togs-games assorted notes and quibbles below
I think I've dealt with all the typos and omissions you mentioned.
I've lowered the threshold for the Lois path you mentioned, but just a notch (from 90 to 80), as I don't want to make it a given at this stage.
I had planned to hold back with Lois for a bit longer, but the London trip just seemed like too good an opportunity to pass up.
Despite the particular path you mentioned, I'm very fond of Lois and I don't want to waste her, if that makes sense.
That said, I don't think the possible outcomes are out of character for her, especially now we've clarified some of her history.
Lois has a bit of an inferiority complex when it comes to her femininity - she thinks she can't compete, especially with women that are naturally large-breasted. That stokes her jealousy a little.
I would say again that I am keen to avoid roadblocks, so there absolutely could be alternative triggers for certain things later.
As to the other receptionists, I plan to start introducing their storylines in week 7 (we're in week six right now). I'm not sure I will get to them all in one release, but fingers crossed.
So no - you won't need to go back.