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godscoper

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Yeah... not for me. Translation is a bit off, or just poor grammar.

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So yeah, just a big no. Couldn't finish it, and don't care to either. Not after that. Either way, best of luck with this and thanks.
I agree, MC, a very horny, forceful person, while all the girls are/were with Kevin in the past, and MC has forced his way on people like him. Dont worry, it gets worse.
Corruption and Male domination are the two main fetishes for the game.
 

YogSothoth1982

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Yeah... not for me. Translation is a bit off, or just poor grammar.

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So yeah, just a big no. Couldn't finish it, and don't care to either. Not after that. Either way, best of luck with this and thanks.
You saved me from downloading the game, playing it, getting to that point, and closing it to delete it.

I'm guessing the romance part in the game summary is the MC's romance with himself, not the LIs.
 

Raziel_8

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Dec 4, 2017
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Man this MC is a piece of crap...whining, an absolute creep, molesting and nearly raping the girls in their sleep, because he he is sooo in love...no choices to stop that shit...well no choices at all :rolleyes:
So far non of the girls are avoidable either, like that crap childhood friend, which was sniffing the chair the MC's brother sat in...at this point the MC's brother is actually way more likeable then the MC.

I'm guessing the romance part in the game summary is the MC's romance with himself, not the LIs.
The only ''romance'' is the MC being in love with his brothers wife after a single look, which is why he is now molesting and nearly raping her, cause she said no to him...
 

JoeTheMC84

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Yeah... not for me. Translation is a bit off, or just poor grammar.

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So yeah, just a big no. Couldn't finish it, and don't care to either. Not after that. Either way, best of luck with this and thanks.
That does not sound enticing at all.

I agree, MC, a very horny, forceful person, while all the girls are/were with Kevin in the past, and MC has forced his way on people like him. Dont worry, it gets worse.
Corruption and Male domination are the two main fetishes for the game.
Nothing says "harem" like getting some other guy's sloppy seconds, :cautious: I'm sure they are all lovely ladies...

You saved me from downloading the game, playing it, getting to that point, and closing it to delete it.

I'm guessing the romance part in the game summary is the MC's romance with himself, not the LIs.
Same.
 

YogSothoth1982

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Man this MC is a piece of crap...whining, an absolute creep, molesting and nearly raping the girls in their sleep, because he he is sooo in love...no choices to stop that shit...well no choices at all :rolleyes:
So far non of the girls are avoidable either, like that crap childhood friend, which was sniffing the chair the MC's brother sat in...at this point the MC's brother is actually way more likeable then the MC.
It almost makes you want to download the game so you can send it to the trash.

The only ''romance'' is the MC being in love with his brothers wife after a single look, which is why he is now molesting and nearly raping her, cause she said no to him...
Nothing says "romance" more clearly than rape, that's for sure.

In case anyone hadn't noticed, it's ironic.

That does not sound enticing at all.


Nothing says "harem" like getting some other guy's sloppy seconds, :cautious: I'm sure they are all lovely ladies...


Same.
It seems to me that Dev doesn't know what a romantic harem is.

MC hates their brother; MC's best friend is infatuated with the brother (that's been berating MC) to the point of literally sniffing furniture the brother sat on

If this is your experience with friendships you need better friends.
The game is getting worse by the minute.
 

Adhdclassic

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MC is jealous of his brother, he is a rapist, just a pure creep. At first I was like lifes throwing dude a curve ball then all of a sudden sucking his brothers sleeping wifes titays. What. Then we the player have no control we just click on.:cautious: needs a rape tag. yes I said it.
 

robrize2169

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Oct 8, 2022
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perving on Tiffany aside, she is becoming interested in the mc and now that she has been told he is cheating on her, that will probably drive her into the mc's bed and end up with her knocked up by him, since the brother shows zero interest in her. and of course, the mc will end up banging all her sister's too. and hopefully doesn't take too long to expose the rich asshole for his bj session with obviously not his wife. this is definately the kind of story i am interested in following. can't wait to see what happens next.
 
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Adhdclassic

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You know he hates his brother one of the main rules you live with women show them proper respect. You walkthough the door the first thing you do is basically assault his wife. The one person who has your back even though she is doing it for your mother. God what a douche.
 
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Dark Silence

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Jul 17, 2021
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Played a bit of this and it's basically a kinetic novel. There are no actual choices in this to gain points, no real variables in the code. I get this is a .1 release, but there should something in it to set the path/s of this game. Nope, none of that at all. From the get go, we are placed in a situation where the big brother is an asshole and the only girl we've met so far, is in love with the big brother. That in itself is a red flag for me. It's not meant for someone like me. So, I wish the dev well on this.
 

CevirmenCocuk

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Oct 2, 2024
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The game is truly beautiful, with all its character details and story, giving it an 8 out of 10. However, this deduction isn't due to any bugs or anything like that, but rather to the fact that it's a prologue and short. I'm a game translator, and I can see how many words and characters there are in the game. The game is approximately 17-18K words long, and while it's ideal for a prologue, it feels like they abandoned the game halfway through. It's also fun that the creator broke the fourth wall. In my opinion, the game isn't simple; you'll understand how much effort and time went into it. So, from a translator's perspective, I'd like you to give it a try, because it deserves it. Respectfully.
 

waldo404

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Dec 5, 2020
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hum.
feels like a little boy's wet dream - MC is an asshole regularly on fantasy power-trips, wrapped in a whiny little shit presented as a victim of big bad bro. (also, did I say he was an asshole? special mention to the best/childhood friend, that gets finger-raped in her sleep after telling him she's not interested, then banged as soon as she's drunk and vulnerable ('cause BBB big bad bro ofc, despite MC pretty much doing the *exact* same).
The text is written like an actual (wannabe) novel - lengthy, telling you what the renders display, what the characters feel (or are supposed to, if they were blank dolls with no past nor emotions), and all in the past tense - not a good experience, at all.
The scenes are lifeless, unimaginative, and the lewds are only MC power trips (lasting about in 3 renders). the LI are pretty hot (all babes ofc, only the 'mom' have some age markers - probably because she's supposed to be sick (and pretty chill about it)).

Looks like the LI have some depth though so I imagine the plan is the write the MC as a little b**** that grows into a powerful macho man... but nah, yuk already.
PS: don't get me wrong, there are worst VN out there, and loads (regarding scenarii-writing/renders/lewds quality aspects only, not content because that's a matter of opinion)
 
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