This game is incredibly solid. There's really nothing I would consider bad about it, though I believe there are some things that could be improved upon.
But we'll get to that, first come the pros. The renders are great, the characters are all distinct and the world is sufficiently unique and deep to keep me interested. I'm especially fond of the animations, they are excellently done and portray actual love-making, with caresses and kisses and little details that make the characters feel alive.
Now, things that could improve. First is the pacing: it's quite jarring and fast, not really giving us enough time to settle into the story. I understand wanting to skip to the plot beats, but having some more downtime with the characters develops them more and lets us get attached to them.
Second is the grammar: while there are no major mistakes, it's clear that whoever wrote the dialogue isn't exactly fluent in conversational English. Don't get me wrong, it's leagues above 95% of this entire website, but there are certain turns of phrase and word placements that come off as unnatural. Not exactly a pressing issue, since everything is perfectly legible, but something to consider.
Anything I didn't mention like music or sounds or UI was perfectly serviceable, I'm not one to focus on those aspects but if they were in any way egregious I would've pointed them out.
To conclude, this is a pretty stellar VN that is worth a read.
But we'll get to that, first come the pros. The renders are great, the characters are all distinct and the world is sufficiently unique and deep to keep me interested. I'm especially fond of the animations, they are excellently done and portray actual love-making, with caresses and kisses and little details that make the characters feel alive.
Now, things that could improve. First is the pacing: it's quite jarring and fast, not really giving us enough time to settle into the story. I understand wanting to skip to the plot beats, but having some more downtime with the characters develops them more and lets us get attached to them.
Second is the grammar: while there are no major mistakes, it's clear that whoever wrote the dialogue isn't exactly fluent in conversational English. Don't get me wrong, it's leagues above 95% of this entire website, but there are certain turns of phrase and word placements that come off as unnatural. Not exactly a pressing issue, since everything is perfectly legible, but something to consider.
Anything I didn't mention like music or sounds or UI was perfectly serviceable, I'm not one to focus on those aspects but if they were in any way egregious I would've pointed them out.
To conclude, this is a pretty stellar VN that is worth a read.