A gallery might be nice, but hasn't been exactly top of the "to do" list.
As to the sex scenes, I can't think of anything you missed off the top of my head.
But let me say again that there's no "right way" to play.
The idea is that there will ultimately be numerous possible ways to go after the various girls. There may come a time when certain options exclude others. There will certainly be variations depending on the character profile and how that gets shaped by the way you act in the game. So some girls may actually be more attracted to MC if he acts like a dick, other won't respond well to that.
Take Ashley, for example...
Early in the game, there are frequent internet outages that encourage you to go to the coffee shop.
If you tip decently, you build some rapport with Ashley and she may suggest the Sugar Daddy thing.
On the other hand that might not happen but you might think of her for the legal assistant role.
In that case, maybe you'll be able to segue that into a relationship.
Okay...
Mallory. When I first created the game I said something like "You don't get to shag your mom or your sisters" - leading to a lot of joking around about what a terrible game it would be, and that there would have to be a hidden option to make the relationships incestuous.
So the whole milking thing was me trying to be humorous - I quite literally asked myself "what crazy fetish can I incorporate?" as a riposte to the incest thing.
It's not supposed to be the WHOLE THING. It's a humorous side-story that kind of snowballed. Some people don't care for it. Bummer. Go find another incest game then.
Again, this is my first game. Lots has changed since I started it. I originally thought the money would be more important. Right now, it's really not. But I can absolutely forsee a time when MC will have to consider whether he can support yet another concubine, or car payment. Maybe there'll be a scandal over LactoMax that will result in a crash in ASI's stock price.
It's also pretty hard to run out of energy at this stage, but add a few more girls to the mix and that could become a problem. What if MC can't manage the company because he's constantly exhausted?
The game is just about a year old. There are things I planned from the start that I still haven't got around to, and there are any number of things in there that really weren't in the original plan.
Lois was supposed to be no more significant than some of the receptionists are now - she was intended to be the flirty secretary and that was it. Now she's right up there with Kari in terms of her place in MCs world.
Anyway, I'm waffling. I should really get organized and post more of this stuff to the blog.