look promising. Drawing needs to upgrade? And maybe some more player's choices and animations.

 

[chawuciren71]

Why? I like the art.
Keep up the good work. The teasing is good. I am keeping my hopes high.

 

[Zedire]

Any content with the two older guys (on the left side of the banner) yet?

 

[Daniele69]

This is the Italian translation of :
The Promise We Made [v0.2]

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This translation is "unofficial" and "made by a fan"
extract the .rar file and move "game" to the game where the .exe file resides overwrite if required

Download​

 

[vessna]

Can we dump her bf and start new relationship?

same question i had. . . and no, i have no idea.

 

[Dynamite20]

same question i had. . . and no, i have no idea.

He answered that and he said yes

 

[KarokaKOHORT]

Very promising start, will be interesting to see where this goes. Positively surprised by the amount of choices and level of writing & characterisation.

 

[TheUnforeseenMessenger]

It's like we are going backward in AVN games. AI sprites with generic backgrounds and a lot of dialogue.
This game is a good example of the cookie-cutter AI game. It's a decent story, and I'm sure the dev has gained experience
and the confidence to push things further. I guess these are good for learning the basics.

I wish you luck and success in the future.

Story-rich games are interesting. They help build characters and plot.

If you want action, just put on a porn movie.

 

[Yngling]

It's like we are going backward in AVN games. AI sprites with generic backgrounds and a lot of dialogue.

Perhaps but given how many devs are getting burned out and quitting it's maybe not so bad.

Sprites and backgrounds do cut posing and rendering time. For scenes where nothing happens besides dialogue it's maybe not so bad.

 

[quiboune]

Ended up trying out the game and it seems to follow the EvaKiss formula (which can be a great thing if done as as she does).

This is super important for the formula, though, and this game lacking choices in such a plot-heavy chapter as the prologue makes me a bit pessimistic, as these are the thing that gives GGGB or ORS its main flavor. And I know this is a different game from a different developer but the game is so similar visually and in theme that it's impossible not to compare them. We can't choose how the MC treats her failure of a dad(who, btw, does not look like a 50yo that has been depressed for 4 years AT ALL) or a weird coworker, we can't choose how she deals with the rude stranger, we can't even choose if she fucks her BF!
Now, this is just a very early version and the Dev addresses the lack of choices, but it seems like that's how it will work even after future updates, that choices will just show up on future scenes and events after the prologue. Makes me think the stories might end up being linear and with little to no nuance, which would suck.

This comment I made about the first release still applies to the newest one.
Dev, the prologue needs a rework. It needs choices. This type of game is choice-heavy and will need lots of planning and effort, there's no escaping this. The game starts before the intro, so the first part should also have gameplay.

 

[chawuciren71]

The way he wrote the story is good.
For example when groped, there is a costomer coming. So it make sense MC does not want to make a scene.
Reasonable and relatable. I like it better than GGGB in this respect.

 

[Losersriot]

The way he wrote the story is good.
For example when groped, there is a costomer coming. So it make sense MC does not want to make a scene.
Reasonable and relatable. I like it better than GGGB in this respect.

GGGB have EXTREMALY UGLY art

 

[qqqwwwxxry]

Android port?

 

[AdultSpice]

This comment I made about the first release still applies to the newest one.
Dev, the prologue needs a rework. It needs choices. This type of game is choice-heavy and will need lots of planning and effort, there's no escaping this. The game starts before the intro, so the first part should also have gameplay.

Your response made me think of the prologue and I thought that maybe for first-time players the prologue would sound boring without any choices that's true, but I also don't find any reason to add choices to the prologue scenes because I don't believe that it will matter in the game I want to make choices that matters to Emma's corruption, choices that will have consequences, and in the prologue, I couldn't find any choice that will fit this.

And I don't want to go back and remade the game because I want to focus on completing the game first, then remade it to make it better.

But I'm curious and I want to hear your opinion on what choices would you make in the prologue, to clarify I'm not asking for ideas to steal I'm just curious about your opinion I want all the feedback that I can get to discuss people intrest and likes

Android port?

I'm trying to learn how to make an android port and will release it as soon as possible