ProofreadingRUS

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Aug 10, 2019
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Could use a little proofreading here and there but otherwise passable.
Fixing where it says Bre all the time instead of Bro.
How did the maid escape from that woman's clutches?
Maybe she got fired before it got ugly and we won't know what happened to the husband.
The only thing I don't like about this game is the virus.
As soon as it starts knocking on their door, it's going to mess up the game.
As soon as one of them gets infected.
Points are not gonna matter that is. Meaning all that work for nothing.
And I don't get that Aiko path either path he takes, he's gonna get his ass kicked.
I also don't get, is Aiko adopted? Isn't Aiko a Japanese name?
Very funny game, but also very strange paths.
 

McWoodz

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Oct 28, 2018
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Could use a little proofreading here and there but otherwise passable.
Fixing where it says Bre all the time instead of Bro.
How did the maid escape from that woman's clutches?
Maybe she got fired before it got ugly and we won't know what happened to the husband.
The only thing I don't like about this game is the virus.
As soon as it starts knocking on their door, it's going to mess up the game.
As soon as one of them gets infected.
Points are not gonna matter that is. Meaning all that work for nothing.
And I don't get that Aiko path either path he takes, he's gonna get his ass kicked.
I also don't get, is Aiko adopted? Isn't Aiko a Japanese name?
Very funny game, but also very strange paths.
There's no preset relationships so if it says Bre instead of Bro that must've been a typo on your end.
Not sure if that can be changed with a save editor :unsure: Possibly
Although never explicitly mentioned I'm pretty sure the maid was just fired but we'll perhaps find out more about that later.
Points will always matter, don't worry about that.
As for Aiko - it is a Japanese name. I'm told she took more after her father landlord as a baby than the other 2 did so was given a Japanese name as their father landlord was part Japanese. At least that's what I heard...
 

Spawn420

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Oct 24, 2018
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I love this so far!
really enjoying to see the same models from the other game with slight changes to looks but keeping most of their personality.
looking forward to see how the game progresses. :giggle:
 

Cernunnos.

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May 27, 2017
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Interesting so far, wish there was a way to ignore Karishma harder, and at this point I've come to the conclusion, after playing both his games and all three paths in Allison, that this dev REALLY love big booties. Honestly surprised he's not named MC Hammer.

On a side note did he get a discount for using the same names as his other game?

On a further note wtf is up with Aiko's paths? Cause from their names I don't want either...
 
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