Just binged this in one evening. With two focuses. Well done.
I was just a smidge sad that the submissive option for Lois wasbasically a variant of the slutty side-chick, when the same could have also been in a more trusting relationship.
Oh, and I've seen the odd mention of similar errors before, but when tilly asks about her uniform in the back of the plane, there's another one of them s_offset errors, where the available options don't cover higher than 2.
Also, I'm not sure if I can reproduce it, but I seem to remember there was a case of Kari saying she get a DNA test kit, then later, she said it was faulty and she got a new one, then later again saying it was faulty and she got a new one as if the first time never happened, and then there never, ever being a result.
Not sure how that happened, maybe due to the forced value change to get past tilly?