Ren'Py The Sin Within [v0.5.0] [CigarRex]

[chiefkilic]

I played it once and had to give up about halfway through because the hint system is extremely bad. I don't have any information in the hint system anymore, but I'm missing about half of it in the gallery and the game repeats itself. I have no idea if I've missed something, but I've talked to all the characters and there's nothing new in the hint system. It would be good if there were more information. How is the player supposed to know where to find which person at which time of day or whether you have to talk to someone else beforehand. I also missed the shopping scene because I went to the resort with my family beforehand. That kind of information should be in a good hint system, or you should get a warning, something that tells me as a player, hey, be careful if you play the event, you're missing out on too much content when it comes to lesbian crap, but that's a matter of taste, not mine when it comes to NTR. You can put up with it even if the women are more into pussy than cock. I think if the game gets a good hint system, I'll still play it. I'll test it in its current state. Unfortunately, I have to say it might be better to make the MC a woman. Then the game would make more sense. And since the dev is more into watching women having sex than being active himself, that would be the perfect solution, wouldn't it? I wish you the best of luck with your game and hope you'll be successful. Translated by Google

 

[CigarRex]

I played it once and had to give up about halfway through because the hint system is extremely bad. I don't have any information in the hint system anymore, but I'm missing about half of it in the gallery and the game repeats itself. I have no idea if I've missed something, but I've talked to all the characters and there's nothing new in the hint system. It would be good if there were more information. How is the player supposed to know where to find which person at which time of day or whether you have to talk to someone else beforehand. I also missed the shopping scene because I went to the resort with my family beforehand. That kind of information should be in a good hint system, or you should get a warning, something that tells me as a player, hey, be careful if you play the event, you're missing out on too much content when it comes to lesbian crap, but that's a matter of taste, not mine when it comes to NTR. You can put up with it even if the women are more into pussy than cock. I think if the game gets a good hint system, I'll still play it. I'll test it in its current state. Unfortunately, I have to say it might be better to make the MC a woman. Then the game would make more sense. And since the dev is more into watching women having sex than being active himself, that would be the perfect solution, wouldn't it? I wish you the best of luck with your game and hope you'll be successful. Translated by Google

 

[sukupuku21]

I played it once and had to give up about halfway through because the hint system is extremely bad. I don't have any information in the hint system anymore, but I'm missing about half of it in the gallery and the game repeats itself. I have no idea if I've missed something, but I've talked to all the characters and there's nothing new in the hint system. It would be good if there were more information. How is the player supposed to know where to find which person at which time of day or whether you have to talk to someone else beforehand. I also missed the shopping scene because I went to the resort with my family beforehand. That kind of information should be in a good hint system, or you should get a warning, something that tells me as a player, hey, be careful if you play the event, you're missing out on too much content when it comes to lesbian crap, but that's a matter of taste, not mine when it comes to NTR. You can put up with it even if the women are more into pussy than cock. I think if the game gets a good hint system, I'll still play it. I'll test it in its current state. Unfortunately, I have to say it might be better to make the MC a woman. Then the game would make more sense. And since the dev is more into watching women having sex than being active himself, that would be the perfect solution, wouldn't it? I wish you the best of luck with your game and hope you'll be successful. Translated by Google

bro you stay constantly complaining, why are you still here if you hate the game so much? no one cares

 

[HeroXxXD]

How do I unlock all of the extra scenes? Still figuring out how to get the event from Rose Downfall to Gyaru frenzy and Akira

I Just played this game for the first time and I really in to it 1:30 hrs in the game and I really like it, even if it is sandbox, i dont mind, once in a while I like my brain to be more active when playing.

Hopefully someone will reply and help me finish the Extra scenes

 

[CigarRex]

How do I unlock all of the extra scenes? Still figuring out how to get the event from Rose Downfall to Gyaru frenzy and Akira

I Just played this game for the first time and I really in to it 1:30 hrs in the game and I really like it, even if it is sandbox, i dont mind, once in a while I like my brain to be more active when playing.

Hopefully someone will reply and help me finish the Extra scenes

Find a job first - Either through LoveZone (preferrably!), or through the Cafeteria. With the money you earn, you can buy access to the Extras in the purple special menu in the Phone (they'll be accessed through the gallery).

 

[FluffyBunnyCarrotStick]

Enjoying the game so far, though personally I'm not a huge fan of most of the body proportions of the girls. (Some of them are comically large and that kind of takes me out of the experience.) One of my biggest gripes is I would like to see some kind of tag/notification on the girls in the contacts list that shows they have content available. Endlessly clicking around through the time cycles on each day just to figure out if a girl has extra/new content is tedious and unenjoyable (a common plague of sandbox style games). Otherwise, the story is interesting and engaging. Just hope for more polish in the future. GL!

 

[CigarRex]

Enjoying the game so far, though personally I'm not a huge fan of most of the body proportions of the girls. (Some of them are comically large and that kind of takes me out of the experience.) One of my biggest gripes is I would like to see some kind of tag/notification on the girls in the contacts list that shows they have content available. Endlessly clicking around through the time cycles on each day just to figure out if a girl has extra/new content is tedious and unenjoyable (a common plague of sandbox style games). Otherwise, the story is interesting and engaging. Just hope for more polish in the future. GL!

I plan on adding a "quest log" next update, since progress will become a bit more involved from now on. But it'll only indicate steps to take on actual implemented story-lines per-character instead of including every scene in existence (the Gallery is supposed to be your guide for that).

The checkmarks (red/yellow/green) are in place exactly to indicate what interactions lead to new stuff or not.

Maybe it'll be easy to add an "unlocked scene count" in the Contacts App to indicate how many are left

 

[ProfDoc]

[...] One of my biggest gripes is I would like to see some kind of tag/notification on the girls in the contacts list that shows they have content available. Endlessly clicking around through the time cycles on each day just to figure out if a girl has extra/new content is tedious and unenjoyable (a common plague of sandbox style games). Otherwise, the story is interesting and engaging. Just hope for more polish in the future. GL!

I plan on adding a "quest log" next update, since progress will become a bit more involved from now on. But it'll only indicate steps to take on actual implemented story-lines per-character instead of including every scene in existence (the Gallery is supposed to be your guide for that).

The checkmarks (red/yellow/green) are in place exactly to indicate what interactions lead to new stuff or not.

While the issue brought up by FBCS is easily solved by sifting through the gallery, I agree that it may become a bit tedious as it fills up with each updates. Maybe some simple at-a-glance completion indicator in the gallery would suffice.

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The main issue being making sure it actualises after a game update and doesn't mark a character as completed despite them receiving new scenes.

If you want to make your task harder by making it relative to a save instead of global, then putting the indicator on the profiles screen seems more relevant.

 

[CigarRex]

While the issue brought up by FBCS is easily solved by sifting through the gallery, I agree that it may become a bit tedious as it fills up with each updates. Maybe some simple at-a-glance completion indicator in the gallery would suffice.

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The main issue being making sure it actualises after a game update and doesn't mark a character as completed despite them receiving new scenes.

If you want to make your task harder by making it relative to a save instead of global, then putting the indicator on the profiles screen seems more relevant.

Cool mockup!
I'll try coding up a few things right now since these are all good ideas

- X/Y Scenes Unlocked counter for gallery and/or contacts app
- Filter to show All/Locked/Unlocked gallery entries

These counters should all use the actual data from the gallery itself, so it will always be up-to date and require no maintenance.

 

[Sonico]

Not even into the nightclub and loving the humor on this one. The bouncer.
And the Punk Queen

 

[CigarRex]

While the issue brought up by FBCS is easily solved by sifting through the gallery, I agree that it may become a bit tedious as it fills up with each updates. Maybe some simple at-a-glance completion indicator in the gallery would suffice.

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The main issue being making sure it actualises after a game update and doesn't mark a character as completed despite them receiving new scenes.

If you want to make your task harder by making it relative to a save instead of global, then putting the indicator on the profiles screen seems more relevant.

I think the idea for a straight-up progress bar is neat, actually.

- The numbers show the "Unlocked Scenes / Total Scenes" ratio (already working fine)
- The buttons filter between [A]LL, [L]OCKED, [U ] NLOCKED scenes (still trying to get it to work)
- The bars represent progress on each gallery (only applied to ALL and Prologue in this image)
The bar turns blue when you unlock all the scenes.

Edit:

Sweet!

 

[Sonico]

What does one do after bringing a NPC to 100 Lust?

 

[CigarRex]

What does one do after bringing a NPC to 100 Lust?

There is no Level Up for any girl at the moment, but reaching Love 100 unlocks a few new scenes for some of them (particularly the family girls)

 

[FluffyBunnyCarrotStick]

Great work so far. Thanks for the reply and looking at this. I like your game and want it to succeed for you. These types of games can get really complex and convoluted, so keeping things streamlined and user friendly to respect the player's time are a huge bonus.

 

[Sonico]

There is no Level Up for any girl at the moment, but reaching Love 100 unlocks a few new scenes for some of them (particularly the family girls)

Good to know.

 

[CigarRex]

Good to know.

Getting the family to Love 100 opens up the resort by the way, which is massive & really important!

 

[Sonico]

Getting the family to Love 100 opens up the resort by the way, which is massive & really important!

VERY good to know since i hadn't even tried it yet.

Lotte is Sloth, right?

 

[loidiuii]

CigarRex Dude, do you have any news on itch.io? I saw there are some games left.

 

[CigarRex]

CigarRex Dude, do you have any news on itch.io? I saw there are some games left.

Yep. I'm banned. Even after removing all possible payment options from the page & leaving it as a 100% free game, they don't give a fuck. Neither do I tbh

 

[sukupuku21]

Yep. I'm banned. Even after removing all possible payment options from the page & leaving it as a 100% free game, they don't give a fuck. Neither do I tbh

Just like they did my boy Ruykiru dirty. Fuck itch.io