Ren'Py The Sin Within [v0.5.0] [CigarRex]

[CigarRex]

Got another one, this time from Alice.

First time you go to see her at the coffee shop and they are back in the office.

The line from Alice:

"Mom!!! She's... luring him?"

Nothing wrong with the dialogue line, but Alice doesn't have (thoughts) with her name signifying it's being said out loud instead of in her head like I expect was intended for the line.

Nice catch! It's intentional, though. Alice always thinks out loud.

 

[ProfDoc]

Small bug(?) report :
If you choose to take pictures of the book instead of reading it, you don't unlock the Lizard King entry in the contact app even after seeing it in the gallery within your playthrough.

Maybe it is the intended behavior but then I don't see the point of choosing the read later option instead of now since the scene where you give it to Greed implies Lust read it anyway ?

Anyway, played the entire update and I eagerly wait for what you're cooking next !

 

[CigarRex]

Small bug(?) report :
If you choose to take pictures of the book instead of reading it, you don't unlock the Lizard King entry in the contact app even after seeing it in the gallery within your playthrough.

Maybe it is the intended behavior but then I don't see the point of choosing the read later option instead of now since the scene where you give it to Greed implies Lust read it anyway ?

Anyway, played the entire update and I eagerly wait for what you're cooking next !

True. A little oversight on my end

 

[Carrot3]

Don't worry utterdrong, I just scoured the whole school for an in game month found her in 6 locations (including your 2), no clue if this is all of them since nothing happened in my save yet. I think there's some kind of randomization choosing what days she does and doesn't show up since I can't see any pattern to what days she shows up compared to the ones she doesn't

1)at night in the park outside the school
2)The Library during the evening (Like lonnnno)
3)The first floor bathroom during the afternoon
4)The infirmary during the morning (this one's easy to miss she's on the couch)
5)The locker room during the morning (feet)
6)The first floor corridor during the evening (she's in a locker)

She seems to only appear when "you wake up on the wrong side of the bed" and if you interact with her, she's gone for the rest of the day.
Weird that she doesn't appear anywhere during the noon.

 

[ArhraCole]

Minor typo in the bunny pet extra scene.

Line form Vivan:
"How the might have fallen!"

might should be mighty for that line.

 

[acalmuser]

this genuinely has to be the greatest vn to ever exist holy fucking shit

Spoiler: i feel far in and this character reveal was a surprise for me so i don't want to ruin it for others either

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I LOVE THIS GAME AND THIS DEV FUCK YEA

 

[ArhraCole]

Extra Scene Abbie's Homework:

Vivian asking:
"Don't you leave near Downtown?"

Should be live instead of leave.

Also

"I would pay you a ride back but..."

would read better as "I would pay for your ride back but..."